Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR54Z3EQXT6CTSKR2WBRK1

Run Details

Duration:
11.2s
Cost:
$0.000951
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air thickened, tasting of ozone and damp earth, a stark contrast to the crisp, pre-dawn chill of Richmond Park. Aurora stumbled, her hand flying out to catch herself against the rough bark of an ancient oak. Beside her, Nyx solidified from the shadows, their form coalescing like smoke caught in a sudden draft. They let out a breath, a sound like dry leaves skittering across pavement. “That was… jarring,” Nyx’s whispery voice filled the sudden quiet. “The passage is usually less… visceral.” Aurora pushed herself upright, already scanning their surroundings. They stood at the edge of a clearing bathed in a light that wasn't sunlight. Golden motes danced in the air, suspended there as if the very atmosphere was alive. Towering trees with bark like polished obsidian framed the space, their leaves a vibrant, impossible hue of amethyst and emerald. Strange, bell-shaped flowers, their petals shimmering with an inner luminescence, grew in plush carpets underfoot, emitting a faint, sweet perfume that mingled with the earthy scent. “Visceral is one word for it,” Aurora murmured, her eyes wide. She touched the rough bark of the oak again, grounding herself. The small crescent scar on her left wrist throbbed faintly, a phantom ache that always accompanied moments of heightened awareness. Richmond Park was familiar, a place she’d sometimes escaped to when London felt too suffocating. But this… this was something else entirely. “Isolde wasn’t exaggerating about the ‘pocket between realms’.” Nyx glided forward, their shadowy form flowing rather than stepping. They reached for one of the luminescent flowers, their translucent fingers passing through it with only a faint resistance. “The Veil is thinner here, naturally. The Grove breathes with both sides.” Nyx turned, their faintly glowing violet eyes fixed on Aurora. “You feel it, don’t you? The pull.” Aurora did. A subtle tugging sensation, deep in her chest, originating from the Heartstone Pendant nestled beneath her shirt. The crimson gemstone pulsed with a faint inner warmth, a familiar comfort that now seemed amplified in this strange place. It had been a gift, left on her doorstep with no explanation, and it had pulsed with that same warmth when she’d first stepped through a shimmering tear in the night near the restaurant, a portal to somewhere… else. She hadn’t understood its significance then, not truly. Now, standing in this Fae-touched clearing, the pendant’s warmth felt like a beacon. “It’s… beautiful,” she breathed, taking a hesitant step into the clearing. The ground beneath her boots yielded like moss, soft and springy. Wildflowers, impossibly vibrant, brushed against her ankles. There were no footprints where she stepped, only the gentle sway of the blooms that had briefly been disturbed. “Beauty is a dangerous lure,” Nyx cautioned, though their voice held a touch of awe. “The Fae Courts are not known for their hospitality to mortals. Even exiled Fae can retain powerful… habits.” Aurora nodded, her gaze sweeping across the grove. Ancient, lichen-covered standing stones, taller than any she’d seen outside of druidic ruins, marked the perimeter of the clearing, their surfaces etched with swirling, unreadable runes. They seemed to hum with a low, resonant energy that vibrated in Aurora’s bones. Time felt strange, stretched thin and elastic. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside. She glanced at her watch. It had stopped. “How do we find Isolde?” she asked, her voice a little louder now, the unease sharpening. The sheer otherworldly beauty of the place was beginning to be tinged with a deep, unsettling strangeness. The air hummed, yes, but not with calm. It was a thrumming energy, unpredictable and ancient. “She will find *us*,” Nyx replied. “Her senses are keen. She knows we have arrived.” As if on cue, a faint, melodic chime echoed through the grove. The sound seemed to emanate from everywhere and nowhere at once, weaving through the rustling leaves and the hum of the standing stones. Aurora instinctively reached for the dagger Isolde had given her, the Fae-Forged Blade. Its moonsilver hilt was always cold, a sensation that now felt amplified in the Grove’s peculiar atmosphere. She drew it, the slender, leaf-shaped blade catching the ambient light, faintly luminescent. It felt powerful, alien, yet strangely familiar in her hand. From the heart of the grove, a figure emerged from the dappled light. Isolde Varga, the Half-Fae seer. Her silver hair cascaded down her back like liquid moonlight, and her pale lavender eyes, ancient and knowing, regarded them with an inscrutable gaze. She moved with an ethereal grace, her bare feet making no sound on the soft earth, leaving no footprints. “The child of earth and the shadow between realms,” Isolde’s voice was like the chime that had heralded her arrival, melodic and imbued with a resonance that bypassed the ears and settled directly into the soul. “You come seeking answers. The threads of fate are tangled, and the pattern grows… chaotic.” Aurora lowered the Fae blade slightly, though she kept it within easy reach. “Isolde. We need to know about the portal. The one that opened last night.” Isolde tilted her head, a subtle, almost imperceptible movement. “A tear in the Veil, a whisper from the abyss. Such things do not open without intent, nor without consequence.” She gestured with a delicate hand, her pale fingers leaving trails of faint light in the air. “You carry a fragment of Dymas, child of earth. Does it sing to you of the feast?” The Heartstone Pendant pulsed again, warmer this time, a distinct thrum that Aurora could feel even through her thick jacket. She touched it, the crimson gemstone cool against her skin as if absorbing her own heat. “Dymas? Gluttony?” The words felt strange on her tongue, like foreign concepts she was only just beginning to grasp. Prince Belphegor’s domain. The thought sent a shiver down her spine. “I… I don’t understand.” “Misdirection is the Fae’s oldest art,” Isolde’s lips curved in a subtle smile, though her eyes remained unreadable. “But truth, even when veiled, will find its way. The portal you stepped through… it leads to a place of endless hunger. A place where desire is the currency, and indulgence the only law.” Nyx shifted beside Aurora, their form rippling as if the Shadow they were made of was uneasy. “A Hel portal? That close to Earth? The Wardens should have….” “The Veil thins not only in places of power, but in places of desperation,” Isolde interrupted, her voice losing none of its melodic tone. “And the one who opened the rift, they are desperate indeed. They seek to bridge the worlds, to bring something… or someone… through the breach that should remain sealed.” Aurora’s gaze flickered to the pendant. “This pendant… it’s from Dymas?” “A trinket, a bauble, gifted by proximity,” Isolde said. “Its purpose is to guide. To mark the path to where the Prince of Gluttony holds court. And to warn of the dangers within.” The air in the Grove seemed to grow heavier, the sweet perfume of the flowers now cloying. The constant, low hum of the standing stones had intensified, a low thrumming that felt less like energy and more like a warning heartbeat. Aurora tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade. She had fled a bad relationship, taken a part-time job, lived above a bar. She was a delivery driver, not a hero. But the Heartstone pulsed against her skin, a constant, insistent reminder of a destiny she was only beginning to uncover. A destiny inextricably linked to the swirling, dangerous realities that lay just beyond the Veil. “So, what does this mean?” Aurora asked, her voice steadier than she felt. “Someone’s trying to bring something from Hel into our world. And this pendant is showing me the way?” Isolde’s lavender eyes met Aurora’s bright blue ones. “It means the feast is soon to begin, child of earth. And the invited guests are not all welcome.” She paused, a shadow of something akin to pity crossing her ethereal features. “You are brave, or perhaps foolish. The path to Dymas is fraught with temptations that can unravel the very soul. But your friend, the one who walks in shadow… they will be a loyal companion. And the gift of the Fae courts… it will serve you well against the hungering things that dwell in the dark.” Aurora looked at Nyx, who gave a slow, almost imperceptible nod. They were an enigma, a being of shadow and whisper, but they had been steadfast, accompanying her on this bewildering journey. As for the Fae-Forged Blade, it still felt alien in her hand, a testament to the strange alliances being forged in the increasingly perilous landscape of her life. The grove, with its impossible beauty, now felt less like a sanctuary and more like a gateway to a thousand unknown dangers. The scent of wildflowers, once intoxicating, now spoke of entrapment.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde’s voice was like the chime that had heralded her arrival, melodic and imbued with a resonance that bypassed the ears and settled directly into the soul [like directly]"
73.0458% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1484
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"truly"
2"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1484
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"ethereal"
count2
1
word"testament"
count1
2
word"beacon"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"enigma"
count1
5
word"tinged"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"resonance"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"glided"
count1
10
word"otherworldly"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count2
12
word"stark"
count1
13
word"echoed"
count1
14
word"etched"
count1
15
word"unravel"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"testament"
2"beacon"
3"sanctuary"
4"enigma"
5"tinged"
6"throbbed"
7"resonance"
8"flickered"
9"glided"
10"otherworldly"
11"unreadable"
12"stark"
13"echoed"
14"etched"
15"unravel"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences82
matches
0"was uneasy"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences82
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
92.2927% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean56.73
std26.84
cv0.473
sampleLengths
067
116
284
372
458
599
648
733
872
949
1015
1188
1261
1351
1427
1563
1670
1752
1828
1953
2011
2133
22106
2331
2496
2592
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences82
matches
0"been disturbed"
1"were made"
2"being forged"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs164
matches
0"was beginning"
86.0734% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1090
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"Strange, bell-shaped flowers,"
1"slender, leaf-shaped blade"
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.04220183486238532
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.01651376146788991
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean15.05
std8.94
cv0.594
sampleLengths
020
117
217
313
410
56
68
715
815
920
1026
1111
1211
1320
1415
152
165
178
1810
1919
2022
217
222
2317
2420
2538
261
278
2813
2911
3011
317
3219
3315
3418
358
3626
3714
387
399
405
413
4216
4317
448
458
466
479
4812
4923
59.5238% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3877551020408163
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners38
15.9091% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Nyx’s whispery voice filled the sudden quiet (fill)"
1"Aurora murmured, her eyes wide (murmur)"
2"she breathed, taking a hesitant step into the clearing (breathe, take)"
3"Nyx cautioned, though their voice held a touch of awe (caution, hold)"
4"Isolde’s voice was like the chime that had heralded her arrival, melodic and imbued with a resonance that bypassed the ears and settled directly into the soul (be like herald imbue bypass settle directly)"
5"Isolde’s lips curved in a subtle smile, though her eyes remained unreadable (curve remain)"
6"Isolde interrupted, her voice losing none of its melodic tone (interrupt, lose)"
83.9321%