| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1389 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.60% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1389 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "vibrated" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "unreadable" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "electric" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "tapestry" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "oppressive" | | 11 | "scanning" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1385 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1148 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 1.48 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 17 | | English | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Great | 1 | | Oak | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Standing | 1 | | Stones | 1 | | Faint | 1 | | London | 3 | | Seer | 2 | | Varga | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Fae | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Stones" | | 3 | "Faint" | | 4 | "Seer" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Half-Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.76 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 14.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite hold him" | | 1 | "brambles that seemed to bend instinctively to let them pass" | | 2 | "looked like a tapestry woven from moonlig" | | 3 | "looked like a river of ink" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.722 | | wordCount | 1385 | | matches | | 0 | "not maliciously, but greedily" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 32.98 | | std | 17.17 | | cv | 0.521 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 70 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 62 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 47 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 51 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 52 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 48 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 51 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 33 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | |
| 59.65% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 190 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't delivering" | | 1 | "were breathing" | | 2 | "was reacting" | | 3 | "was like stepping" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.072 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence in Richmond Park wasn’t empty; it was thick, humming with a frequency that vibrated in Aurora’s teeth." | | 1 | "She checked the compass in her pocket—not a smartphone, a real brass one that had once belonged to her father." | | 2 | "The air grew heavy, heavy enough to drink, thick with the scent of wet earth and something sweeter—sterile, cut jasmine." | | 3 | "It wasn't a step; it was a compression." | | 4 | "The sunlight here wasn't the amber of the day outside; it was a pale, pearlescent luminescence, as if the sun were a distant, dying star casting a cool glow over everything." | | 5 | "Despite the season—the dead of winter—the wildflowers bloomed in riotous clusters, their petals translucent and shimmering like spun sugar." | | 6 | "The shadow was isolated; there was no second shape, no second pair of glowing eyes." | | 7 | "She couldn't stay here; she didn't belong in the land where time was a river that could run backward." |
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| 93.46% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1157 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "tall, broad-shouldered man" |
| | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.04062229904926534 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015557476231633534 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 12.48 | | std | 6.77 | | cv | 0.543 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 46.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.35135135135135137 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 54.48% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "They pooled too deep, too" | | 2 | "He moved with a liquid" | | 3 | "She checked the compass in" | | 4 | "It was cold, the moonsilver" | | 5 | "They pressed on through a" | | 6 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 7 | "she murmured, echoing Nyx" | | 8 | "It was a disturbance in" | | 9 | "His silhouette was full again." | | 10 | "She stepped into the gap." | | 11 | "It wasn't a step; it" | | 12 | "She looked down." | | 13 | "She walked further in, the" | | 14 | "She looked up." | | 15 | "Her silver hair flowed around" | | 16 | "She wore clothes that looked" | | 17 | "She turned slowly, her pale" | | 18 | "Her voice was soft, melodic," | | 19 | "It echoed in Aurora's mind." |
| | ratio | 0.414 | |
| 5.98% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The trees here were English" | | 3 | "They pooled too deep, too" | | 4 | "a voice rasped, sounding like" | | 5 | "The figure of Nyx stepped" | | 6 | "He moved with a liquid" | | 7 | "Aurora said, her voice steady" | | 8 | "She checked the compass in" | | 9 | "The needle spun in frantic" | | 10 | "Nyx’s head tilted, his expression" | | 11 | "Aurora tightened her grip on" | | 12 | "It was cold, the moonsilver" | | 13 | "Isolde had given it to" | | 14 | "They pressed on through a" | | 15 | "The air grew heavy, heavy" | | 16 | "The Standing Stones." | | 17 | "Here, they were more like" | | 18 | "The top stones were covered" | | 19 | "Aurora took a breath, the" |
| | ratio | 0.908 | |
| 57.47% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "To her right, a stream" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The silence in Richmond Park wasn’t empty; it was thick, humming with a frequency that vibrated in Aurora’s teeth." | | 1 | "The figure of Nyx stepped out of the trunk of a Great Oak, a shape of living ink that solidified into a tall, broad-shouldered man with glowing violet eyes." | | 2 | "The smell of London petrol and damp pavement vanished, replaced instantly by the scent of blooming wildflowers that filled her lungs like pure oxygen." | | 3 | "The sunlight here wasn't the amber of the day outside; it was a pale, pearlescent luminescence, as if the sun were a distant, dying star casting a cool glow ove…" | | 4 | "The grass was soft, silvery-green, and undulating as if it were breathing." | | 5 | "She looked around the grove, taking in the impossible geometry of the flowers, the silence of the wind that blew through the trees without making a sound." |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx’s head tilted, his expression unreadable, his features half-finished in shadow" |
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| 34.62% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 2 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.385 | | leniency | 0.769 | | rawRatio | 0.3 | | effectiveRatio | 0.231 | |