| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 29 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "she asked finally [finally]" | | 2 | "he said eventually [eventually]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.483 | | leniency | 0.967 | | rawRatio | 0.103 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 86.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2608 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "precisely" | | 4 | "completely" | | 5 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 69.33% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2608 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
| | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "the last thing" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "practiced ease" | | 6 | "gleaming" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "jaw clenched" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "desire" | | 11 | "affection" | | 12 | "comfortable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "let out a breath" | | 1 | "jaw clenched" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 151 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 179 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 57 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2618 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 37 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1956 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.66 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 8 | | Eva | 3 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | Lucien | 13 | | Answers | 1 | | Avaros | 2 | | Riverside | 1 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Anger | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Answers" | | 5 | "Avaros" | | 6 | "Anger" |
| | places | | 0 | "Riverside" | | 1 | "Brick" | | 2 | "Lane" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 16.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like it could have been tailored t" | | 1 | "looked like regret" | | 2 | "felt like she was watching gears engage" | | 3 | "something like desire that refused to die" | | 4 | "something like pity wrestled in her belly" | | 5 | "sounded like punctuation, Aurora stood wit" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2618 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 179 | | matches | | |
| 91.85% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 59 | | mean | 44.37 | | std | 20.92 | | cv | 0.471 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 95 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 89 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 57 | | 20 | 73 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 88 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 46 | | 25 | 53 | | 26 | 72 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 64 | | 32 | 42 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 46 | | 35 | 56 | | 36 | 52 | | 37 | 37 | | 38 | 62 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 31 | | 42 | 56 | | 43 | 46 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 67 | | 46 | 77 | | 47 | 51 | | 48 | 32 | | 49 | 37 |
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| 98.29% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "been tailored" | | 1 | "was meant" | | 2 | "been trained" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 326 | | matches | | 0 | "was trying" | | 1 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 7 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 179 | | ratio | 0.084 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead Lucien stood in the hallway like he'd been waiting to be discovered — composed, ridiculous, wrong in every way for this tired little flat above a curry house." | | 1 | "The ivory handle of his cane caught the weak light and gleamed; the cane itself rested at his side, the blade hidden with its usual discretion." | | 2 | "And his eyes — one amber, one black — found her before she could properly hide the room behind her." | | 3 | "The nickname unhitched a memory — laughter and rain-slicked cobblestones, the sharp taste of whiskey at two a.m., promises that had unwound into silence." | | 4 | "Answers had a way of cutting; she'd learned that when the ex had practiced his own forms of punctuation." | | 5 | "The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist — she flexed it and felt the line throb like an old bruise." | | 6 | "Information for protection — the way he'd always arrived with facts like a man bringing a ladder to a fire." | | 7 | "But the night had thinned into something else; her heartbeat had an impatient rhythm that matched the tiny scar on her wrist." | | 8 | "Lucien accepted the invitation the way men accepted everything that traversed the line between courtesy and ownership — with a practiced ease." | | 9 | "Evan had been one; Lucien's silences were another." | | 10 | "\"Yes. I know precisely.\" He did not say 'I was wrong' with those words; he let the knowledge be heavier than a confession." | | 11 | "Aurora found her breath hitch against the memory of other touches — not all of them gentle." | | 12 | "Up close his amber eye was warmer than she'd predicted; it held no smugness, only the old, irascible, stubborn care that had once promised to stay and then packed a bag." | | 13 | "The hurt was still raw; so, too, was the pull." | | 14 | "She wanted — the word sat too loud." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1773 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same small, habitual tilt" | | 1 | "old, irascible, stubborn care" |
| | adverbCount | 60 | | adverbRatio | 0.0338409475465313 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007896221094190638 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 179 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 179 | | mean | 14.63 | | std | 9.76 | | cv | 0.668 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 39.66% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.3016759776536313 | | totalSentences | 179 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead Lucien stood in the" | | 1 | "Somewhere in the flat a" | | 2 | "Then she let out a" | | 3 | "Instead she stepped aside and" | | 4 | "Instead he reached out and" |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 8.06% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "She expected the usual: a" | | 1 | "He wore a charcoal suit" | | 2 | "His hair was platinum blond," | | 3 | "she said, because there was" | | 4 | "Her voice was thinner than" | | 5 | "He smiled with the economy" | | 6 | "She hadn't let anyone call" | | 7 | "She tightened her fingers on" | | 8 | "Her bluntness was a shield" | | 9 | "She had the impression, flickering" | | 10 | "It was absurd and infuriating" | | 11 | "She gestured to the room" | | 12 | "His voice was low" | | 13 | "It was both a plea" | | 14 | "He let the cane tip," | | 15 | "She was suddenly fifteen years" | | 16 | "She pushed herself away from" | | 17 | "She had never meant to" | | 18 | "It had been the first" | | 19 | "He fixed her with a" |
| | ratio | 0.53 | |
| 49.55% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 110 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt tossed a" | | 1 | "She expected the usual: a" | | 2 | "He wore a charcoal suit" | | 3 | "The ivory handle of his" | | 4 | "His hair was platinum blond," | | 5 | "Aurora's mouth went dry." | | 6 | "The floorboards creaked under her" | | 7 | "Books teetered on the nearest" | | 8 | "she said, because there was" | | 9 | "Her voice was thinner than" | | 10 | "He smiled with the economy" | | 11 | "She hadn't let anyone call" | | 12 | "The nickname unhitched a memory" | | 13 | "She tightened her fingers on" | | 14 | "Her bluntness was a shield" | | 15 | "Answers had a way of" | | 16 | "Lucien's amber eye softened the" | | 17 | "She had the impression, flickering" | | 18 | "It was absurd and infuriating" | | 19 | "She gestured to the room" |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 74.63% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "To Lucien it was a" | | 1 | "If he had been trained" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 26.79% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "The nickname unhitched a memory — laughter and rain-slicked cobblestones, the sharp taste of whiskey at two a.m., promises that had unwound into silence." | | 1 | "She had the impression, flickering and impossible, of him sitting for hours on those stairs in a suit, cane across his knees, watching the brass number on Eva's…" | | 2 | "He fixed her with a look that demanded she read the map on his expression." | | 3 | "Ptolemy padded out from behind the armchair and wound himself against Aurora's calves, a solid, real presence that kept her anchored." | | 4 | "But the night had thinned into something else; her heartbeat had an impatient rhythm that matched the tiny scar on her wrist." | | 5 | "She felt the old tug: anger rolled through the muscle beneath her skin, but there was also the swell of something that had been there from the first time he'd d…" | | 6 | "Rory's hand touched the crescent scar on her wrist as if it were a map." | | 7 | "He let his hand fall back into his lap as if that small withdrawal were an act of respect." | | 8 | "He gave her one of those half-sad smiles that made something tilt in the room." | | 9 | "Up close his amber eye was warmer than she'd predicted; it held no smugness, only the old, irascible, stubborn care that had once promised to stay and then pack…" | | 10 | "Lucien set his cane against the bookshelf, careful not to disturb a stack of curling maps, then looked at her with an expression that was half apology and half …" | | 11 | "Inside the flat, among the books and the notes and the small, blinking lamp, two people who had once been something tried to find where the line between saving …" | | 12 | "Outside the deadbolts settled with patient clicks, a small chorus that promised separation from whatever prowled the darker rooms beyond." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 29 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 23 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.383 | | leniency | 0.767 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |