| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.20% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1316 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1316 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "marble" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "scanned" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "porcelain" | | 10 | "beacon" | | 11 | "gloom" | | 12 | "shattered" | | 13 | "tracing" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "anticipation" | | 16 | "echoed" | | 17 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 86.69% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 4 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a chill" | | 1 | "r in longing" | | 2 | "d with anticipation" | | 3 | "d in wonder" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1310 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1283 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.25 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Veil | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Shade | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Seer | 1 | | Indigo | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Aurora | 16 | | Fae | 4 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Dymas | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Veil" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Seer" | | 6 | "Aurora" | | 7 | "Prince" | | 8 | "Belphegor" | | 9 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.876 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 87.50% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if greeting old friends, but his eyes were empty hollows" | | 1 | "as if begging for a draught of the honey fountain’s endless offering" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1310 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.12% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 72.78 | | std | 10.95 | | cv | 0.15 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 79 | | 3 | 79 | | 4 | 71 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 95 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 70 | | 9 | 80 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 84 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 69 | | 14 | 73 | | 15 | 77 | | 16 | 53 | | 17 | 81 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 218 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "She knelt and unwound a ribbon of lichen from one branch; its surface glimmered with shifting lights, as though a hundred embers swirled behind its skin." | | 1 | "When she touched it, a low hum thrummed up her fingers—an echo of something alive, hungry." | | 2 | "Aurora felt a chill in their presence—in Nyx lay the echo of the realms between realms, and here those boundaries sagged." | | 3 | "Aurora rose, pressing thumb to her scar—an anchor to the mortal world." | | 4 | "Every ward in this place was carved of hunger; every doorway, a mouth waiting to swallow." | | 5 | "Shadows slithered through the bushes—long, twisting shapes that melted if stared at too long." | | 6 | "Isolde’s voice murmured, “Beware the price of indulgence—it demands its due.” The shadow at Aurora’s flank stretched and recoiled; Nyx’s form solidified, arm outstretched." | | 7 | "She drew in a ragged breath and touched the Heartstone; it pulsed bright, a beacon guiding her steps." | | 8 | "The fountain’s honey-yellow surface rippled, and somewhere in the distance, a low, ravenous growl echoed—a reminder that here, indulgence was never innocent, and every gift demanded its price." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1298 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.020801232665639446 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003852080123266564 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 15.06 | | std | 7.39 | | cv | 0.491 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 55.94% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3563218390804598 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 97.65% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She inhaled, tasting the tang" | | 1 | "She felt the Veil thin" | | 2 | "She knelt and unwound a" | | 3 | "Their faint violet eyes glowed" | | 4 | "it breathed, and the hum" | | 5 | "She spoke in a voice" | | 6 | "She retrieved the Fae-forged blade," | | 7 | "She sheathed it at her" | | 8 | "She could taste the latent" | | 9 | "They advanced into the orchard’s" | | 10 | "She knelt and tore a" | | 11 | "It popped on her tongue," | | 12 | "She tried to spit it" | | 13 | "They raised goblets of molten" | | 14 | "She drew in a ragged" | | 15 | "He inclined his head as" | | 16 | "She stepped forward and rattled" | | 17 | "She sprang up, letting the" | | 18 | "She placed the flat of" | | 19 | "It shook free of its" |
| | ratio | 0.306 | |
| 30.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "A sliver of rippling air" | | 1 | "Aurora pressed a hand to" | | 2 | "She inhaled, tasting the tang" | | 3 | "The world shivered, then bloomed" | | 4 | "She felt the Veil thin" | | 5 | "She knelt and unwound a" | | 6 | "Nyx drifted beside her, a" | | 7 | "Their faint violet eyes glowed" | | 8 | "Aurora felt a chill in" | | 9 | "A soft whisper brushed her" | | 10 | "it breathed, and the hum" | | 11 | "Isolde followed, her silver hair" | | 12 | "The Seer’s pale lavender eyes" | | 13 | "She spoke in a voice" | | 14 | "Aurora rose, pressing thumb to" | | 15 | "She retrieved the Fae-forged blade," | | 16 | "She sheathed it at her" | | 17 | "Every ward in this place" | | 18 | "She could taste the latent" | | 19 | "They advanced into the orchard’s" |
| | ratio | 0.859 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 32.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Beneath her boots, the floor was smooth stone inlaid with pale quartz veins that glowed faintly underfoot." | | 1 | "Nyx drifted beside her, a silhouette of living shadow that flickered between solid form and mist." | | 2 | "It popped on her tongue, releasing syrup that tasted of memories not her own: the clink of goblets, laughter that turned to screams, the snap of bones." | | 3 | "A wisp of darkness darted toward the phantom table, dissolving it into a swirl of motes that vanished." | | 4 | "George, a chef of wrought-iron mask and crimson robes, materialized at the far end, wielding a carving knife that dripped molten fat." | | 5 | "He inclined his head as if greeting old friends, but his eyes were empty hollows." | | 6 | "She placed the flat of her dagger against the wood, and the moonsilver blade glowed, slicing through enchantments that clung like cobwebs." | | 7 | "She felt the pulse of Dymas in her veins, a tide of insatiable hunger that threatened to drown her in longing." | | 8 | "A line of black marble benches circled the fountain, each cusp carved with a sinning soul’s face, eyes turned upward as if begging for a draught of the honey fo…" | | 9 | "The world felt unnaturally close: the bones of the courtyard shining white under the amber sky, the waxen black vines curled around pillars, the knotted roots t…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "it breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "She spoke (speak)" | | 2 | "Isolde’s voice murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |