| 57.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde instructed gently [gently]" | | 1 | "Isolde said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.56 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |
| 83.86% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1239 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1239 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "tapestry" | | 4 | "crystalline" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "beacon" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "crystal" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1226 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.04% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 1028 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.46 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 15 | | Isolde | 10 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Sound | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Empress" | | 4 | "Hel" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.77 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "blues that seemed to glow from within, pinks like the inside of shells" | | 1 | "something like petrichor and honey, with an" | | 2 | "seemed more present" | | 3 | "as if responding to the magical saturation of the place" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.816 | | wordCount | 1226 | | matches | | 0 | "not worn into the earth, but suggested by the arrangement of flowers, as if they parted p" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 36.06 | | std | 21.07 | | cv | 0.584 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 82 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 67 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 65 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 61 | | 23 | 65 | | 24 | 61 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "were humming" | | 1 | "was beginning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.174 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak standing stones loomed before them like ancient sentinels, their bark silvered with age and something else—something that caught the light wrong." | | 1 | "Nyx drifted closer, their form more solid than usual—almost human today, a silhouette of condensed shadow with those faintly glowing violet eyes." | | 2 | "She could feel it too—a thrumming in her chest that had nothing to do with nerves and everything to do with the Heartstone pendant hanging beneath her shirt." | | 3 | "The seer's feet didn't touch the ground as she moved toward the space between the stones; Aurora had stopped being surprised by that particular quirk three weeks ago." | | 4 | "It wasn't painful—there was a peculiar absence of sensation, as if she'd stepped into cotton." | | 5 | "Then—" | | 6 | "Not the muted sounds of Richmond Park—birds, distant traffic, the murmur of the city—but something richer." | | 7 | "Wildflowers bloomed in a tapestry of colors that didn't exist in the natural world—purples so deep they looked black, blues that seemed to glow from within, pinks like the inside of shells." | | 8 | "The sky—Aurora looked up and found it a twilight color, that luminous blue-grey of the hour before true dusk." | | 9 | "They didn't twinkle; they held steady, watching." | | 10 | "They reached out and touched one of the flowers—a bloom of impossible violet—and it chimed like a bell." | | 11 | "The flower didn't wilt at Nyx's touch; instead, it bloomed fuller, its petals unfurling with a soft crystalline sound." | | 12 | "A path revealed itself as she walked—not worn into the earth, but suggested by the arrangement of flowers, as if they parted politely to show her the way." | | 13 | "Trees emerged—ancient specimens that predated human civilization, their branches twisted into elegant spirals." | | 14 | "She knelt at its edge and found her reflection staring back—but younger somehow, or perhaps just lighter, as if some weight she carried had been momentarily lifted." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1015 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.03842364532019704 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012807881773399015 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 14.26 | | std | 7.09 | | cv | 0.498 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 28 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 72.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4418604651162791 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "They'd insisted on coming despite" | | 1 | "She could feel it too—a" | | 2 | "It had been growing warmer" | | 3 | "She stepped forward." | | 4 | "It wasn't painful—there was a" | | 5 | "They grew in deliberate patterns" | | 6 | "They didn't twinkle; they held" | | 7 | "She made herself inhale fully" | | 8 | "It filled her chest with" | | 9 | "They reached out and touched" | | 10 | "She'd been carrying the artifact" | | 11 | "They walked deeper still, and" | | 12 | "She knelt at its edge" | | 13 | "Her silver hair trailed across" | | 14 | "She smiled, sad and knowing" | | 15 | "She drew it out into" | | 16 | "They were keys of a" | | 17 | "She rose smoothly, her feet" | | 18 | "She had come seeking answers" |
| | ratio | 0.268 | |
| 9.30% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak standing stones loomed" | | 1 | "Aurora ran her fingertips across" | | 2 | "Isolde said from somewhere behind" | | 3 | "The half-Fae woman hadn't made" | | 4 | "Nyx drifted closer, their form" | | 5 | "They'd insisted on coming despite" | | 6 | "Nyx whispered, their voice carrying" | | 7 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 8 | "She could feel it too—a" | | 9 | "It had been growing warmer" | | 10 | "Isolde asked, though it wasn't" | | 11 | "The seer's feet didn't touch" | | 12 | "She stepped forward." | | 13 | "The moment her foot crossed" | | 14 | "It wasn't painful—there was a" | | 15 | "Colors drained from her peripheral" | | 16 | "Sound crashed back." | | 17 | "The air itself seemed to" | | 18 | "Aurora gasped and stumbled forward" | | 19 | "The clearing existed in impossible" |
| | ratio | 0.901 | |
| 70.42% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, it seemed, the place" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak standing stones loomed before them like ancient sentinels, their bark silvered with age and something else—something that caught the light wrong." | | 1 | "Aurora ran her fingertips across the nearest trunk and felt a faint vibration, as if the tree were humming at a frequency just beyond hearing." | | 2 | "She could feel it too—a thrumming in her chest that had nothing to do with nerves and everything to do with the Heartstone pendant hanging beneath her shirt." | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed in a tapestry of colors that didn't exist in the natural world—purples so deep they looked black, blues that seemed to glow from within, pin…" | | 4 | "Stars were already visible, precise and crystalline, arranged in constellations that made no earthly sense." | | 5 | "It filled her chest with a lightness that made her dizzy." | | 6 | "The flowers continued their impossible colors, but now they were sparser, as if the grove had wild places and cultivated ones." | | 7 | "She knelt at its edge and found her reflection staring back—but younger somehow, or perhaps just lighter, as if some weight she carried had been momentarily lif…" | | 8 | "Her silver hair trailed across her shoulders, and she moved with the grace of something that had walked through countless centuries." | | 9 | "The glow intensified as if responding to the magical saturation of the place." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde explained (explain)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.48 | | leniency | 0.96 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.16 | |