| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1272 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1272 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "amidst" | | 3 | "stark" | | 4 | "wavered" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "resolve" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "crystalline" | | 11 | "silk" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "perfect" | | 14 | "echo" | | 15 | "traced" | | 16 | "chaotic" | | 17 | "symphony" | | 18 | "marble" | | 19 | "pulsed" | | 20 | "weight" | | 21 | "profound" | | 22 | "porcelain" | | 23 | "chill" | | 24 | "predator" | | 25 | "scanned" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 14.45% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 57 | | totalWords | 1265 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "This place is hungry," | | 1 | "It starves for sensation." | | 2 | "Memory," | | 3 | "The fruit grows from the memory of a taste, a perfect meal, a moment of satisfaction. To eat it is to consume an echo. It will not nourish. It will only make you want more." | | 4 | "Look closer," | | 5 | "It is not life. It is consumption. They are devouring themselves." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.95% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1227 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.14 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 14 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Isolde | 6 | | Dymas | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Shade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Shade" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.93 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 52.60% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "stones that seemed to hum with a low energy" | | 1 | "looked like carved bone" | | 2 | "looked like dark, bubbling wine flowed th" |
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| 41.90% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.581 | | wordCount | 1265 | | matches | | 0 | "not in her ear, but inside her head, a rustle of dry leaves" | | 1 | "not the gnarled green and brown things she knew from home, but thick, pulsing vines of crimson" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 48.65 | | std | 28.83 | | cv | 0.593 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 107 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 98 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 77 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 66 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 113 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 87 | | 24 | 52 | | 25 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | |
| 98.99% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 198 | | matches | | 0 | "was intoxicating" | | 1 | "weren’t just eating" | | 2 | "were biting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.055 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hit Rory first—thick and warm, heavy with the scent of roasted honey and some unknown, overripe fruit." | | 1 | "The moonsilver was cold, a sliver of ice in the oppressive warmth of this place—Dymas." | | 2 | "They passed a hand—a suggestion of fingers made from shadow—through one of the glowing fruits." | | 3 | "With the music came the sound of laughter—high and unrestrained, teetering on the edge of hysteria." | | 4 | "Throngs of beings—some vaguely human, others monstrously not—crowded the plazas and balconies." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1242 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "heavy, pear-shaped fruits" |
| | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.026570048309178744 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008051529790660225 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 13.9 | | std | 7.8 | | cv | 0.561 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 58.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3956043956043956 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 92.73% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "It coated her tongue, a" | | 1 | "She took a step forward," | | 2 | "She left no footprints, a" | | 3 | "They seemed to drink the" | | 4 | "*It starves for sensation.*" | | 5 | "They moved deeper, following a" | | 6 | "Her mouth watered, an involuntary," | | 7 | "They passed a hand—a suggestion" | | 8 | "It didn’t disturb the pear," | | 9 | "It will not nourish." | | 10 | "It will only make you" | | 11 | "She tore her gaze away" | | 12 | "It began to widen, curving" | | 13 | "It was a chaotic symphony" | | 14 | "It was a carnival, a" | | 15 | "They stoked fires, carried immense" | | 16 | "*It is not life." | | 17 | "It is consumption." | | 18 | "They are devouring themselves.*" | | 19 | "They were biting at their" |
| | ratio | 0.318 | |
| 67.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hit Rory first—thick" | | 1 | "It coated her tongue, a" | | 2 | "She took a step forward," | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant, tucked beneath" | | 4 | "Rory looked over at the" | | 5 | "Isolde stood serene amidst the" | | 6 | "She left no footprints, a" | | 7 | "Nyx’s form wavered, a humanoid" | | 8 | "They seemed to drink the" | | 9 | "*This place is hungry,* Nyx’s" | | 10 | "*It starves for sensation.*" | | 11 | "Rory’s hand strayed to her" | | 12 | "The moonsilver was cold, a" | | 13 | "A corner of Hel itself." | | 14 | "The thought should have made" | | 15 | "They moved deeper, following a" | | 16 | "The fruit hanging from their" | | 17 | "The smell was intoxicating, a" | | 18 | "Rory saw a low-hanging branch," | | 19 | "Her mouth watered, an involuntary," |
| | ratio | 0.784 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "To Rory’s other side, shadow" | | 1 | "To their left, an orchard" | | 2 | "To eat it is to" | | 3 | "Even from this distance, Rory" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "It coated her tongue, a cloying sweetness that made the back of her throat ache." | | 1 | "She took a step forward, her boot sinking into turf that was less like grass and more like plush, emerald velvet." | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant, tucked beneath her shirt, pressed a steady, insistent heat against her skin, a frantic pulse that matched the thrumming in her own veins…" | | 3 | "They seemed to drink the amber light, their edges sharpening for a moment before softening again." | | 4 | "They moved deeper, following a path paved with smooth, milky stones that seemed to hum with a low energy." | | 5 | "The fruit hanging from their branches was a marvel: clusters of small, crystalline globes that chimed faintly when a breeze stirred them, and heavy, pear-shaped…" | | 6 | "It was a chaotic symphony of stringed instruments and manic percussion, a tune that snagged at the rhythm of her heart and tried to speed it up." | | 7 | "It was a place of infinite indulgence that had collapsed into infinite self-destruction." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes fixed on Rory’s hand" | | 1 | "Rory said, her voice quiet" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |