| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1214 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1214 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "stark" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "silk" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "profound" | | 12 | "velvet" | | 13 | "echoed" | | 14 | "trembled" | | 15 | "could feel" | | 16 | "sense of" | | 17 | "stomach" | | 18 | "unreadable" | | 19 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "seem to" | | 2 | "begin to" | | 3 | "began to" | | 4 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1213 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1133 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.97 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Isolde | 6 | | Varga | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Great | 1 | | Tree | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Half-Fae" | | 6 | "Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "Tree" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "luminescence that seemed to emanate from everything at once—from the impossibly green grass, from the bark of the trees, from the very air she breathed" | | 1 | "looked like poppies with petals of spun s" | | 2 | "felt like warm velvet" | | 3 | "felt like an anchor, its cold a sharp," | | 4 | "felt like an intruder, a loud, clumsy c" | | 5 | "sounded like the ticking of a clock she co" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1213 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.40% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 63.84 | | std | 29.55 | | cv | 0.463 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 116 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 84 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 113 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 93 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 80 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 81 | | 14 | 84 | | 15 | 60 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 88 |
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| 91.04% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "were shaped" | | 2 | "was edged" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 166 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was stirring" |
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| 68.65% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a soft, pearlescent luminescence that seemed to emanate from everything at once—from the impossibly green grass, from the bark of the trees, from the very air she breathed." | | 1 | "The chiming of the leaves no longer sounded merely beautiful; it sounded like the ticking of a clock she couldn’t see, counting away a time she no longer owned." |
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| 93.72% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1141 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender, leaf-shaped dagger" |
| | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.040315512708150744 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010517090271691499 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 15.75 | | std | 7.83 | | cv | 0.497 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 54.55% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.38961038961038963 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 46.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, she was standing on" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 81.11% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "They weren’t arranged in a" | | 1 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 2 | "She didn’t seem to walk" | | 3 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" | | 4 | "Its purpose, she’d learned, was" | | 5 | "It wasn’t sunlight." | | 6 | "It wasn’t moonlight." | | 7 | "It was a soft, pearlescent" | | 8 | "It cast no shadows, yet" | | 9 | "she breathed, the word sounding" | | 10 | "they murmured, their voice barely" | | 11 | "She stood up, turning slowly." | | 12 | "she said, her voice a" | | 13 | "She looked at Rory, a" | | 14 | "She started walking, her steps" | | 15 | "It pulsed in time with" | | 16 | "She felt like an intruder," | | 17 | "they whispered, pointing a shadowy" | | 18 | "It was indeed larger than" | | 19 | "Its deep purple leaves were" |
| | ratio | 0.347 | |
| 29.44% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The air grew still as" | | 1 | "They weren’t arranged in a" | | 2 | "Rory Carter felt a prickle" | | 3 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered, their voice like" | | 5 | "Isolde Varga glided forward, her" | | 6 | "She didn’t seem to walk" | | 7 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" | | 8 | "Rory’s hand went to the" | | 9 | "The Fae-forged blade was always" | | 10 | "The other hand instinctively touched" | | 11 | "The deep crimson gem, usually" | | 12 | "Its purpose, she’d learned, was" | | 13 | "This place was something else" | | 14 | "The world didn’t so much" | | 15 | "The first thing she noticed" | | 16 | "It wasn’t sunlight." | | 17 | "It wasn’t moonlight." | | 18 | "It was a soft, pearlescent" | | 19 | "It cast no shadows, yet" |
| | ratio | 0.861 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them stood a circle" | | 1 | "Now, it felt colder still," |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 60.44% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a soft, pearlescent luminescence that seemed to emanate from everything at once—from the impossibly green grass, from the bark of the trees, from the ver…" | | 1 | "Nyx flowed into the space behind her, their form seeming to drink in the ambient light, becoming a deeper, more solid black." | | 2 | "There was no wind, yet a soft, melodic chiming echoed through the clearing, as if an invisible breeze was stirring a thousand tiny glass bells." | | 3 | "A faint, silvery light started to emanate from the moonsilver metal, a soft glow that was almost imperceptible against the ambient luminescence of the grove, bu…" | | 4 | "It was indeed larger than the others, its silver bark swirling in patterns that resembled a human face in profile." | | 5 | "Rory looked from Isolde’s inscrutable face to Nyx’s unreadable shadow-form, then back to the impossible, beautiful grove that held them captive." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "she breathed, the word sounding loud and clumsy in the profound quiet" | | 1 | "they murmured, their voice barely disturbing the tranquility" | | 2 | "she said, her voice a melody that matched the chimes" | | 3 | "Rory asked, her voice hushed" | | 4 | "she asked, her voice tighter now" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |