| 26.09% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "Isolde finished cryptically [cryptically]" | | 2 | "Isolde said reverently [reverently]" | | 3 | "Isolde finished gently [gently]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.511 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.174 | | effectiveRatio | 0.174 | |
| 77.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1305 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "gently" | | 4 | "hesitantly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1305 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "silk" | | 8 | "streaming" | | 9 | "potential" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 91.22% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "y with warmth" | | 1 | "filled with wonder" | | 2 | "d with wonder" |
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| 27.03% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1294 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 26 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "When her vision cleared, she gasped." |
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| 27.79% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 81 | | wordCount | 941 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 2.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Isolde | 20 | | Nyx | 8 | | Rory | 23 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Grove | 9 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Heartstone" | | 5 | "Fae-Forged" | | 6 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.278 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 22.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite reach her ageless eyes" | | 1 | "something like a cross between a fox and a d" | | 2 | "felt like silk beneath her fingers" |
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| 45.44% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.546 | | wordCount | 1294 | | matches | | 0 | "Not all who wander are lost, but all who seek must first surrender certainty" | | 1 | "Not what is, but what could be" |
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| 62.50% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "noticed that the" | | 1 | "noticed that the" | | 2 | "noticed that the" |
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| 98.27% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 28.76 | | std | 14.2 | | cv | 0.494 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 70 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 56 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 47 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 36 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 47 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 45 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 23 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 182 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.104 | | matches | | 0 | "\"Are you certain this is the place?\" Rory asked, fingertips brushing against the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit she'd never broken." | | 1 | "The sensation was like plunging into cold water—her ears popped, and the world tilted sideways." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—some that seemed to shift from blue to purple to gold depending on how she tilted her head." | | 3 | "The temperature remained perfect—not too warm, not too cool." | | 4 | "As they touched it, ripples spread across the surface, but instead of reflecting their shadowy form, the water showed brief images—a woman with hair like starlight, a book bound in human skin, a door carved from bone." | | 5 | "A creature emerged from the foliage—something like a cross between a fox and a deer, with fur that shifted colors like oil on water." | | 6 | "The creature purred—a sound like tiny bells ringing—and then bounded away into the undergrowth." | | 7 | "As they approached, Rory noticed that the space beneath the tree was somehow larger than it should have been—the laws of physics seemed to bend around it." | | 8 | "The sounds of the Grove faded, replaced by whispers in languages she didn't understand but somehow comprehended—visions of other places, other times, flashing behind her eyes." | | 9 | "Rory closed her eyes as images flooded her mind—a figure in shadow waiting at a crossroads, a door standing open between worlds, a crown made of thorns and stars." |
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| 86.16% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 960 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.04895833333333333 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01875 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 13.48 | | std | 6.83 | | cv | 0.507 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 66.32% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4166666666666667 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 50.51% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Hesitantly, she reached down to" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "They continued in silence until" | | 1 | "they whispered, their voice sounding" | | 2 | "She snatched her hand back." | | 3 | "It approached cautiously, nose twitching." | | 4 | "It had grown warmer since" | | 5 | "They continued walking until they" | | 6 | "she asked, reaching blindly for" | | 7 | "Her hand found Nyx's, which" | | 8 | "she began, but couldn't find" |
| | ratio | 0.136 | |
| 50.91% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The morning mist clung to" | | 1 | "Rory's bright blue eyes darted" | | 2 | "Nyx, the living shadow, drifted" | | 3 | "Rory asked, fingertips brushing against" | | 4 | "Isolde turned, her pale lavender" | | 5 | "Rory exchanged a glance with" | | 6 | "They continued in silence until" | | 7 | "The air between the stones" | | 8 | "Rory squared her shoulders and" | | 9 | "The sensation was like plunging" | | 10 | "The Fae Grove unfolded before" | | 11 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—some" | | 12 | "Trees stretched skyward with bark" | | 13 | "The air smelled of honey," | | 14 | "Rory breathed, her hand instinctively" | | 15 | "The deep crimson gemstone pulsed" | | 16 | "Nyx drifted forward, their shadow" | | 17 | "they whispered, their voice sounding" | | 18 | "Isolde smiled, a mysterious expression" | | 19 | "Isolde gestured to the path" |
| | ratio | 0.818 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Trees stretched skyward with bark that shimmered like mother-of-pearl." | | 1 | "Isolde smiled, a mysterious expression that didn't quite reach her ageless eyes." |
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| 59.78% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, their voice sounding clearer than Rory had ever heard it" | | 1 | "Isolde's voice said, seeming to come from everywhere and nowhere" | | 2 | "Isolde replied, her silver hair catching the impossible light" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 19 | | fancyCount | 10 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 1 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 4 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 5 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 6 | "Rory explained (explain)" | | 7 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 8 | "Rory pressed (press)" | | 9 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.422 | | leniency | 0.844 | | rawRatio | 0.526 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |