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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR44YF5P390K428RT8EW9A
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Model:
Z.AI GLM 4.6
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
48.9s
Cost:
$0.005857
Provider:
DeepInfra
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The air on the other side of the ancient oaks tasted different. It was clean, sharp, and carried the scent of a thousand blossoms Rory couldn’t name, all blooming at once. She stepped forward, her boots sinking
slightly
into a carpet of moss that was a deeper, more vibrant green than any she had ever seen. It gave
softly
under her
weight
, like a living thing. The ordinary sounds of Richmond Park—the distant traffic, the shouts of children, the barking of dogs—had vanished, replaced by a
profound
and humming silence. Rory’s hand went to the Heartstone pendant at her throat. Back in the mundane world, it had been a familiar, faint warmth against her skin, a low-grade thrum that promised proximity to power. Here, in this impossible clearing, it was
utterly
cold. A chill, deep and sterile, radiated from the crimson gem, a
stark
contrast to the living warmth of the grove. It felt like a piece of Dymas, a fragment of Hel’s gluttonous heat, protesting the Fae-touched air. Isolde moved ahead of them, her silver hair a river of moonlight against the impossible green. She left no footprints on the moss. Her pale lavender eyes were wide, not with surprise, but with a kind of serene homecoming. “The Veil is thin here,” she said, her voice like the chiming of tiny, glass bells. “A fold in the
tapestry
.” Nyx was less solid. They
weren’t walking
so much as flowing, a humanoid silhouette of deeper shadow that rippled at the edges of the grove’s dappled light. Their voice, when it came, was a whisper that
seemed to
come from the rustle of the leaves all around them. *“The barrier is not a wall. It is a membrane. And we have slipped through its pores.”* Rory drew a slow breath, trying to ground herself. She was a delivery driver from Cardiff, a woman who’d fled a broken relationship for a cramped flat above a London bar. Logic and routine were the anchors of her life. This place was the antithesis of both. Her gaze swept the clearing. Wildflowers, in colours that had no names, bloomed in tangled profusion. Petals
shimmered
with an iridescent sheen, like oil on water. Some glowed with a soft, internal luminescence. A vine with sapphire-blue blossoms curled around the trunk of an ancient birch tree, its bark the colour of polished bone. She reached out and touched the moss. It was cool and damp, but beneath her fingers, she felt a faint, slow pulse, like the heartbeat of a sleeping giant. She snatched her hand back, a prickle of unease crawling up her spine. “Do not be frightened of the life here,” Isolde said, turning back to her. The Seer’s feet were bare, yet she seemed untouched by the damp or the chill. “It is older and slower than yours. It does not mean you harm.” Rory nodded, feeling foolish. She forced herself to focus, to be the cool-headed person her friends relied on. She checked her
watch
. The second hand
was frozen
at twelve. She frowned, tapping the crystal. Nothing. She held it to her ear. No tick. A knot of anxiety tightened in her stomach. “My
watch
stopped.” Nyx’s shadow-form coalesced beside her, their faintly glowing violet eyes regarding the timepiece with detached curiosity. *“Time is a mortal construct. A river you have built banks for. Here… the river has no banks.”* As if to prove the point, the light in the grove
began to
shift. It wasn’t the setting of the sun; the sky above the canopy of trees remained a soft, perpetual twilight. The light itself was changing, deepening from a pearlescent grey to a soft, golden hue, as if the grove had its own personal dawn. It happened without a source, without a sun. The light simply *was*. And as it changed, the colours of the flowers shifted with it, the blue blossons deepening to violet, the glowing ones flaring brighter. They moved deeper into the grove, Isolde leading them toward its centre. The air grew warmer, filled with the sweet, heavy perfume of the blossoms. Rory felt the Fae-forged blade at her hip stir. The moonsilver dagger, a gift from Isolde, was always cold to the touch, a sliver of captured winter. Now, it felt different. A faint, thrumming energy vibrated through the sheath, a low hum that
resonated
in her bones. In this golden light, the leaf-shaped blade
began to
emit a faint, silvery luminescence of its own, a soft counterpoint to the glowing flora. They came to the heart of the grove. A pool of water, so still and clear it looked like a pane of glass, occupied the centre. It reflected the sky and the impossible trees with perfect clarity, yet there was no bottom visible. The water
seemed to
go on forever, into another place. Willows with weeping boughs of pure white surrounded it, their long, slender leaves chiming
softly
in a breeze Rory could not feel on her skin. Rory knelt at the edge of the pool, her reflection staring back at her. Her bright blue eyes seemed wider, more
luminous
in this light. The small crescent scar on her left wrist stood out, pale against her skin. She dipped her fingers into the water. It was neither warm nor cold, but it felt thick, substantial, like liquid
silk
. As she pulled her hand out, the water clung to her skin for a moment before beading and rolling off, leaving her
perfectly
dry. “What is this place?” she whispered, the words barely disturbing the silence. Isolde stood beside her, her gaze fixed on the pool’s impossible depths. “A
sanctuary
. A memory. A promise,” she said, her voice full of a melancholy beauty. “It is a place where what was, what is, and what could be all drink from the same spring.” *“It is a place outside the story,”* Nyx added, their form
wavering
at the edge of the pool. *“A footnote between pages. A useful place to hide. Or to find what was lost.”* Rory looked from the Seer to the Shade, then back to the shimmering water. The cold pendant against her throat and the humming blade at her hip felt like two opposing forces, two anchors pulling her in different directions. One was a reminder of the Hell she
was tied
to, the other a gift from the Fae she now courted. Here, in this timeless, wondrous place, she felt the immense, terrifying space between them. She
was standing
on the edge of a world far larger and more dangerous than she had ever imagined, and for the first time, she
truly
understood how small she was. And yet, looking at the impossible beauty of the grove, she didn’t feel afraid. She felt a spark of something else. Awe. And a terrifying, exhilarating sense of possibility.
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2/17/2026, 2:51:47 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
66.6667%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
5
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Isolde said, turning back to her [back]"
47.8714%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1151
totalAiIsmAdverbs
6
found
0
adverb
"perfectly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
2
adverb
"softly"
count
2
3
adverb
"utterly"
count
1
4
adverb
"truly"
count
1
highlights
0
"perfectly"
1
"slightly"
2
"softly"
3
"utterly"
4
"truly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
13.1190%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1151
totalAiIsms
10
found
0
word
"luminous"
count
1
1
word
"tapestry"
count
1
2
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
3
word
"resonated"
count
1
4
word
"shimmered"
count
1
5
word
"wavering"
count
1
6
word
"silk"
count
1
7
word
"profound"
count
1
8
word
"stark"
count
1
9
word
"weight"
count
1
highlights
0
"luminous"
1
"tapestry"
2
"sanctuary"
3
"resonated"
4
"shimmered"
5
"wavering"
6
"silk"
7
"profound"
8
"stark"
9
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
81
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
4
narrationSentences
81
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
85
matches
(empty)
85.0570%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
17
mean
67.18
std
30.07
cv
0.448
sampleLengths
0
90
1
79
2
60
3
65
4
101
5
42
6
42
7
54
8
34
9
92
10
96
11
78
12
84
13
12
14
46
15
33
16
134
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
81
matches
0
"was frozen"
1
"was tied"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
148
matches
0
"weren’t walking"
1
"was standing"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1035
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
34
adverbRatio
0.03285024154589372
lyAdverbCount
10
lyAdverbRatio
0.00966183574879227
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
85
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
85
mean
13.44
std
6.76
cv
0.503
sampleLengths
0
12
1
19
2
25
3
10
4
24
5
10
6
23
7
9
8
20
9
17
10
16
11
7
12
16
13
16
14
5
15
4
16
23
17
21
18
17
19
9
20
22
21
9
22
7
23
5
24
11
25
10
26
7
27
21
28
7
29
22
30
13
31
14
32
15
33
13
34
4
35
14
36
4
37
7
38
5
39
1
40
6
41
2
42
8
43
3
44
16
45
18
46
14
47
19
48
24
49
8
56.4706%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.35294117647058826
totalSentences
85
uniqueOpeners
30
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
5
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"she said, her voice like the chiming of tiny, glass bells (say, like)"
1
"Isolde said, turning back to her (say, turn)"
2
"whispered (whisper)"
3
"Nyx added, their form wavering at the edge of the pool (add, waver)"
80.5403%