| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.457 | | leniency | 0.914 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.057 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1711 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1711 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "could feel" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "complex" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "glistening" | | 8 | "glint" | | 9 | "tension" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "velvet" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "structure" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "wavering" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 125 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1731 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.52% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1464 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.23 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | December | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Isolde | 7 | | Seer | 1 | | Fae | 6 | | Nyx | 10 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Dymas | 2 | | English | 1 | | Despite | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | London | 2 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Seer" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.885 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 23.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like peeling back the skin of a fr" | | 1 | "looked like dark pearls, glistening wet" | | 2 | "looked like petrified wood, roofed with c" | | 3 | "felt like walking on velvet, and each s" |
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| 84.46% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.155 | | wordCount | 1731 | | matches | | 0 | "not the flat monochrome of an overcast afternoon but something luminous" | | 1 | "not one kind but a dozen, each note distinct: sourdough tang, buttery sweetne" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 37.63 | | std | 29.98 | | cv | 0.797 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 63 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 80 | | 12 | 97 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 99 | | 17 | 89 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 94 | | 23 | 76 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 78 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 42 | | 32 | 75 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 42 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 67 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 48 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 39 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 219 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 125 | | ratio | 0.136 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn't look — looking directly at Nyx when they were in their incorporeal state always made her eyes ache, like trying to focus on the absence of something." | | 1 | "Even through the fabric, she could feel it pulsing — a slow, rhythmic warmth, like the heartbeat of something vast and sleeping." | | 2 | "It hit her like a physical sensation — a dome of warm amber that stretched in every direction, not the flat monochrome of an overcast afternoon but something luminous and shifting, like sunlight filtered through a glass of whiskey." | | 3 | "Roasting meat, but not any meat she'd ever encountered — something that smelled of smoke and caramel and a deep, mineral earthiness." | | 4 | "Fruit — overripe and bursting, the jammy sweetness of figs and something sharper underneath, like citrus that had been soaked in wine." | | 5 | "In the amber light of Dymas, their edges were more defined than she'd ever seen them — the living shadow given dimension and texture, like smoke pressed into glass." | | 6 | "Vineyards cascaded down the slopes in terraced rows, but the grapes were the size of plums and their skins shifted color as Rory watched — deep purple to ruby to a green so vivid it looked poisonous." | | 7 | "And beyond the orchards — kitchens." | | 8 | "They didn't move forward, and Rory noticed the tension in their form — a subtle flickering at their edges, like a candle flame in a draft." | | 9 | "The grass beneath their feet was soft and thick, unnaturally so — it felt like walking on velvet, and each step released a scent of crushed herbs, thyme and rosemary and something sweeter she couldn't place." | | 10 | "The path — and there was a path now, she realized, paved with flat stones the color of honeycomb — led them between two rows of the plum-sized grapes." | | 11 | "She reached out instinctively toward one and felt Nyx's shadow-hand close around her wrist — cold, but solid, the grip firm." | | 12 | "A woman — or something shaped like a woman — in a stained apron, holding a basket overflowing with the dark pearl-like fruit from the orchard." | | 13 | "Something glinted at its peak — a structure that rose above the vine-canopy roof, angular and sharp, like the tines of an enormous fork thrust into the sky." | | 14 | "The Heartstone pendant gave a sudden, sharp pulse of heat — almost painful — and Rory pressed her hand flat against her chest." | | 15 | "Like the rift they'd come through, but smaller, thinner — a hairline fracture in the fabric of this place." | | 16 | "Through it, Rory caught a flash of something — grey sky, rain, the distant sound of traffic." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1452 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.03236914600550964 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008264462809917356 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 125 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 125 | | mean | 13.85 | | std | 10.04 | | cv | 0.725 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 39 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 67.47% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.448 | | totalSentences | 125 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 37.45% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Even their whisper-voice sounded richer," |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 76.18% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood at the edge" | | 1 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 2 | "She didn't look — looking" | | 3 | "Their voice slid across her" | | 4 | "It had been warm since" | | 5 | "She pulled the Fae blade" | | 6 | "She stepped closer, and her" | | 7 | "She didn't ask what would" | | 8 | "She'd stopped asking questions she" | | 9 | "She stepped through." | | 10 | "It hit her like a" | | 11 | "It had depth to it." | | 12 | "She could see currents moving" | | 13 | "It rolled over her in" | | 14 | "Her mouth flooded with saliva" | | 15 | "Their violet eyes glowed brighter" | | 16 | "They stood on a hillside." | | 17 | "They didn't move forward, and" | | 18 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 19 | "They started down the hill." |
| | ratio | 0.36 | |
| 72.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "The tear in the air" | | 1 | "She stood at the edge" | | 2 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 3 | "Isolde corrected, her pale lavender" | | 4 | "Nyx murmured from somewhere to" | | 5 | "She didn't look — looking" | | 6 | "Their voice slid across her" | | 7 | "Rory pressed her thumb against" | | 8 | "It had been warm since" | | 9 | "She pulled the Fae blade" | | 10 | "The moonsilver dagger was cold" | | 11 | "She stepped closer, and her" | | 12 | "The woman moved through the" | | 13 | "She didn't ask what would" | | 14 | "She'd stopped asking questions she" | | 15 | "She stepped through." | | 16 | "The first thing was the" | | 17 | "It hit her like a" | | 18 | "It had depth to it." | | 19 | "She could see currents moving" |
| | ratio | 0.775 | |
| 56.18% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Even through the fabric, she" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 42.61% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood at the edge of Isolde's grove, the ancient oaks towering behind her like sentinels, and stared at the thing the Seer had opened with nothing more than…" | | 1 | "It hit her like a physical sensation — a dome of warm amber that stretched in every direction, not the flat monochrome of an overcast afternoon but something lu…" | | 2 | "She could see currents moving through it, darker threads of gold braiding through lighter ones, as if the sky itself was a living thing circulating some slow, c…" | | 3 | "Roasting meat, but not any meat she'd ever encountered — something that smelled of smoke and caramel and a deep, mineral earthiness." | | 4 | "Fruit — overripe and bursting, the jammy sweetness of figs and something sharper underneath, like citrus that had been soaked in wine." | | 5 | "Below them, the landscape unrolled like a fever dream painted by someone who had studied the English countryside and then discarded every rule of restraint." | | 6 | "Between the vineyards, orchards sprawled in impossible variety: trees bearing golden fruit she couldn't name grew beside others whose branches dripped with clus…" | | 7 | "The pendant pulsed against her chest, harder now, a staccato rhythm that felt urgent." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 35.71% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.267 | | effectiveRatio | 0.229 | |