Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR0VW2AZ4STN41ESFAEJSJ

Run Details

Duration:
44.9s
Cost:
$0.048414
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The transition was not a door, but a tear in the fabric of the world. One moment, Aurora Carter was standing in the damp, grey chill of a London alleyway, the grit of the city beneath her boots. The next, the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt flared with a heat that seared against her sternum, breathing a crimson rhythm against her skin. She stepped forward, bracing herself for the familiar drop in stomach pressure that accompanied an elevator ride, but the sensation was far more violent. It was a physical wrenching, as if the universe were a wet sheet being wrung out, and she was the water. When the vertigo released her, the air had changed. Gone was the smell of diesel and rain. In its place hung a scent so thick it coated the back of her throat—overripe figs, roasted meats, and the cloying sweetness of fermentation. Aurora blinked, her bright blue eyes struggling to adjust to a luminosity that seemed to emanate from everywhere and nowhere at once. "Steady, child," a voice murmured, sounding like wind rustling through dry leaves. Aurora’s hand flew to the hilt of the dagger at her hip. The moonsilver handle of the Fae-forged blade was ice-cold, a grounding contrast to the humid warmth pressing against her. She looked up. The sky was the wrong color. There was no blue, no clouds, only a vast, infinite dome of warm amber, motionless and heavy. It cast everything in a sepia wash, making the world look like an old photograph preserved in honey. "Where are we?" Aurora asked, though the tight knot in her chest suggested she already knew the answer. Isolde Varga drifted past her. The seer looked as she always did—ethereal, her waist-length silver hair shimmering with its own internal light. She wore a dress of pale gossip that seemed to weave itself from the mist. As she moved across the loamy, purplish soil, her bare feet left absolutely no impression. "The Garden of Excess," Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes scanning the horizon. "The larder of Prince Belphegor. You know it as Dymas." To Aurora’s left, a shadow detached itself from the base of a twisted tree. It elongated, stretching upward until it formed a humanoid silhouette roughly six feet tall. Two points of violet light ignited where eyes should have been. "It is... bright," Nyx whispered. The Shade’s voice was barely audible, a friction of sound that shivered down Aurora’s spine. Nyx shifted, their form turning incorporeal for a second, smoke caught in a draft, before solidifying again. "The shadows here are weak. They do not want to hide me." "Stay close," Aurora commanded, her voice regaining the cool, professional edge she used when navigating a difficult delivery route or staring down a grandiose law professor. She scanned the perimeter. "If this is Hell, it’s better landscaped than I expected." It was an understatement. They stood at the edge of a sprawling vineyard that defied logic. The vines were thick as pythons, gnarly and black, twisting around trellises made of what looked like bleached bone. Hanging from them were clusters of grapes the size of apples, their skins so taut with juice they looked ready to burst at a whisper. Aurora took a step forward, her boot sinking slightly into the soft earth. She felt a phantom itch on her left wrist, right over the small crescent scar she’d had since childhood. It was a warning system she had learned not to ignore. "Don't touch the fruit," Isolde warned, though she didn't look back. She was walking toward a break in the vines, her movement fluid, almost underwater. "In the realm of Gluttony, consumption is a two-way street. To eat is to invite being eaten." "Noted," Aurora muttered. She kept her hand on the hilt of the leaf-shaped dagger. They moved deeper into the vineyard. The silence here was heavy, lacking the ambient hum of insects or birds. The only sound was the crunch of Aurora’s boots and the soft, rhythmic thrumming of the Heartstone against her chest. It pulsed in time with the environment, as if the artifact recognized its place of origin. As they walked, the scale of the place began to warp Aurora’s sense of perspective. Flowers the size of dinner plates bloomed in the undergrowth, their petals shivering as the trio passed. They smelled of spun sugar and roasting pork—a nauseating combination that made Aurora’s stomach growl and churn simultaneously. "Do you feel it?" Nyx drifted closer to Aurora, their shadowy form condensing into something harder, sharper. " The hunger. It is not yours." "I feel it," Aurora said through gritted teeth. It wasn't just hunger; it was a profound, hollow ache, a desire to fill a void she hadn't known existed until five minutes ago. She grasped the silver chain of the pendant, letting the metal bite into her palm. "It’s the atmosphere. It’s psychotropic." "It is simply the truth of this place," Isolde corrected. She stopped before a massive archway formed by two intertwining trees. The bark was pale and smooth, resembling human skin. "Dymas does not lie about what it wants. It only lies about the cost." Beyond the archway, the vineyard gave way to a ruin. It might have once been a banquet hall, open to the amber sky. immense stone pillars, carved with reliefs of feasting giants and overflowing chalices, lay toppled in the grass. But the ruin wasn't empty. In the center of the clearing stood a long stone table, miraculously intact. It was piled high with a feast that had calcified into stone over centuries—petrified boars, fossilized breads, wine that had turned to red crystal in the goblets. "Ancient," Aurora whispered, stepping into the clearing. The air here was cooler, stagnant. "I thought this realm was active. This looks... abandoned." "Time is a river in your world, Aurora," Isolde said, her voice drifting like smoke. "Here, it is a swamp. Pools of stagnation stick beside rushing rapids. This hall has been forgotten by the Prince, but not by the land." Nyx moved toward the table, their violet eyes narrowing. The Shade extended a hand—fingers lengthening into tendrils of darkness—toward a stone platter. "Careful, Shadow," Isolde said sharply. Nyx pulled back. "There is something beneath the table." Aurora drew the Fae blade. The moonsilver rang softly as it left the sheath, glowing with a pale, milky luminescence that cut through the amber haze. She approached the stone slab, her heart hammering against her ribs. She was used to aggressive drunks at Silas’s bar or the occasional shady character on a delivery run, not supernatural archeology. She crouched, peering into the gloom beneath the table. At first, it looked like tangled roots. Then, the roots shifted. Aurora scrambled back, breathless. "Jesus." Integrated into the base of the table, half-absorbed by the stone and the earth, were figures. Humanoid figures. They were twisted, mouths open in silent screams of eternal hunger, their limbs fused with the furniture they supported. They weren't statues. They were the foundation. "Helbound souls," Nyx observed, dispassionate but wary. They hovered over Aurora’s shoulder. "Contracted. They served the feast, and when they could serve no more, they became the furniture." Aurora stood up, wiping her hands on her jeans, feeling a sudden, violent revulsion. The beauty of the amber sky and the lush vines suddenly looked like makeup on a corpse. "We need to keep moving. We’re here for the anchor point, not a history lesson." "The anchor lies ahead," Isolde said, pointing a slender finger past the ruins. "The vegetation grows thicker there. The Veil is thin." "Wait," Aurora said. She tilted her head. The silence of the vineyard had been broken. From the dense, sugary vegetation ahead, a sound emerged. It was wet and heavy, like a cleaver chopping through meat. *Thwack. Squelch. Thwack.* Nyx dissolved into a puddle of ink on the ground, sliding forward across the stones to scout, becoming nothing more than a trick of the light. Aurora tightened her grip on the dagger. The cut on her wrist from years ago throbbed, a phantom memory of pain. She looked at Isolde. "You said you can't lie. What is making that noise?" Isolde’s lavender eyes met Aurora’s blue ones. There was no fear in the oracle's face, only a terrible, ancient sadness. "The gardener," Isolde said softly. "And he is pruning." The amber light overhead seemed to darken, shifting from gold to the color of a bruised peach. The chopping sound stopped. Then, the heavy scent of blood—fresh, metallic, and sharp—cut through the smell of rotting fruit. "Move," Aurora ordered, abandoning the stealth of the shadow for the speed of the desperate. "Nyx, fall back. We’re leaving this clearing." They pushed forward, past the petrified feast and the screaming table, diving into the overgrown unknown of the amber world, the silence behind them now filled with the sound of something massive dragging itself through the vines.
created_at"2026-02-17T02:49:56.524712+00:00" 2/17/2026, 2:49:56 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
94.1176% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Isolde said sharply [sharply]"
1"Isolde said softly [softly]"
66.7553% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1504
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
3"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.7553% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1504
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"churn"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"profound"
count1
4
word"navigating"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"churn"
2"throbbed"
3"profound"
4"navigating"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences106
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences123
matches
0"making that noise"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean31.72
std16.4
cv0.517
sampleLengths
062
145
29
354
412
534
641
718
852
923
1039
1149
1240
1360
1443
1542
1614
1755
1850
1924
2052
2144
2245
2340
2422
2540
2622
275
289
2958
309
3111
325
3344
3428
3546
3622
3715
3823
3926
4035
4120
429
4321
4415
4522
4637
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences106
matches
0"being wrung"
1"was piled"
2"was used"
3"been broken"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs208
matches
0"was standing"
1"was walking"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1272
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.029874213836477988
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.0110062893081761
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean12.12
std6.86
cv0.566
sampleLengths
015
123
224
324
421
59
68
724
822
912
1012
1119
123
136
1417
1518
1618
175
1817
1915
2015
2113
2210
2314
2414
2511
265
2715
2817
2912
3026
314
3210
334
3412
3519
3625
3713
3819
3911
4011
4114
4217
433
4411
456
4613
4720
4816
4915
57.7236% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3902439024390244
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners48
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount15
fancyTags
0"a voice murmured, sounding like wind rustling through dry leaves (murmur, sound like rustle)"
1"Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes scanning the horizon (say, scan)"
2"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
3"Aurora commanded, her voice regaining the cool, professional edge she used when navigating a difficult delivery route or staring down a grandiose law professor (command, regain use navigate staring down)"
4"Isolde warned, though she didn't look back (warn, does not look back)"
5"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
6"Aurora said through gritted teeth (say grit)"
7"Isolde corrected (correct)"
8"Aurora whispered, stepping into the clearing (whisper, step)"
9"Isolde said, her voice drifting like smoke (say, like)"
10"Isolde said sharply (say sharply)"
11"Nyx observed, dispassionate but wary (observe)"
12"Isolde said, pointing a slender finger past the ruins (say, point)"
13"Isolde said softly (say softly)"
14"Aurora ordered, abandoning the stealth of the shadow for the speed of the desperate (order, abandon)"
87.3736%