Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1015
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
44
adverbRatio
0.04334975369458128
lyAdverbCount
21
lyAdverbRatio
0.020689655172413793
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
87
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
87
mean
15.74
std
8.62
cv
0.548
sampleLengths
0
15
1
22
2
25
3
19
4
9
5
8
6
13
7
36
8
31
9
17
10
14
11
5
12
29
13
11
14
15
15
24
16
13
17
14
18
22
19
19
20
20
21
14
22
18
23
15
24
5
25
18
26
10
27
15
28
15
29
5
30
15
31
10
32
8
33
11
34
13
35
16
36
8
37
47
38
14
39
20
40
11
41
28
42
16
43
20
44
9
45
20
46
16
47
9
48
4
49
20
55.1724%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
7
diversityRatio
0.3793103448275862
totalSentences
87
uniqueOpeners
33
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
21
fancyCount
16
fancyTags
0
"she called out to the tabby cat who had been meowing insistently for the last ten minutes (call out meow insistently)"
1
"she countered, her hand tightening on the doorknob (counter, tighten)"
2
"Lucien said, his gaze dropping to Ptolemy, who had stopped meowing and was now staring at him with unusual intensity (say, drop stop meowing be staring)"
3
"she said, closing the door and engaging all three deadbolts (say, close engage)"
4
"he said, his voice softer than she expected (say, expect)"
5
"she shot back, though even to her own ears, the protest sounded weak (shoot back, sound)"
6
"she said, her voice trembling slightly (say, tremble slightly)"
7
"he said quietly, the amber eye seeming to glow in the dim light of the flat (say quietly, seem glow)"
8
"she replied, turning away to busy herself with straightening a pile of books that didn't need straightening (reply, turn away straighten do not need straightening)"
9
"he admitted, his gaze dropping to her lips before meeting her eyes again (admit, drop meet)"
10
"she said, her voice shaking (say, shake)"
11
"he said, reaching out to touch her face, his fingers cool against her skin (say, reach out touch cool)"
12
"she whispered, the confession tearing itself from her throat (whisper, tear)"
13
"he murmured (murmur)"
14
"she replied, her fingers tracing the line of his jaw (reply, trace)"
15
"she said finally, her heart pounding (say finally, pound)"