| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1416 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 11.72% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1416 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "stark" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "porcelain" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "calculating" | | 14 | "navigating" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "stomach" | | 17 | "fractured" | | 18 | "comforting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | matches | | |
| 91.10% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 138 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1415 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "It is a trap, Nyx corrected." | | 1 | "The souls contracted to this place, Nyx said." | | 2 | "Run, Nyx said." | | 3 | "Follow the shadow, Nyx replied." | | 4 | "We found it, Aurora said, wiping sweat from her brow." | | 5 | "Then we better move, she said, standing up." |
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| 82.77% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 1413 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.34 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | London | 4 | | Veil | 1 | | Aurora | 19 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Dymas | 2 | | Fae | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Welsh | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Empress" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Veil" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Belphegor" | | 6 | "Welsh" |
| | places | | 0 | "Golden" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Earth" | | 3 | "Dymas" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.828 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 56.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a wound in the world" | | 1 | "felt like walking through a curtain of" | | 2 | "sounded like grinding stones" | | 3 | "looked like a tear in the amber fabric of" |
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| 58.66% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.413 | | wordCount | 1415 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the fire and brimstone of sermon illustrations, but a landscape of excess" | | 1 | "not with a weapon, but with his hands, fingers elongated" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 33.69 | | std | 24.87 | | cv | 0.738 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 66 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 102 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 67 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 83 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 39 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 76 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 87 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 247 | | matches | | 0 | "was approaching" | | 1 | "was recovering" |
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| 80.75% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 138 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "Up close, the grapes weren't just fruit; they whispered." | | 1 | "It didn't crunch; it squelched, releasing a scent like blood oranges." | | 2 | "The pendant burned hotter against her skin, guiding her toward a fluctuation in the air ahead—a way out, or perhaps deeper in." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1219 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.030352748154224774 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005742411812961444 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 138 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 138 | | mean | 10.25 | | std | 5.93 | | cv | 0.579 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 51.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.37681159420289856 | | totalSentences | 138 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 77.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the distance, she" | | 1 | "Instead, she grabbed a cluster" | | 2 | "Then we better move, she" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 68.06% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed in time with" | | 1 | "She took a breath, filling" | | 2 | "Her hair lifted on her" | | 3 | "It was the scent of" | | 4 | "She opened her eyes." | | 5 | "They were no longer in" | | 6 | "They stood on a ridge" | | 7 | "She rubbed it, trying to" | | 8 | "It's beautiful, she said, the" | | 9 | "It is a trap, Nyx" | | 10 | "Their form shifted, edges blurring" | | 11 | "They began to descend the" | | 12 | "She watched the vines as" | | 13 | "She leaned in, catching a" | | 14 | "She stepped back, her boot" | | 15 | "It didn't crunch; it squelched," | | 16 | "They tend the gardens." | | 17 | "They cook the feasts." | | 18 | "They consume until they burst," | | 19 | "She looked toward the center" |
| | ratio | 0.38 | |
| 37.52% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 109 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the alleyway" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stopped, her hand" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant was hot," | | 3 | "It pulsed in time with" | | 4 | "Nyx coalesced from the gloom" | | 5 | "The faint violet glow of" | | 6 | "The Veil shimmered before them," | | 7 | "Nyx's voice brushed against her" | | 8 | "Aurora tightened her grip on" | | 9 | "The Fae-forged blade was always" | | 10 | "She took a breath, filling" | | 11 | "Her hair lifted on her" | | 12 | "The pressure popped in her" | | 13 | "The stale grease of London" | | 14 | "It was the scent of" | | 15 | "She opened her eyes." | | 16 | "They were no longer in" | | 17 | "They stood on a ridge" | | 18 | "Vineyards stretched out in neat," | | 19 | "Dymas, Nyx whispered, the sound" |
| | ratio | 0.845 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "To anyone else passing the" | | 1 | "To Aurora, it looked like" | | 2 | "Before it decides to come" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 69.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant was hot, radiating a feverish warmth that seeped through her jacket and kissed her skin." | | 1 | "Nyx's voice brushed against her ear, sounding like dry leaves skittering over pavement." | | 2 | "They stood on a ridge overlooking a sprawling valley that defied the geography of Earth." | | 3 | "Vineyards stretched out in neat, manicured rows, but the vines were thick as tree trunks, heavy with grapes the size of plums that shimmered with an inner light…" | | 4 | "Beyond the vines, orchards bowed under the weight of fruit that looked too perfect, too vibrant, their colors saturated to the point of pain." | | 5 | "Dymas, Nyx whispered, the sound carrying on a wind that didn't touch Aurora's skin." | | 6 | "Tables were set outside on grand terraces, laden with platters of food that steamed in the amber air." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |