| 29.79% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Lucien said slowly [slowly]" | | 1 | "He turned back [back]" | | 2 | "Rory asked quietly [quietly]" | | 3 | "Lucien said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.468 | | leniency | 0.936 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.17 | |
| 86.79% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1514 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 70.28% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1514 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "intensity" | | 3 | "wavered" | | 4 | "charged" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "tension" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "sense of" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 63 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1524 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 26 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.62% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 954 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.47 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Thursday | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 6 | | Marseille | 1 | | Shoreditch | 1 | | Lucien | 13 | | Lucien-ness | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Lucien-ness" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Marseille" | | 2 | "Shoreditch" |
| | globalScore | 0.766 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 60.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like cologne and rain and the spec" | | 1 | "as if choosing each word with deliberate care" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.656 | | wordCount | 1524 | | matches | | 0 | "not my problem anymore,\" Rory said, but her voice wavered" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 33.87 | | std | 24.57 | | cv | 0.725 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 82 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 56 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 56 | | 14 | 53 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 82 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 46 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 94 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 66 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 64 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 45 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 48 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 49 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 59 | | 44 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 45.86% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "was moving" | | 1 | "was locking" | | 2 | "was making" | | 3 | "was managing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 92 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "The part that remembered how it had ended — the argument in his apartment in Shoreditch, the way his heterochromatic eyes had gone cold when she'd accused him of lying about his connections to the thing they'd been hunting." | | 1 | "The hallway air rushed in, carrying the ghost of curry spices from downstairs and something else — something that smelled like cologne and rain and the specific Lucien-ness she'd been trying not to think about for the past six weeks." | | 2 | "Not disheveled, never that — his suit was impeccable, not a thread out of place — but tired in the way that suggested he hadn't slept properly in days." | | 3 | "The way she'd hurt him — that was clear now, in the careful distance he maintained, in the formality that had replaced the ease that used to exist between them." | | 4 | "Rory could feel the crescent scar on her wrist tingling — a phantom ache from her childhood, triggered by tension." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 951 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03680336487907466 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013669821240799159 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 92 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 92 | | mean | 16.57 | | std | 12.23 | | cv | 0.738 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 41 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 31 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 34 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 56.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.391304347826087 | | totalSentences | 92 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 51.28% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 78.46% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd learned to be cautious" | | 1 | "She squinted through the glass" | | 2 | "His platinum hair was slightly" | | 3 | "She didn't open the door." | | 4 | "he called through the wood," | | 5 | "she muttered, unlatching the second" | | 6 | "He looked tired." | | 7 | "She locked the door behind" | | 8 | "He used her full name," | | 9 | "His cane made a soft" | | 10 | "It was a lie and" | | 11 | "His voice wasn't cruel, which" | | 12 | "he continued, moving to the" | | 13 | "He didn't look out at" | | 14 | "She'd spent those six weeks" | | 15 | "He turned back to her," | | 16 | "He trailed off, the words" | | 17 | "she said, the words tumbling" | | 18 | "She rubbed at it absently" | | 19 | "He'd always been attentive that" |
| | ratio | 0.354 | |
| 13.85% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half" | | 1 | "She'd learned to be cautious" | | 2 | "She squinted through the glass" | | 3 | "Lucien stood in the hallway" | | 4 | "His platinum hair was slightly" | | 5 | "Rory had learned to read" | | 6 | "She didn't open the door." | | 7 | "he called through the wood," | | 8 | "The part that remembered how" | | 9 | "The silence that followed, thick" | | 10 | "The bolt turned with a" | | 11 | "she muttered, unlatching the second" | | 12 | "Lucien agreed from the other" | | 13 | "The third bolt gave way," | | 14 | "The hallway air rushed in," | | 15 | "He looked tired." | | 16 | "The black of his left" | | 17 | "Rory said, but she stepped" | | 18 | "She locked the door behind" | | 19 | "Lucien said, leaning his cane" |
| | ratio | 0.892 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The part that remembered how it had ended — the argument in his apartment in Shoreditch, the way his heterochromatic eyes had gone cold when she'd accused him o…" | | 1 | "The hallway air rushed in, carrying the ghost of curry spices from downstairs and something else — something that smelled like cologne and rain and the specific…" | | 2 | "Ptolemy, Eva's tabby, had appeared in the kitchen doorway at the sound of his voice, regarding Lucien with the same suspicious intensity Rory was managing." | | 3 | "Ptolemy jumped up and pressed against her legs, offering cat-based comfort that felt inadequate to the moment." | | 4 | "The way she'd hurt him — that was clear now, in the careful distance he maintained, in the formality that had replaced the ease that used to exist between them." |
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| 11.36% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "he called, his Marseille accent clipping the words just slightly" | | 1 | "Rory said, but her voice wavered" | | 2 | "Lucien said slowly, as if choosing each word with deliberate care," | | 3 | "He trailed, the words catching somewhere behind his teeth" | | 4 | "she said, the words tumbling out before she could stop them" |
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| 64.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Lucien agreed (agree)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "he continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.298 | | leniency | 0.596 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.17 | |