Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR2V0KZ5BSBG1RFMY0YK65

Run Details

Duration:
56.4s
Cost:
$0.005991
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air grew still as they passed the last gnarled oak of Richmond Park, the familiar chatter of picnics and distant traffic dissolving into an unnerving silence. Before them stood a circle of ancient standing stones, their surfaces covered in a moss so green it seemed to hum with life. They weren’t arranged in a perfect circle, but in a lazy, winding spiral that pulled the eye inward. Rory Carter felt a prickle of unease crawl up her spine, the hair on her arms standing on end. Beside her, Nyx, a solid silhouette of living shadow against the afternoon gloom, paused. Their faintly glowing violet eyes fixed on the space between two of the largest stones. “The threshold,” Nyx whispered, their voice like the rustle of dry leaves skittering across pavement. Isolde Varga glided forward, her silver hair a stark waterfall against the muted greens and browns of the woods. She didn’t seem to walk on the forest floor so much as float just above it, leaving no imprint in the damp earth. Her pale lavender eyes held a serene, ageless calm. “The Grove waits for no one, but it will suffer an entrance.” Rory’s hand went to the slender, leaf-shaped dagger tucked into her belt. The Fae-forged blade was always cold to the touch, a steady, reassuring chill against her skin. Now, it felt colder still, a sliver of absolute zero in the mild air. The other hand instinctively touched the Heartstone pendant hanging beneath her shirt. The deep crimson gem, usually a source of faint warmth, was utterly still. Its purpose, she’d learned, was to pulse near rifts to Hel. This place was something else entirely. Taking a breath that felt too thin, too sweet, Rory followed Isolde through the gap in the stones. The world didn’t so much change as it *unmade* itself. For a dizzying second, there was a sensation of passing through a cool, shimmering curtain, like a waterfall made of liquid air. Then, she was standing on the other side, and the world she knew was gone. The first thing she noticed was the light. It wasn’t sunlight. It wasn’t moonlight. It was a soft, pearlescent luminescence that seemed to emanate from everything at once—from the impossibly green grass, from the bark of the trees, from the very air she breathed. It cast no shadows, yet it defined every shape with a gentle, ethereal clarity. The ground under her feet was springy, thick with a carpet of wildflowers that Rory knew, with absolute certainty, should not be blooming in late autumn. Luminous bluebells pulsed with a gentle sapphire light, and clusters of what looked like poppies with petals of spun silk shimmered with the iridescent colours of an oil slick. “Wow,” she breathed, the word sounding loud and clumsy in the profound quiet. Nyx flowed into the space behind her, their form seeming to drink in the ambient light, becoming a deeper, more solid black. “The air is older here,” they murmured, their voice barely disturbing the tranquility. “It remembers.” Rory knelt, her fingers hovering over a flame-red flower whose petals felt like warm velvet. The air was thick and sweet with the scent of honey and something else, something metallic and clean, like after a thunderstorm. She stood up, turning slowly. The grove was a perfect, shallow bowl, enclosed by a ring of trees with bark like polished silver and leaves that were a deep, twilight purple. There was no wind, yet a soft, melodic chiming echoed through the clearing, as if an invisible breeze was stirring a thousand tiny glass bells. Isolde stood in the center of the grove, a serene figure in her simple grey dress. “Time does not flow here, little mortal,” she said, her voice a melody that matched the chimes. “It pools.” She looked at Rory, a faint, knowing smile on her lips. “Be careful you do not drown in it.” Rory’s gaze fell to the ground where Isolde stood. Nothing. No indent, no displaced blades of grass, no scuff mark. The Half-Fae left no trace of her passing, as if she were a ghost or a thought made manifest. The sight sent a fresh wave of wonder and unease through Rory. This place operated on rules she couldn’t even begin to comprehend. She started walking, her steps muffled by the springy turf. The Fae blade at her hip felt like an anchor, its cold a sharp, real sensation in a place of soft, dreamlike edges. As she moved deeper toward the center, the blade began to react. A faint, silvery light started to emanate from the moonsilver metal, a soft glow that was almost imperceptible against the ambient luminescence of the grove, but there. It pulsed in time with the distant chiming. “What is that sound?” Rory asked, her voice hushed. She felt like an intruder, a loud, clumsy creature of flesh and bone in a place made of light and memory. Nyx was beside her in an instant, their movement so fluid they seemed to simply appear. “The leaves of the Great Tree,” they whispered, pointing a shadowy finger toward the largest tree in the grove’s center. It was indeed larger than the others, its silver bark swirling in patterns that resembled a human face in profile. Its deep purple leaves were shaped like tiny daggers, and as Rory watched, they trembled, though no wind touched them, producing the delicate, haunting music. She reached the base of the Great Tree and placed a hand on its trunk. The bark was smooth as glass and cool as stone, but beneath it, she could feel a slow, powerful thrumming, like a colossal heartbeat. The air here was even sweeter, and the light seemed to concentrate, pooling around the tree’s roots in soft, glowing rivulets. The Fae blade in her belt was now glowing brightly, its cold light a stark contrast to the warm, living energy of the Grove. A sense of vertigo washed over her. The world seemed to tilt, the colours swimming for a moment. She stumbled back, pulling out her phone instinctively, a modern-day talisman against the impossible. The screen was black. Dead. She thumbed the power button, but nothing happened. A knot of cold dread formed in her stomach, colder even than the Fae blade. “How long have we been here?” she asked, her voice tighter now. The wonder was still there, but it was edged with a sharp-toothed fear. Isolde turned from the tree, her pale lavender eyes holding a hint of pity. “An hour,” she said, then added with a cryptic tilt of her head, “or a day. Or a moment. The sun you left behind has not moved. The sun you will return to may be setting.” Rory looked from Isolde’s inscrutable face to Nyx’s unreadable shadow-form, then back to the impossible, beautiful grove that held them captive. The chiming of the leaves no longer sounded merely beautiful; it sounded like the ticking of a clock she couldn’t see, counting away a time she no longer owned. The cold from the blade seeped into her bones, a stark reminder of the world she came from, a world of sharp edges and hard realities, a world she might not see again for a very long time.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"they murmured, their voice barely disturbing the tranquility [barely]"
1"she said, then added with a cryptic tilt of her head [then]"
67.2400% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1221
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"utterly"
2"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1221
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"luminous"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"glided"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"profound"
count1
9
word"stark"
count3
10
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"luminous"
2"shimmered"
3"glided"
4"trembled"
5"velvet"
6"silk"
7"unreadable"
8"profound"
9"stark"
10"echoed"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
99.2949% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
2"begin to"
3"began to"
4"started to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"is that sound"
89.3955% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean63.84
std29.55
cv0.463
sampleLengths
0116
115
263
384
465
5113
613
737
893
954
1062
1180
1230
1381
1484
1560
1625
1750
1888
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences74
matches
0"was gone"
1"were shaped"
2"was edged"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs166
matches
0"was standing"
1"was stirring"
93.7239% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1141
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slender, leaf-shaped dagger"
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.040315512708150744
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010517090271691499
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean15.75
std7.83
cv0.497
sampleLengths
027
123
218
319
414
515
615
719
823
99
1012
1112
1216
1314
1412
1513
1611
176
1818
1910
2022
2115
228
233
243
2530
2614
2726
2829
2913
3022
3113
322
3315
3422
355
3626
3725
3816
3917
4013
418
429
431
4410
4519
4612
4711
4810
4923
54.5455% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.38961038961038963
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners30
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered, their voice like the rustle of dry leaves skittering across pavement (whisper, like skitter)"
1"she breathed, the word sounding loud and clumsy in the profound quiet (breathe, sound)"
2"they murmured, their voice barely disturbing the tranquility (murmur, barely disturb)"
3"she said, her voice a melody that matched the chimes (say, voice match)"
4"they whispered, pointing a shadowy finger toward the largest tree in the grove’s center (whisper, point)"
5"she said, then added with a cryptic tilt of her head (say, add)"
79.6588%