Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR1CNQ1AMHMC75D5Z3QHBW

Run Details

Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.003700
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted like old rain and metal, as if the city itself forgot to breathe and exhaled in a sigh of soot and secrets. The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden stretched into a lungful of darkness, its bones exposed by the moon that slid through a broken grill of concrete and iron. A damp draft tugged at the corners of a dozen whispering stalls, and scent of resin and wax clung to the air, stubborn as smoke. The Veil Market had moved again, as it does with the 11th hour of the lunar cycle, slipping from one hollow to the next, a rumor you could walk into with your eyes open or with them shut and still feel the tug of something unseen. Harlow Quinn stepped from the stairwell as if stepping onto a parade ground. She moved with the crisp economy of a person who had learned to measure risk in heartbeats and blink rates. Her hair, threaded with peppered gray, lay close to her scalp; the brown of her eyes did not waver from what she intended to do. The left wrist wore a watch once pristine, now worn down in places by years of habit and the small abrasions that come from counting seconds on the move. She wore a black coat that carried rainwater in its shoulder blades and a chilly certainty that she would find what she sought, or manufacture it if she must. The market did not announce itself with bells. It began with the soft chime of a sign that turned over, a stall that winked into life with a whisper of runes painted too faint to read. The guards—if one might call them guards—had a rigidity that suggested they were more witnesses than protectors. They wore jackets dyed the color of damp slate, and their eyes moved with a policeman’s caution and a mystic’s disdain for things not explained by memory. The bone token, a small carved disk that looked like the last gift a bone-carver would give to a friend, rested in Harlow’s palm. It felt warm and wrong in a way that suggested it mattered more than the surface. She pressed the token to a narrow aperture embedded in a slatted panel, and the air along the seam yielded with a sigh, as if the station itself preferred to keep its quiet horrors inside a rib cage of stone. Past the gate, a market woke with a low, living glow. Lamps hung like suspended meteors, their light throwing glints of green across skin and glass. Vendors lounged behind their stalls, trading in trinkets that hummed with a low, almost musical energy, and information that tasted like secrets worth more than any coin. The atmosphere was thick and intimate, a place where strangers walked with the sense that they were stepping into a private theatre where everyone knew the lines but no one would dare speak them aloud. The crime scene was not far from the midpoint, where a corridor opened into a larger chamber that had once served as something like a service hall, now repurposed into a grander stage for barter of halves and truths. A body lay still on the floor, a man perhaps in his early forties, his clothes neat as if he had dressed for a funeral that never occurred. One hand lay palm up, the other curled as if he had clutched at something just out of reach. The eyes were closed, or perhaps not closed so much as sorted away, as if someone had decided not to allow them the courtesy of looking at what lay beyond. The first thing Harlow noticed, with the clinical calm of eighteen years on the job, was how clean the floor was around him. No blood spattered, no smear that would suggest a struggle with a desperate quickness. Instead there was a circle of dust on the ground, like a ring carved into a surface that had not seen dust in years, a ring precise enough to make a magnet feel jealous. A stall’s lamp spilled a pale light across the corpse’s chest, revealing a pattern of faint abrasions that did not bleed but refused to go away, as if something had brushed him with a hand that did not belong to any human body. The second thing was the absence of any obvious weapon. No knife, no blunt object, no puncture that might explain the way the skin had marked and then unmarked itself, as though the body’s appearance had been edited postmortem. The third thing was the silence around him, a hush so complete it seemed to hold its breath even as the market thrummed with the steady murmur of other patrons bargaining for ash and breath. A shadow moved at the far end of the corridor—the silhouette of a person who knew this place as though it had grown inside their lungs. Eva Kowalski stepped forward, the round glasses catching the dim light and sending back a small, precise bloom of reflection. Her hair—curly red and stubborn—was tucked behind her ears in a way that suggested she was about to pull something from her satchel, something that might explain how the night worked when human hands could not. Eva’s satchel looked full of books and not entirely of things one would carry into a place that wore a wall of rigged sigils like a cloak. The leather carried the musk of old papers and a dozen tiny experiments in little glass bottles that hummed softly when she moved. She wore freckles like constellations scattered across a pale, freckled complexion, the kind of face that looked back at you with a mischief that never quite left her eyes. She leaned in, eyes narrowing not with fear but with a scholar’s hunger. “Hard evidence isn’t always the truth,” Eva said, almost to herself, but the words came to Harlow as something that felt like weather turning. Her gaze did not rest on the corpse so much as on the space between it and the stall behind him, where a glass-topped table displayed a row of charms and small glass jars painted with labels that had once been in a language nobody used anymore but the Market pretended to understand. She tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, a nervous habit that had become a way to steady herself when the world moved at the pace of a whispering crowd. Harlow didn’t smile. She scanned the scene with the careful sweep of a field officer who had learned early that what you didn’t notice would come back to bite you. Her voice was low, a seamstress’s voice, precise and unembarrassed by emotion. “Glass container near his left hand,” she said. “No tremor in the glass, no breakage. If someone attacked him with an object, the glass stayed intact, which means either the killer didn’t plan to leave a weapon behind or—more likely—the killer didn’t want the scene to look like a crime at all.” Eva’s eyes brightened, not with fear but with the spark of a riddle turning corners. “Or the glass isn’t glass,” she replied. “It’s something else—some artifact that would seem normal to a Market vendor but not to a police officer who hasn’t learned to listen to what the Market says in whispers.” Harlow’s gaze dropped to the body again. The man’s chest showed faint, parallel lines that looked almost like they had been carved by a candle’s edge, not by steel. They were shallow, not wounds from a blade but more like marks left by heat or smoke—perhaps even by a sigil laid upon the skin to bind or bend something within him. She pressed the back of her gloved hand to the man’s cheek, found it cool, and then straightened her shoulders. She didn’t move the body, didn’t disturb the man’s posture any more than necessary, but she did press for more: a motive, a pattern, a thread that could be pulled elsewhere. “Bag of threads,” Eva muttered, almost under her breath. She opened the satchel—an old, worn leather thing that looked as though it had traveled more miles than its owner had—and pulled out a small, foxed notebook, a magnifying glass, and a handful of cards painted with sigils and different languages. She set the notebook on a vendor’s table, as if inviting the table to bear witness to what she believed would follow. “This could be a ritual homicide,” she said, and the phrase sat lightly on the Market’s atmosphere, like a coin that refused to drop to the floor. Harlow turned a slow circle, letting her eyes take in more of the space that had quietly become a stage. The Market’s patrons moved with an economy of motion, exchanging coins for objects and glances for secrets. A vendor here offered a vial that supposedly captured rain; a buyer there asked for a token that would grant access to an underground room where time slowed to a crawl. The price for each thing felt individually arranged, as though the Market negotiated each transaction as if it were negotiating a life. The body’s surroundings bore the language of a trap. A circle of powder lay on the floor beneath the corpse, white as bone but not bone’s color—more like powdered ash from some plant that should not exist in a London alley. It formed a ring that wasn’t perfect; a hand’s breadth in diameter, a margin that suggested someone had stood in the center and traced a ring with solemn care. Inside that ring, the air seemed heavier, heavier as if the space held a secret the rest of the Market might lean toward but never fully admit. “Whose token is that over there?” Harlow asked, nodding toward an empty spot where a bone token rested on a stall’s counter, alone and unclaimed. It looked like something that could belong to any entrant, yet its presence here suggested someone had entered or exited through a method that involved more invasive control than simple admission. Eva leaned closer to the token, her breath creating a slight fog on the glassy surface of the display. “If you’re asking about the token’s origin,” she said, “it could have traveled from anywhere along the Market’s routes. The token’s bone, the sigil’s ink—these things are portable. They’re meant to be passed, not hoarded.” She tapped the token with a gloved finger. “Look at the edge, see the slight notch here? It suggests a custom cut, perhaps for this gate’s particular mechanism.” Harlow’s eyes narrowed, not in suspicion of Eva but in recognition of a clue layered behind Eva’s words. She stepped closer to the table and peered at the glass container that had initially drawn her gaze. Inside the container, suspended in a clear resin, drifted something that looked almost like a seed or a seed-like thing, but with a faint, almost pulse-like tremor inside it. The item didn’t have a label; it hadn’t needed one in the Market’s language of value. Eva’s notebook opened on the table near the container, and the writing grew still as if the page itself had paused to listen. “The seed of a thing that grows in heat and silence,” Eva whispered, almost to herself. Then she looked up at Harlow with the unspoken question of whether she should continue to speak in riddles or reveal a piece of the truth. Her mouth pressed into a line and then loosened; she set the notebook down and spoke plainly, as if she were speaking to a child who could not quite believe in magic. “Sometimes, Detective, the Market’s bodies are more like vessels for a ritual than living bodies. This one might have been chosen not for who he is but for what he represents. He could have held or carried something that the Market’s owners wanted—an object with a price beyond mortal currency.” She gestured toward the body with the tip of her gloved finger, then paused. “And the circle of powder isn’t a trap laid by a killer so much as a boundary, a way to keep something in or out. If the killer intended to move the corpse away, that boundary would act as a kind of net—keeping the process contained within a space that the Market understands.” The thought settled between them like a coin flipping in the air: the Market itself might be the custodian of a physical rift, a portal that opened only when certain conditions were met, in accordance with the Market’s own logic of exchange and departure. And if that was true, the crime wasn’t simply a homicide; it was an act designed to lure the law into complicity with a ritual that the Market’s patrons would understand, but the police might never fully decode. Harlow stepped away from the table and moved toward the corridor’s deeper shadow, where the air grew cooler and the walls seemed to lean in as if listening. She hoped to glimpse the Market’s larger pattern, the way its rooms shifted to reveal or conceal what someone wanted hidden. She found herself studying the wall where sigils had been etched in pale chalk, their shapes almost too complex for the human mind to parse in a fleeting moment. In the corner, a map hung on an improvised nail, showing a rough circle of the Market’s current location and a string connecting the circle to a line that wound like a snake toward a section of the tunnel that the guards had not bothered to search. “The compass,” Eva murmured, as if the word might summon the thing. She fumbled in her satchel and drew out a small brass device—the Veil Compass, its casing a small brass compass with the face etched in protective sigils, the needle pale and sharp as a needle’s edge. The patina spoke of age and craft, the verdigris a living mark of a hand that had not rested easy for a long time. Eva held it up, letting its needle tremble in place, as though listening to the unseen. “The needle points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal,” Eva whispered, as if reciting a fact from a well-worn manual, though the manual was one she kept in her heart rather than on paper. The needle did tremble, and then it began to quiver in a slow, deliberate manner that suggested it was no ordinary object reacting to a change in air or temperature. It pointed not at a wall or a door but along the floor, toward a seam that bisected the room and led into a lower corridor, where the Market’s whispers rose into a higher pitch, as if the space itself had learned to listen to a different kind of conversation. Harlow’s breath slowed. The Market’s pulse sounded louder here, a low thrumming that seemed to come from the very stones. The body lay where a line between two stalls might have once existed—a line that now ran with new meaning, as if it traced the invisible boundary that Eva had spoken of. The line’s rhetoric was clear: someone wanted the corpse to be found here, and the Market obliged by offering a scene that spoke more about the act of performing a crime than about the crime itself. “Who would benefit by this?” Harlow asked, though she already knew the answer was not straightforward. The wound marks, if they were truly wounds, could be a kind of signature—someone’s way of marking the victim’s association with a hidden group or a crime the Market’s patrons would understand as a transaction of souls rather than bodies. Eva’s gaze returned to Harlow with a mix of awe and resolve. “The Market isn’t just a place to buy or sell objects. It’s a ledger, Harlow. It records who owes what to whom in a language that mortals aren’t meant to decipher, not because the information is dangerous but because it’s too slow to translate into ordinary terms. If a crime is an attempt to rewrite a ledger, you’ll find the ledger there.” She paused, then added more softly, “‘Clique’ is a word that comes to mind, but we must be careful with it. The word carries weight, especially in this atmosphere, where every act is a trade and every secret has a price.” The two stood in silence for a long moment, listening to a soft rustle of cloth and the faint whisper of a vendor who swore, in a voice that could be mistaken for a grandmother’s, that the Market would do no one a wrong. The words felt hollow, but the sentiment was not entirely false. The Market’s economy—of goods, of information, of people who navigated its corridors with the ease of someone who had learned to count on unseen hands to guide them—was a living thing, and it could be cruel to those who forgot it wore a living heart. “We’re missing something obvious,” Harlow said, not daring to say aloud the thing she should know but feared to acknowledge. She stepped closer to the body again, bending at the knee to examine the ring of powder on the floor, to study the faint line of marks on the man’s chest, to look for anything else that might betray a motive, a ritual, a pattern. “The boundary,” Eva said softly, almost to the corpse as if invoking it, then to Harlow. “If this ring is a ritual boundary, it suggests someone moved the victim in and out of a space that isn’t simply physical. It could be a portal—or a trap to catch someone who would try to cross it for the wrong reasons.” Harlow’s eyes snapped to the corner where a small panel had been left ajar, a space in the wall that looked no different from an old closet door except for the faint glitter of metal at its edge. The panel’s interior glowed with a pale blue light, faint enough to be mistaken for a reflection. The Veil Compass’s needle quivered in Eva’s hand, pointing directly toward the panel, and the faint blue glow pulsed with it as if answering a summons. “The rift,” Eva breathed. “It’s not wide enough to swallow a man whole, but it could swallow a life if the right conditions were met. And the condition is not natural. It’s the Market’s condition—the timing of the move, the tokens, the sigils.” Harlow rose, her jaw set. Her partner DS Morris—three years gone—had fallen to something that felt like this, a blur of occult factors that had no business in a normal police file. The murder of a partner, the unexplained collapse of a case, the sense that the world was not only grey but a shade of something else altogether. She could feel the old ache in her chest, the memory of a night when a door had opened and the air inside had darkened with a presence no one could name, a presence that had then vanished as quickly as it had appeared. She pushed the memory away with a professional’s stubbornness, and spoke to Eva with purpose. “We’re not far from a rift, then,” she said. “And someone used it to stage a crime that looks like a normal homicide but isn’t. We need to map the Market’s current route, find where the tokens come from, and see who knew this space would be open tonight.” Eva nodded, already turning her attention to the more practical task of cataloging what the Market was offering as potential evidence. She opened her satchel again and drew from it a stack of cards that bore the sigils of the Market’s own alphabet—sigils that the human eye could not always read without a context. She laid several of them out on the floor in a careful pattern, forming a rough circle that matched the powder ring on the ground, and then connected the circle with a line to the panel’s edge, where the blue light glowed most strongly. “What you’re seeing here is an improvised map,” she said, tracing a line with a gloved finger. “The circle marks a boundary the killer wanted to draw. The line to the panel marks a route—one that leads to a pocket of the Market that the police might not routinely search.” Harlow studied the pattern with the discipline she had learned in the academy and then in the field. The map—the crude, improvised map—seemed to link the crime scene to a specific sequence within the Market’s ongoing relocation. If the Market moved, then those who hunted within it would have to adapt, and those who profited from that hunt would move as well. Her eyes swept along a stall line that bordered the wall behind the body. There was a stall selling small, bottled light; a stall selling maps that glowed faintly with an inner pulse; a stall with jars that contained tiny storms, their lid seals etched with protective sigils. The Market’s energy felt focused in that direction, as if the rift lay beyond the corridor’s bend, behind a door that wasn’t really a door but a threshold only certain people could cross. The door’s existence meant someone—someone who understood the Market’s language and its rules—had planned this. “People who know the Market’s moves would know where to hide a thing,” Harlow said, more to the air than to Eva, though Eva heard and nodded as if she heard it in the wind rather than the room. “If a stolen object is here tonight, it would be something of value to the Market: something that would fetch a price among scholars, scavengers, and members of a certain network.” Eva’s lips pressed into a thin line, the kind of line that belongs to a person who has learned to see beyond the obvious and still hold the ground beneath their feet. She slid the Veil Compass into her bag with care, as though it were a fragile relic rather than a tool she might need again in the future. The needle had settled into a poised stillness, then shifted back to tremble, as if the compass had decided that its job here was not yet finished. “Quinn,” Eva said with a touch of gravity that matched the seriousness of their surroundings, “you know the Market’s habit of moving every full moon. Tonight is one of those nights. The move itself is dangerous because it resets the space’s energy. But it also creates a window, a liminal moment, during which a person could be made to vanish without leaving a trace in the ordinary world. The body here could be the Market’s attempt to demonstrate capability, or it could be a message to someone who understands that language.” Harlow listened without interrupting, letting Eva’s interpretation sink in. Then she set her jaw and looked toward the stallline again, toward the doorless corridor that led deeper into the Market’s network of tunnels. The night’s noise swelled and ebbed around them—the murmur of a vendor haggling, the soft clink of coin, the distant creak of a door’s hinge, and the odd, almost sacred hush that hung over the more secret corners of the Market. She spoke softly, aloud enough for Eva to hear, not for anyone else to listen in. “If a thief sought to poison the Market’s narrative with a ritual, they’d want witnesses to misinterpret what’s happening. The more we push to rational explanations, the more we risk missing the point of the crime’s design.” Eva set her notebook aside and looked straight into Harlow’s eyes—an attempt to anchor the other woman with a memory of a time when certainty had felt more common than mystery. “Then we do not push,” she said gently. “We observe. We catalog. We test each assumption until the Market’s own logic reveals a flaw in our theories.” Harlow’s face did not soften, but her stance shifted, the body turning from a case to a puzzle she could navigate with the right pieces. She forced herself to breathe evenly, to hold the calm that came from years of training and the memory of a partner who had walked into something unknowable and never returned the same way. “Show me the move,” she ordered, though Eva could only show what the Market allowed a non-initiated observer to see, which was never quite everything. Eva stepped closer to the blue-lit panel, her breath fogging lightly on the surface. She pressed her palm flat against the metal, and for a heartbeat the blue glow intensified as if answering a question asked aloud by someone who understood the Market’s language far better than a stranger could. “Here,” Eva said, pointing to a seam that ran along the length of the panel, obscured by a coat of dust that looked almost ceremonial in the glow. “If the Market is relocating, it’s because the seam must open to reveal a passage—the passage calls to those who can hear the Market’s pulse and respond with the correct tokens, the correct sigils, and the correct intent. The victim’s presence here is a breadcrumb, not a final clue. The real trail leads deeper into the tunnel, toward a room where the Market stores its most dangerous and most valuable objects.” Harlow considered this, then turned and scanned the chamber again. The moving crowd—curious, careful, and unwilling to admit how little they understood—was still passing through, a slow river of bodies and breath. Her mind ran through a list of explanations, each one potentially dangerous to the city and to those who had to live in it. If a “clique” existed in this world—a word Eva used but with caution—there would be a code of exchange, a way of dealing in power through the Market’s borders. Those who knew the Market’s moves could slip a body into a room that could be accessed only by those who bore the proper tokens, those who could read the signs in the night. It was a dangerous hypothesis, but not outside the realm of possibility given Harlow’s own history and the kinds of cases that had fractured the edges of reality in ways that felt like a fever dream come to life. She stepped away from the panel and faced Eva again, their faces a careful distance apart that reflected the distance they both needed to maintain from the supernatural threads they had to pull. “Two branches,” she said, deliberate and clear. “One is the murder itself—a ritual, perhaps. The other is the Market’s relocation—the reason this crime landed in a place where it could be misread as a stock question instead of a supernatural sequence. We follow both.” Eva nodded, her expression taut with resolve. She grabbed her satchel and slid a hand into it, drawing forth a sealed envelope of parchment she had been saving for a moment like this. She handed it to Harlow with the quiet intensity of someone delivering a weapon, not a piece of paper. The parchment bore an emblem—an angular rune—the same emblem that adorned several of the Market’s sigils. It felt oddly personal and intimate, the kind of thing that whispered of a story about power held in trust, a trust that could be betrayed as easily as a promise broken. “The envelope contains the Market’s public ledger for this move,” Eva explained. “It’s not complete, of course; the Market does not reveal all of its trades to outsiders. But it will show the pattern of who has something to gain from this moment, who would have the motive to stage something dramatic in order to snatch attention away from a quieter crime, and who matches the kind of energy that this boundary demands.” Harlow accepted the parchment with a measured touch, as if she were handling a weapon that required careful calibration before it could be used. She scanned the symbol and then turned her gaze toward the tunnel beyond, toward the unknown corridor that lay behind the blue glow. The Veil Compass, saved by Eva’s unspoken understanding of what to do with it, lay in her pocket, a small, stubborn companion that already seemed to hum with energy. She paused, letting the Market’s atmosphere settle into something she could interpret rather than fear. She looked at Eva, at the way the young occult researcher’s face carried the gravity of someone who had learned to carry truths that others refused to see. The moment felt heavy with the weight of a city’s unspoken stories, a city that lived in the crosses between daylight and magic and crime, a city that rarely told its most difficult truths in any reasonable time. “Let’s map the move,” Harlow said at last, the phrase more command than request. She walked toward the blue-lit panel with a measured stride, stepping into the pocket of space where the line disappeared into a seam. The movement of the Market around them—the unseen doors sliding open and closed, the faint hum of power bundled in the walls—made sense here, to a mind that trusted nothing to chance and everything to a pattern. The City, her city, had always rewarded those who could see patterns where others saw only chaos. The Veil Market would do the rest, given time and the right kind of patience. Outside, the full moon burned bright enough to cast a pale silver thread through the Market’s interior, turning brass into something that glowed with quiet fire. The Market’s activity quickened, vendors moving with a new urgency, as if the place had drawn a breath and decided to exhale in a series of decisive movements. The compass’s needle steadied, then wavered, then settled toward a corridor that lay beyond the body’s reach, toward a door no one would admit even existed. “Caution remains the best tactic,” Eva said softly. “We’re dealing with an environment where truth is not the same as fact, and facts can be rearranged by those who know how the Market’s rules bend to fit a narrative.” Harlow did not reply with bravado or certainty. She simply let the phrase ride on her next breath, a quiet oath she would keep until she proved otherwise. She turned the observation into action: the two of them moved with the Market’s own rhythm, cataloging, noting, and listening for the subtle signs that would tell them what had been done here and why. The crime would demand more than a confession; it would demand comprehension—from those who could bear to watch the Market breathe and not break, from those who could see a door where a human eye could only glimpse a reflection in a silver surface. Harlow Quinn’s military precision tightened around the edges of the scene, making room for Eva Kowalski’s occult interpretation to enter, not conflict with it, but to clarify it enough to steer them toward a path that did not end in a mistake. And as the night drew its long breath, she understood something she hadn’t fully admitted in years: the Veil Market did not merely exist to barter in what people owned; it existed to barter in what people believed, in the trust they placed in the unseen. The crime here, if it was indeed a crime within a crime, aimed at teaching the Market a lesson it already knew—that power is most dangerous when it pretends to be invisible. And Harlow Quinn, with Eva at her side and the Veil Compass pinned to the memory of her own resolve, would not let the Market teach that lesson twice. She would watch it, and she would wait, and if the night demanded it, she would step through that door in the panel and take her first, careful step into the world that waited beyond the seam—the world where a token, a compass, and a boundary might lead to the truth, whether the truth preferred to wear a face or a mask.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount12
adverbTags
0"Eva said, almost to herself, but the words came to Harlow as something that felt like weather turning [almost like]"
1"Eva muttered, almost under her breath [almost]"
2"she said, and the phrase sat lightly on the Market’s atmosphere, like a coin that refused to drop to the floor [lightly]"
3"Eva whispered, almost to herself [almost]"
4"Eva whispered, as if reciting a fact from a well-worn manual, though the manual was one she kept in her heart rather than on paper [rather]"
5"She paused, then added more softly [then more softly]"
6"Eva said softly, almost to the corpse as if invoking it, then to Harlow [softly, almost then]"
7"Harlow said, more to the air than to Eva, though Eva heard and nodded as if she heard it in the wind rather than the room [more rather]"
8"she said gently [gently]"
9"she ordered, though Eva could only show what the Market allowed a non-initiated observer to see, which was never quite everything [only quite]"
10"Eva said, pointing to a seam that ran along the length of the panel, obscured by a coat of dust that looked almost ceremonial in the glow [almost]"
11"Eva said softly [softly]"
77.6411% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount5367
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count2
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count5
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"truly"
count1
6
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"lightly"
2"quickly"
3"softly"
4"really"
5"truly"
6"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.9147% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount5367
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"wavered"
count1
1
word"quivered"
count1
2
word"pristine"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count3
4
word"fractured"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"etched"
count3
7
word"navigate"
count1
8
word"navigated"
count1
highlights
0"wavered"
1"quivered"
2"pristine"
3"unspoken"
4"fractured"
5"weight"
6"etched"
7"navigate"
8"navigated"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences180
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences180
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
3"tends to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount5
totalSentences195
matches
0", that the"
1"decided that its"
2"understands that language"
3"knew—that power"
4"teach that lesson"
42.8178% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean87.13
std26.13
cv0.3
sampleLengths
0124
1116
2160
388
4116
5114
674
782
892
9108
1094
1152
12112
1399
1490
1597
1656
1782
18104
1974
20117
2182
22125
2388
24115
2588
2656
27115
28100
2965
3059
3181
3243
33118
3449
3598
3650
3762
3896
3970
4087
4191
4274
4353
4458
4559
4675
4799
4856
49102
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences180
matches
0"been edited"
1"was tucked"
2"been carved"
3"were met"
4"been etched"
5"been left"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs671
matches
0"were stepping"
1"were negotiating"
2"were speaking"
3"was offering"
4"were handling"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount4381
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount156
adverbRatio0.03560830860534125
lyAdverbCount44
lyAdverbRatio0.010043369093814198
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences195
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences195
mean27.26
std14.13
cv0.518
sampleLengths
025
128
225
346
413
520
625
729
829
98
1028
1117
1227
1324
1416
1540
1611
1715
1827
1935
2039
2128
2219
2330
2423
2514
2634
2743
2810
2929
3035
3126
3220
3336
3427
3523
3629
3713
3824
3953
4031
413
4227
4312
448
4544
4615
477
4830
497
37.1795% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.20512820512820512
totalSentences195
uniqueOpeners40
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags26
fancyCount19
fancyTags
0"Eva said, almost to herself, but the words came to Harlow as something that felt like weather turning (say, come feel like turn)"
1"Eva muttered, almost under her breath (mutter)"
2"she said, and the phrase sat lightly on the Market’s atmosphere, like a coin that refused to drop to the floor (say, sit lightly like refuse drop)"
3"she said, She tapped the token with a gloved finger (say, tap glove)"
4"Eva whispered, almost to herself (whisper)"
5"Eva murmured, as if the word might summon the thing (murmur, summon)"
6"Eva whispered, as if reciting a fact from a well-worn manual, though the manual was one she kept in her heart rather than on paper (whisper, recite be keep in)"
7"She paused, then added more softly (pause, add more softly)"
8"Harlow said, not daring to say aloud the thing she should know but feared to acknowledge (say, does not dare say know fear acknowledge)"
9"Eva said softly, almost to the corpse as if invoking it, then to Harlow (say softly, invoke)"
10"Eva breathed (breathe)"
11"she said, tracing a line with a gloved finger (say, trace glove)"
12"Harlow said, more to the air than to Eva, though Eva heard and nodded as if she heard it in the wind rather than the room (say, hear nod hear)"
13"Eva said with a touch of gravity that matched the seriousness of their surroundings (say match)"
14"she said gently (say gently)"
15"she ordered, though Eva could only show what the Market allowed a non-initiated observer to see, which was never quite everything (order, only show allow see, does not be never quite)"
16"Eva said, pointing to a seam that ran along the length of the panel, obscured by a coat of dust that looked almost ceremonial in the glow (say, point run obscure look almost)"
17"Eva explained (explain)"
18"Eva said softly (say softly)"
78.3267%