| 98.31% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 27 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Her voice cracked slightly [slightly]" | | 2 | "she said honestly [honestly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 59 | | tagDensity | 0.458 | | leniency | 0.915 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.102 | |
| 75.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1446 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.22% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1446 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "skipped a beat" | | count | 1 |
| | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "otherworldly" | | 3 | "intensity" | | 4 | "navigated" | | 5 | "skipped a beat" | | 6 | "eyebrow" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "echo" | | 12 | "down her spine" | | 13 | "traced" | | 14 | "unreadable" | | 15 | "shattered" | | 16 | "practiced ease" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "hung in the air" | | 1 | "sent a jolt through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1440 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 23 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Outside the window, London continued its endless bustle, oblivious to the small earthquake that had just shifted the gro…" |
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| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 1042 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.34 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Eva | 2 | | British | 1 | | Library | 1 | | Ptolemy | 5 | | Moreau | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | French | 1 | | Lucien | 14 | | Celtic | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Moreau" | | 4 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | 0 | "British" | | 1 | "Library" | | 2 | "Brick" | | 3 | "Lane" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.828 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1440 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.58% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "hated that he" | | 1 | "pretend that the happened, that she" |
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| 97.27% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 25.26 | | std | 12.39 | | cv | 0.49 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 65 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 49 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 40 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 49 | | 46 | 33 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 92.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "was slicked" | | 1 | "being seen" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 200 | | matches | | 0 | "was dozing" | | 1 | "was doing" | | 2 | "was falling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn't expected anyone—Eva was still at the British Library, and Ptolemy was dozing on the windowsill." | | 1 | "His platinum blond hair was slicked back, drawing attention to those unsettling eyes—one amber like whiskey catching light, the other black as a bottomless well." | | 2 | "As he passed her, the familiar scent of sandalwood and something else—something ancient and otherworldly—enveloped her." | | 3 | "The flat was as cluttered as ever—books stacked precarious heights, scrolls unfurled across every available surface, research notes pinned to the walls with yellowing tape." | | 4 | "It was partly why she'd ended things—how could she build a life with someone who kept such monumental secrets?" | | 5 | "\"The supernatural underworld is smaller than you think. Word travels.\" His voice was closer now; she hadn't heard him move." |
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| 87.93% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 703 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.04694167852062589 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015647226173541962 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 12.97 | | std | 7.21 | | cv | 0.555 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 51.05% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.36036036036036034 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 50.77% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn't expected anyone—Eva was" | | 1 | "His tailored charcoal suit was" | | 2 | "His platinum blond hair was" | | 3 | "he said, his voice carrying" | | 4 | "Her fingers tightened on the" | | 5 | "He shifted his weight, the" | | 6 | "She hesitated, then stepped back," | | 7 | "It was the same scent" | | 8 | "He turned to face her," | | 9 | "she said, moving toward the" | | 10 | "She turned to face him," | | 11 | "He took a step closer," | | 12 | "She hated that he was" | | 13 | "It was partly why she'd" | | 14 | "she said quietly" | | 15 | "Her voice cracked slightly" | | 16 | "His voice was barely above" | | 17 | "He reached out, his fingers" | | 18 | "She stepped back, breaking the" | | 19 | "she asked, her back still" |
| | ratio | 0.423 | |
| 24.10% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The deadbolts clanked open one" | | 1 | "The scent of spices from" | | 2 | "She hadn't expected anyone—Eva was" | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 4 | "His tailored charcoal suit was" | | 5 | "His platinum blond hair was" | | 6 | "he said, his voice carrying" | | 7 | "Her fingers tightened on the" | | 8 | "He shifted his weight, the" | | 9 | "She hesitated, then stepped back," | | 10 | "It was the same scent" | | 11 | "Ptolemy lifted his head, green" | | 12 | "The tabby cat arched his" | | 13 | "Lucien said, a ghost of" | | 14 | "Rory closed the door, engaging" | | 15 | "The flat was as cluttered" | | 16 | "Lucien navigated the small space" | | 17 | "He turned to face her," | | 18 | "Rory's hand instinctively went to" | | 19 | "Lucien's voice was soft, almost" |
| | ratio | 0.872 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could respond, Ptolemy" | | 1 | "Before she could respond, he" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 86.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "It was the same scent that had haunted her dreams for months after they'd parted ways." | | 1 | "Lucien smiled, a genuine smile that transformed his face from strikingly handsome to almost unbearably beautiful." | | 2 | "Outside the window, London continued its endless bustle, oblivious to the small earthquake that had just shifted the ground beneath her feet." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 27 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien said, a ghost of a smile playing on his lips" | | 1 | "He turned, his mismatched eyes searching her face" | | 2 | "He reached out, his fingers hovering near her cheek but not quite touching" | | 3 | "she asked, her back still to him" | | 4 | "she said, though the words lacked conviction" | | 5 | "Lucien raised, this time allowing his fingers to brush against her cheek" | | 6 | "he said, his hand resting on the doorknob" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he'd (would)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 59 | | tagDensity | 0.237 | | leniency | 0.475 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.068 | |