Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR3ZH7CTT1A061A04DX488

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Duration:
34.1s
Cost:
$0.005457
Provider:
Alibaba

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked open with a heavy, metallic thud that seemed to echo in the narrow stairwell. Aurora Carter leaned her weight against the doorframe, her bright blue eyes narrowing as the chain rattled and the final lock gave way. She had spent the last twenty minutes debating whether to open it at all, her hand hovering over the brass chain while Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wove figure-eights around her ankles, purring with an oblivious rumble. When she finally swung the door wide, the humid air from the curry house below drifted up to meet her, carrying the scent of cumin and fried onions, but it was the figure standing on the landing that stole the breath from her lungs. Lucien Moreau stood silhouetted against the flickering hallway light, looking as though he had stepped out of a magazine spread rather than the rain-slicked streets of East London. His charcoal suit was immaculate, the fabric repelling the dampness of the evening, and his platinum blond hair was slicked back with a precision that defied the weather. He held his ivory-handled cane loosely in one gloved hand, the tip resting quietly on the scuffed linoleum. But it was his eyes that pinned her in place—the heterochromatic gaze, one amber and one black, watching her with an intensity that made the small crescent scar on her left wrist itch with phantom memory. "Rory," he said. His voice was low, a smooth baritone that carried the faintest trace of a French accent, worn smooth by years in London. She didn't step back. She didn't invite him in. She simply gripped the edge of the door, her knuckles whitening. "Lucien. You have five seconds to explain why you're standing outside my best friend's flat before I slam this in your face and call Silas." "I knocked," Lucien replied, unmoved by her threat. He shifted his weight, the movement fluid and predatory despite the elegance of his attire. "Three times. I assumed you were ignoring me, which, given our history, is a fair assumption." "Our history is exactly why you shouldn't be here." Aurora's voice trembled, just slightly, betraying the cool-headed composure she prided herself on. She was twenty-five, old enough to know better, yet standing before him felt like being twenty-two again, fresh off the plane from Cardiff, running from Evan and running toward a chaos she couldn't name. "We parted ways, Lucien. Complicatedly. Remember? You said some things. I said some things. Mostly, we said nothing at all." "The silence was deafening," Lucien agreed, taking a half-step forward. The smell of him cut through the curry scent—expensive cologne, old paper, and something sharper, something that smelled like ozone and storm clouds. It was the scent of Avaros, the realm of his father, lingering beneath the human veneer. "Which is why I am here. The silence has become... inconvenient." Aurora let out a short, incredulous laugh. "Inconvenient. That's your pitch? You show up unannounced after six months of radio silence because it's inconvenient?" "I received information," Lucien said, his tone shifting from conversational to urgent. The amber eye seemed to glow in the dim light. "Regarding the people who made your life in Cardiff unbearable. Regarding Evan." The name hit her like a physical blow. Aurora flinched, her shoulder bumping against the doorjamb. Inside the flat, Ptolemy meowed loudly, sensing her distress, and rubbed his head harder against her calf. She looked down at the cat, then back up at Lucien, her blue eyes flashing with a mixture of anger and fear. "Don't," she warned, her voice dropping to a hiss. "Don't you dare use him to get your foot in the door. I left that life behind. I'm delivering noodles for Yu-Fei now. I live above a bar. I am safe." "You are never safe while shadows like that exist, Rory," Lucien said softly. He reached out, not to touch her, but to rest his gloved hand on the doorframe, effectively boxing her in without crossing the threshold. "And you know I speak the truth. I have sources you cannot access. I heard whispers in the underworld. Evan isn't just a bitter ex-lover anymore. He's made deals. Bad ones." Aurora stared at him, searching those mismatched eyes for a lie. Lucien was many things—a fixer, a broker, a half-demon who navigated London's supernatural underbelly with terrifying ease—but he was not a liar. Not to her. That was the problem. He told the truth even when it hurt, especially when it hurt. That was probably why they had broken apart. The truth between them had become too sharp to hold. "If this is true," she said slowly, her mind already racing, calculating angles and exits, the way it always did when危机 struck, "why come to me? Why not send a message? A text? A carrier pigeon?" "Because," Lucien said, his gaze dropping to her lips for a fraction of a second before snapping back to her eyes, "I needed to see you. I needed to know you were still you." The admission hung in the air, heavy and suffocating. The hallway seemed to shrink, the stacks of books and scrolls visible through the open door behind her pressing in. Eva's flat was a cramped sanctuary of research and chaos, a stark contrast to Lucien's ordered world, yet here he was, intruding on both. "You left, Lucien," Aurora whispered, the anger draining out of her, replaced by a weary ache. "You walked away when things got hard. You said you couldn't protect me without becoming the very thing I was running from." "I was wrong," he said. The words were simple, stripped of his usual eloquence, raw and exposed. "I thought distance was protection. I was a fool. Arrogant, as my father often reminded me before I fled Marseille. But the distance nearly got you killed, Rory. I can feel it. The threads are tangling." He took another step, and this time, he did cross the threshold. Aurora didn't retreat. She couldn't. The gravity of him, the sheer presence of his history and their shared pain, anchored her to the spot. He stopped mere inches from her, close enough that she could see the fine lines of exhaustion around his eyes, hidden beneath the perfection of his grooming. "Let me in," he murmured. "Not as the fixer. Not as the demon's son. Just as Luc. Please." Aurora looked at the cane in his hand, the concealed blade within the ivory handle, a symbol of the violence he carried so easily. Then she looked at his face, at the vulnerability he rarely showed anyone. She thought of the nights she had spent staring at the ceiling of this flat, wondering where he was, what he was doing, if he ever thought of the girl with the black hair and the quick mind who had challenged him at every turn. She stepped aside. Lucien exhaled, a sound of relief that seemed to loosen the tension in his broad shoulders. He stepped fully into the flat, careful not to knock over the precarious towers of books lining the hallway. Ptolemy approached him cautiously, sniffing the polished toe of his shoe before deciding he was acceptable and winding himself around Lucien's legs. "He remembers you," Aurora noted, closing the door and engaging the chain, though leaving the deadbolts open for now. "Cats have excellent instincts," Lucien said, bending slightly to scratch the tabby behind the ears. "They know who means harm and who does not." He straightened up and turned to face her. The cramped space felt suddenly intimate, charged with the electricity of unsaid things. "You look tired, Rory." "I work two jobs and share a bedroom with a hoarder of ancient texts," she shot back, crossing her arms over her chest. The gesture was defensive, but her hands were shaking slightly. "And I have a ex-boyfriend potentially selling his soul to demons. So yes, Lucien, I look tired." "Then let me help," he said, his voice firm. "Let me fix this. Let us fix this." "It's not a broken watch, Lucien. It's us." "Perhaps," he conceded, taking a slow step toward her. "But some things are worth repairing, no matter how complicated the mechanism." He reached out, his bare hand this time, the glove removed and tucked into his pocket. His fingers brushed against her left wrist, right over the small crescent scar from her childhood. The touch was electric, sending a jolt through her arm that settled deep in her chest. "I never stopped thinking about this scar. Or the woman who bears it." Aurora looked up at him, her bright blue eyes searching his face. The hurt was still there, a dull ache beneath her ribs, but so was the attraction, fierce and undeniable, flaring up like a struck match. "You have a lot of making up to do, Moreau." "I intend to start tonight," he promised, his thumb tracing the line of the scar. "If you'll let me." Aurora didn't pull away. She leaned into his touch, just a fraction, the wall she had built around herself cracking under the weight of his presence. "You have one hour," she said, her voice steady despite the hammering of her heart. "Then you tell me everything about Evan. And then... we see." Lucien smiled, a genuine expression that softened the sharp angles of his face and made his amber eye shine. "One hour is a start, Rory. One hour is enough to change everything." Outside, the rain began to fall harder against the windowpane, drumming a rhythm against the glass, but inside Eva's cluttered flat, the world had narrowed down to the space between two people who had finally stopped running.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
59.2593% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Lucien said softly [softly]"
1"she said slowly, her mind already racing, calculating angles and exits, the way it always did when危机 struck [slowly, already always]"
2"Lucien said, his gaze dropping to her lips for a fraction of a second before snapping back to her eyes [back]"
3"Lucien said, bending slightly to scratch the tabby behind the ears [slightly]"
44.7514% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1629
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"loosely"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count3
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
6
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"loosely"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
4"softly"
5"suddenly"
6"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.7514% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1629
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"calculating"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"weight"
count3
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"navigated"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"trembled"
2"calculating"
3"stark"
4"weight"
5"echo"
6"navigated"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"silence was deafening"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"The silence was deafening"
1"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"left that life"
1"like that exist"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean48.97
std27.65
cv0.565
sampleLengths
0121
1110
225
345
439
576
660
724
834
995
1068
1170
1236
1334
1453
1538
1653
1763
1818
1982
203
2157
2219
2349
2450
2517
268
2782
2847
2919
3052
3132
3237
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"was slicked"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs203
matches
0"was, intruding"
1"was doing"
2"were shaking"
99.3766% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1179
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.04071246819338423
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.016963528413910092
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean16.66
std9.72
cv0.583
sampleLengths
018
123
236
344
428
528
618
736
83
922
104
115
1211
1325
148
1515
1616
1722
1834
1920
2010
2123
2216
2311
247
2517
2612
2710
2812
298
308
3117
3222
339
3431
3513
3624
3731
3811
3922
403
414
4212
438
4410
4536
4634
479
4820
4924
51.2027% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.35051546391752575
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners34
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount14
fancyTags
0"Lucien replied, unmoved by her threat (reply, unmove)"
1"Lucien agreed, taking a half-step forward (agree, take)"
2"Lucien said, his tone shifting from conversational to urgent (say, shift)"
3"she warned, her voice dropping to a hiss (warn, drop)"
4"Lucien said softly (say softly)"
5"she said slowly, her mind already racing, calculating angles and exits, the way it always did when危机 struck (say slowly, already race, calculate exit, always do strike)"
6"Lucien said, his gaze dropping to her lips for a fraction of a second before snapping back to her eyes (say, drop snap)"
7"Aurora whispered, the anger draining out of her, replaced by a weary ache (whisper, drain replace)"
8"he murmured (murmur)"
9"Aurora noted, closing the door and engaging the chain, though leaving the deadbolts open for now (note, close engage leave open)"
10"Lucien said, bending slightly to scratch the tabby behind the ears (say, bend slightly scratch)"
11"she shot back, crossing her arms over her chest (shoot back, cross)"
12"he conceded, taking a slow step toward her (concede, take)"
13"he promised, his thumb tracing the line of the scar (promise, trace)"
80.3534%