| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "they said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.525 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.048 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |
| 93.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1557 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 58.25% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1557 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "traced" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "resonated" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "shattered" | | 10 | "racing" | | 11 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.80% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1539 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1212 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.24 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Shade | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 3 | | Seer | 4 | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | Aurora | 15 | | Nyx | 8 | | Veil | 1 | | November | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Dymas | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Shade" | | 1 | "Seer" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.881 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "quite match the position it had held moments ago in Richmond Park proper" | | 1 | "as if listening to something neither Aurora nor Nyx could hear" | | 2 | "blue that seemed to sing, reds so deep they appeared almost black until she looked directly at them and they burst into brilliant crimson" | | 3 | "something between violet and gold, a blue that" | | 4 | "seemed somehow sharper more present" | | 5 | "quite a smile" | | 6 | "not quite music, not quite voice, but something that resonated in Aurora's chest like the deep note of a bell" | | 7 | "not quite voice, but something that resonated in Aurora's chest like the deep note of a bell" | | 8 | "vineyards that seemed to stretch into forever" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 6 | | per1kWords | 3.899 | | wordCount | 1539 | | matches | | 0 | "not the warning pulse she'd learned to recognize near Hel portals, but something different" | | 1 | "neither Aurora nor" | | 2 | "not ominous at all,\" Aurora muttered, but she followed anyway" | | 3 | "not the glowing canopy above but a sky full of unfamiliar stars" | | 4 | "not quite music, not quite voice, but something" | | 5 | "not quite voice, but something" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 36.64 | | std | 21.64 | | cv | 0.59 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 83 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 77 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 58 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 78 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 53 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 56 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 50 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 54 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 50 | | 35 | 35 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 48 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 71 | | 41 | 8 |
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| 97.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 198 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "was creating" | | 2 | "wasn't blocking" | | 3 | "were walking" | | 4 | "was racing" | | 5 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.163 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora traced her fingers along the nearest one, half-expecting the rough bark texture of oak, but finding instead something that felt almost like skin—warm and faintly yielding beneath her touch." | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant against her chest had gone cold—not the warning pulse she'd learned to recognize near Hel portals, but something different." | | 2 | "\"—depends on what is sought.\"" | | 3 | "Aurora had seen the Veil before—or rather, had learned to recognize its presence, that faint distortion like heat rising from summer pavement." | | 4 | "The wildflowers carpeting the grove blazed in shades she had no names for—something between violet and gold, a blue that seemed to sing, reds so deep they appeared almost black until she looked directly at them and they burst into brilliant crimson." | | 5 | "But the canopy wasn't blocking light—it was creating it, each leaf glowing with soft phosphorescence that shifted from silver to pale green to the soft pink of dawn." | | 6 | "Aurora had never seen them so clearly defined—the suggestion of features in that dark face, something that might have been cheekbones, the ghost of a mouth." | | 7 | "Nyx didn't answer, but their form flickered, and she caught a glimpse of something else beneath the shadow—a young man's face, hollow-cheeked and desperate, reaching toward light that slipped through his fingers." | | 8 | "The grass beneath her feet felt wrong—too soft, too yielding, as if she were walking on something living." | | 9 | "A sound rippled through the grove—not quite music, not quite voice, but something that resonated in Aurora's chest like the deep note of a bell." | | 10 | "Aurora saw Dymas first—the amber sky she'd only read about in texts she probably shouldn't have accessed, the sprawling vineyards that seemed to stretch into forever." | | 11 | "She saw herself—or a version of herself—standing at a threshold she didn't recognize." | | 12 | "And ahead—" | | 13 | "Someone had sent this to her—someone powerful enough to have access to artifacts from Hel's realm of Gluttony, someone who had chosen her specifically for reasons she still didn't understand." | | 14 | "Time moved differently here—Isolde had warned her of that before they entered." | | 15 | "Instead, she memorized the grove—the impossible flowers, the glowing canopy, the pool that showed truths too heavy to carry." | | 16 | "Behind her, the wildflowers swayed in an unfelt wind, and the pool's surface rippled once more—showing reflections of paths not yet taken, futures not yet born, and a young woman with bright blue eyes who carried a piece of Hel's realm against her heart without knowing why." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 437 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 10 | | adverbRatio | 0.02288329519450801 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004576659038901602 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 14.8 | | std | 9.78 | | cv | 0.661 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 66.35% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4326923076923077 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 84.39% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it was gone, and" | | 1 | "Instead, she memorized the grove—the" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, tilting her head" | | 1 | "She'd come too far to" | | 2 | "They shouldn't have been blooming" | | 3 | "Their violet eyes widened." | | 4 | "they said, and their voice" | | 5 | "She stopped at the center" | | 6 | "She rubbed at it absently," | | 7 | "She saw herself—or a version" | | 8 | "they said quietly" | | 9 | "They needed to leave soon," | | 10 | "She nodded, but she didn't" | | 11 | "She had a feeling she" | | 12 | "she said to Isolde, to" | | 13 | "It would remember." |
| | ratio | 0.177 | |
| 29.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Aurora traced her fingers along" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered, their voice carrying" | | 3 | "The Shade's form rippled at" | | 4 | "Aurora pulled her hand back." | | 5 | "The Heartstone pendant against her" | | 6 | "A stillness, as if the" | | 7 | "Isolde moved ahead of them," | | 8 | "The Seer's silver hair caught" | | 9 | "She paused, tilting her head" | | 10 | "\"—depends on what is" | | 11 | "Aurora muttered, but she followed" | | 12 | "She'd come too far to" | | 13 | "The space between the standing" | | 14 | "Aurora had seen the Veil" | | 15 | "The air itself seemed to" | | 16 | "Color hit her first." | | 17 | "The wildflowers carpeting the grove" | | 18 | "They shouldn't have been blooming" | | 19 | "The grove stretched before them," |
| | ratio | 0.861 | |
| 63.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Before whatever was coming found" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora traced her fingers along the nearest one, half-expecting the rough bark texture of oak, but finding instead something that felt almost like skin—warm and…" | | 1 | "The wildflowers carpeting the grove blazed in shades she had no names for—something between violet and gold, a blue that seemed to sing, reds so deep they appea…" | | 2 | "They shouldn't have been blooming together, shouldn't have been blooming at all in late November, but here they spread in impossible profusion, their petals tre…" | | 3 | "But the canopy wasn't blocking light—it was creating it, each leaf glowing with soft phosphorescence that shifted from silver to pale green to the soft pink of …" | | 4 | "Aurora had never seen them so clearly defined—the suggestion of features in that dark face, something that might have been cheekbones, the ghost of a mouth." | | 5 | "The grass beneath her feet felt wrong—too soft, too yielding, as if she were walking on something living." | | 6 | "A sound rippled through the grove—not quite music, not quite voice, but something that resonated in Aurora's chest like the deep note of a bell." | | 7 | "Aurora saw Dymas first—the amber sky she'd only read about in texts she probably shouldn't have accessed, the sprawling vineyards that seemed to stretch into fo…" | | 8 | "Someone had sent this to her—someone powerful enough to have access to artifacts from Hel's realm of Gluttony, someone who had chosen her specifically for reaso…" | | 9 | "Instead, she memorized the grove—the impossible flowers, the glowing canopy, the pool that showed truths too heavy to carry." | | 10 | "Behind her, the wildflowers swayed in an unfelt wind, and the pool's surface rippled once more—showing reflections of paths not yet taken, futures not yet born,…" |
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| 5.95% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde moved, her bare feet making no impression in the damp grass" | | 1 | "Isolde crouched, her lavender eyes reflecting those impossible stars" | | 2 | "Isolde's hand broke, and the images shattered into a thousand rippling fragments" | | 3 | "Isolde began, her silver hair trailing behind her like mist" | | 4 | "Isolde replied, not turning back" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.325 | | leniency | 0.65 | | rawRatio | 0.308 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |