| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she asked sharply [sharply]" | | 1 | "he said softly [softly]" | | 2 | "Aurora snorted softly [softly]" | | 3 | "Lucien said quietly [quietly]" | | 4 | "he answered softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.345 | | leniency | 0.69 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.345 | |
| 63.02% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1217 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loosely" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "sharply" | | 3 | "lightly" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.83% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1217 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gleaming" | | 1 | "intensity" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "measured" | | 7 | "tinged" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "tension" | | 10 | "unspoken" | | 11 | "throb" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "reminder" | | 14 | "shimmered" | | 15 | "weight" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "clenched her fists" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1201 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 819 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.73 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Lucien | 6 | | Moreau | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Aurora | 3 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Cardiff" | | 1 | "Brick" | | 2 | "Lane" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "quite place" | | 1 | "looked like he’d stepped straight out of" | | 2 | "as if savoring the sound of her name" | | 3 | "quite reach his eyes" | | 4 | "as if bracing for a blow she knew was coming" | | 5 | "as if committing every detail to memory" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1201 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.09% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 40.03 | | std | 17.09 | | cv | 0.427 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 72 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 71 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 51 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 39 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 65 |
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| 93.57% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "was slicked" | | 1 | "was strained" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 148 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open, revealing Lucien Moreau—impeccably dressed in a charcoal suit that looked tailored for a man who thrived on control." | | 1 | "His hair was slicked back, a platinum streak gleaming under the dull glow of the hallway light, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her with an intensity that made her stomach tighten." | | 2 | "She barely had time to register his arrival before the air in her tiny flat grew thick, the scent of something both familiar and sharp—cinnamon, maybe, mixed with a faint trace of smoke she couldn’t quite place." | | 3 | "A thousand words clung to her tongue—all the things she’d kept bottled up since she’d fled Cardiff—yet none escaped." | | 4 | "Outside, the muffled sounds of Brick Lane carried on—the distant hum of voices, the scent of curry drifting up through the thin walls." | | 5 | "The ache she’d kept buried since those brittle days in Cardiff resurfaced, blending with something unfamiliar—hope, maybe, or reckless longing." | | 6 | "Instead, she only looked at him—understanding, wariness, longing tangled in her gaze—and wondered if, for once, she could let herself believe in the possibility of something unspoken but desperately desired." |
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| 74.89% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 832 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.06370192307692307 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.025240384615384616 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 15.4 | | std | 8.34 | | cv | 0.542 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 35 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 35 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 59.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.358974358974359 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she shoved the door" | | 1 | "Instead, she only looked at" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Her hand was steady as" | | 1 | "His hair was slicked back," | | 2 | "She barely had time to" | | 3 | "Her eyes darted over him," | | 4 | "He always looked like he’d" | | 5 | "she said, voice cool, cutting" | | 6 | "Her arms crossed loosely over" | | 7 | "He pushed aside the heavy" | | 8 | "His voice was smooth, deliberate," | | 9 | "Her eyes flicked past him," | | 10 | "she asked sharply, voice quieter" | | 11 | "Her fingers itched, remembering the" | | 12 | "he said softly" | | 13 | "Her gaze hardened." | | 14 | "His lips twitched, a hint" | | 15 | "she shot back, voice strained" | | 16 | "Her shoulders tightened, as if" | | 17 | "He took a slow step" | | 18 | "Her breath caught." | | 19 | "He hesitated only briefly, then" |
| | ratio | 0.65 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter hesitated only a" | | 1 | "Her hand was steady as" | | 2 | "The door swung open, revealing" | | 3 | "His hair was slicked back," | | 4 | "She barely had time to" | | 5 | "Her eyes darted over him," | | 6 | "He always looked like he’d" | | 7 | "she said, voice cool, cutting" | | 8 | "Her arms crossed loosely over" | | 9 | "He pushed aside the heavy" | | 10 | "His voice was smooth, deliberate," | | 11 | "A beat of silence stretched" | | 12 | "Her eyes flicked past him," | | 13 | "An insistent part of her" | | 14 | "she asked sharply, voice quieter" | | 15 | "Her fingers itched, remembering the" | | 16 | "Lucien inclined his head, adjusting" | | 17 | "he said softly" | | 18 | "Her gaze hardened." | | 19 | "His lips twitched, a hint" |
| | ratio | 0.933 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "His hair was slicked back, a platinum streak gleaming under the dull glow of the hallway light, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her w…" | | 1 | "He pushed aside the heavy curtain of shoulder-length black hair that framed his face and held up the ivory-handled cane, its tip tapping softly against the door…" | | 2 | "His lips twitched, a hint of a smile that didn’t quite reach his eyes." | | 3 | "Her shoulders tightened, as if bracing for a blow she knew was coming." | | 4 | "He hesitated only briefly, then stepped inside with a quiet confidence, eyes darting around her flat as if committing every detail to memory." | | 5 | "Ptolemy’s soft paw-steps echoed somewhere in the background, a gentle reminder of the life that persisted beyond their tangled history." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice cool, cutting through the stillness" | | 1 | "she asked sharply, voice quieter now, wary of revealing too much" | | 2 | "she shot back, voice strained but even" | | 3 | "he said, voice detached but tinged with something darker" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.207 | | leniency | 0.414 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |