Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR5JPTQKW97SSJP18X0S0P

Run Details

Duration:
26.9s
Cost:
$0.004922
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy, metallic clunk that echoed in the narrow stairwell, followed by the swift ratcheting of the second and first. Rory stood on the other side of the door, her knuckles still hovering mid-air where she had been about to knock again, her delivery bag heavy against her hip. She had rehearsed a dozen excuses during the walk from the Golden Empress, ranging from a mistaken address to a desperate need for salt, but none of them prepared her for the man who filled the doorway. Lucien Moreau looked exactly as he had three years ago, and yet entirely different. The tailored charcoal suit was sharper, the fabric seeming to drink the dim hallway light rather than reflect it. His platinum hair was slicked back with precision, revealing the stark architecture of his face. But it was his eyes that stopped her breath in her throat—the heterochromatic mismatch of amber and black that had once haunted her dreams and now pinned her to the spot with an intensity that felt physical. "Aurora," he said. The name fell from his lips in that smooth, accented baritone, rolling over the syllables of her formal name as if testing its weight. He didn't step back to invite her in; he simply stared, his cane tapping a silent, impatient rhythm against the worn linoleum of the entryway. "It's Rory," she corrected automatically, her voice steady despite the sudden hammering of her heart. She shifted the strap of her delivery bag, the smell of garlic and chili oil clinging to her clothes, a stark contrast to the faint scent of sandalwood and ozone that drifted from him. "And I'm not here for you. I'm here for Eva." "Eva is not currently available," Lucien replied, his gaze dropping briefly to the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, visible where her sleeve had ridden up. A flicker of something unreadable passed through his amber eye before the mask slid back into place. "She asked me to watch the flat while she attended to... urgent matters in the city." Rory frowned, her cool-headed logic kicking in to override the flustered heat rising in her cheeks. Eva wouldn't leave Ptolemy alone with a stranger, let alone a half-demon fixer with a reputation for weaving webs so intricate even the angels got tangled. "Where is she? And why do you have her keys?" "Situation specific," Lucien said, finally stepping aside. The movement was fluid, lacking the human hesitation of weight transfer. "Come in, Rory. Standing in the hallway invites questions we neither of us wish to answer from the neighbors. Or worse, from things that listen in the walls." She hesitated, her hand gripping the doorframe. The history between them was a minefield of unsaid apologies and a final night in Cardiff that had ended with her running to London and him vanishing into the shadows of Marseille. Attraction had been the spark, but hurt had been the fuel that kept the fire burning long after they parted. Yet, the threat in his voice, subtle but undeniable, tipped the scale. She stepped across the threshold. Eva's flat was a chaotic shrine to research, just as she remembered, though the air felt heavier now, charged with a static that made the hair on her arms stand up. Books, scrolls, and handwritten notes covered every available surface, spilling off the small dining table and piling up on the sofa. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, sat atop a stack of grimoires, blinking slowly at Lucien with inherent feline judgment. "You've made yourself at home," Rory observed, dropping her delivery bag by the door. She kept her distance, positioning herself near the window that overlooked Brick Lane. The street below was alive with the Friday night crowd, a comforting stream of normalcy. "I am merely maintaining the perimeter," Lucien corrected. He moved to the center of the room, leaning lightly on his ivory-handled cane. The tip clicked against the floorboards. "You look well, Aurora. London suits you. Though the delivery uniform is a surprising choice for a woman with your intellect." "Jobs are hard to come by when your reference list includes an abusive ex-boyfriend and a sudden departure from law school," she snapped, the defensiveness rising before she could tamp it down. "And it's Rory. How many times do I have to say it?" "Forgive me. Old habits are difficult to break, especially when the subject of the habit is as memorable as you." He turned to face her fully, the amber and black eyes locking onto her bright blue ones. "Why did you come here tonight? Truly?" Rory looked away, focusing on a stack of papers detailing local ley lines. "Eva texted me. Said she needed the notes on the Avaros realm translation. She sounded panicked." "She is often panicked when dealing with entities from my father's side of the family," Lucien said dryly. "She sent the files an hour ago. You were not needed." "Then why didn't you tell me that over the phone?" Rory challenged, turning back to him. "Why let me walk all the way from Soho in the rain?" "Because I wanted to see you." The admission hung in the air, simple and devastating. The noise of the curry house below seemed to fade, replaced by the thudding of her own pulse. Rory took a step forward, then stopped, acutely aware of the space between them—a chasm filled with three years of silence. "That's not a good enough reason, Lucien," she said, her voice softer now. "We left things... broken. You didn't even say goodbye." "I left to protect you," he countered, his voice tightening. "You were in Cardiff, surrounded by humans who knew nothing of the shadows crawling at their feet. I am what crawls in the shadows, Rory. Staying would have painted a target on your back the size of London." "And leaving me without an explanation did what exactly? Made me feel safer?" She laughed, a short, brittle sound. "It made me wonder if I meant anything at all. It made me think I was just another job to you, another loose end to tie up before you moved on to your next crisis." Lucien's expression fractured. The impeccable composure slipped, revealing the exhaustion beneath. He took a step toward her, the cane forgotten at his side. "You were never a job. You were the only thing that made the noise stop." He reached out, his hand hovering near her face. Rory didn't pull away. She remembered the feel of his skin, cool but alive, and the way he used to look at her as if she were the only source of light in a dark world. The anger that had sustained her for so long began to dissipate, leaving behind a raw, aching vulnerability. "I hated you for leaving," she whispered. "I know," he said. "I hated myself more." His fingers finally brushed her cheek, tracing the line of her jaw. The touch sent a jolt through her, electric and familiar. The scent of sandalwood enveloped her, drowning out the smell of takeout food. She leaned into his hand despite herself, her eyes fluttering closed for a brief second before snapping open. "We can't do this again, Lucien," she said, pulling back slightly, though she didn't move out of his reach. "You're a fixer. You solve problems and disappear. I'm trying to build a life here. A real one." "And what if I told you I'm done fixing everyone else's problems?" Lucien asked, his voice low, urgent. "What if I told you I came to London not for Eva, but because I heard you were here? Because the thought of you being in the same city and not knowing it was unbearable?" Rory searched his face, looking for the lie, the angle, the hidden agenda. But all she saw was a raw, desperate honesty that mirrored her own hidden longing. The complicated terms on which they had parted—the fear, the misunderstanding, the sacrifice—still existed, but they felt smaller now in the face of his presence. "Eva is going to kill us if we burn her flat down with all these papers around," Rory murmured, a faint smile touching her lips. Lucien's mouth curved in response, a genuine smile that transformed his severe features. "Then we shall have to be very careful." He stepped closer again, closing the remaining distance. This time, when he kissed her, it wasn't with the urgency of a farewell, but with the slow, deliberate promise of a beginning. It tasted of rain and old regrets and something new, something fragile and fiercely protected. Rory's hands found the lapels of his charcoal suit, gripping the fabric as if anchoring herself to the earth. Outside, London roared on, indifferent and vast, but in the cramped, book-filled flat on Brick Lane, the world had narrowed down to the warmth of his hands and the certainty that some stories, no matter how complicated, were not meant to end.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
8.3333% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"she corrected automatically, her voice steady despite the sudden hammering of her heart [automatically]"
1"Lucien replied, his gaze dropping briefly to the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, visible where her sleeve had ridden up [briefly]"
2"Lucien said, finally stepping aside [finally aside]"
3"she snapped, the defensiveness rising before she could tamp it down [down]"
4"Lucien said dryly [dryly]"
5"she said, pulling back slightly, though she didn't move out of his reach [back slightly]"
66.8655% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1509
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"truly"
4"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.7309% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1509
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"intricate"
count1
3
word"stark"
count2
4
word"fractured"
count1
5
word"normalcy"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"unreadable"
2"intricate"
3"stark"
4"fractured"
5"normalcy"
6"weight"
7"echoed"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
97.7919% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean46.84
std23.06
cv0.492
sampleLengths
092
185
252
359
459
552
646
776
870
942
1049
1144
1244
1329
1429
1528
166
1748
1822
1948
2054
2138
2263
237
248
2553
2637
2753
2853
2925
3021
31107
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"was slicked"
1"got tangled"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs171
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1044
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.034482758620689655
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.014367816091954023
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean17.23
std9.4
cv0.545
sampleLengths
026
129
237
314
419
515
637
73
824
925
1015
1134
1210
1326
1417
1516
1616
1726
1810
197
2011
2128
227
2332
2420
2512
265
2731
2821
2918
3014
3113
3215
338
3414
356
3621
3732
3812
3937
407
4113
4216
4318
4411
4516
4612
476
489
4918
53.6398% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3563218390804598
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners31
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"she corrected automatically, her voice steady despite the sudden hammering of her heart (correct automatically)"
1"Lucien replied, his gaze dropping briefly to the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, visible where her sleeve had ridden up (reply, drop briefly leave ride up)"
2"Lucien said, finally stepping aside (say, finally step aside)"
3"Rory observed, dropping her delivery bag by the door (observe, drop)"
4"Lucien corrected (correct)"
5"she snapped, the defensiveness rising before she could tamp it down (snap, rise tamp)"
6"Lucien said dryly (say dryly)"
7"he countered, his voice tightening (counter, tighten)"
8"laughed (laugh)"
9"she whispered (whisper)"
10"she said, pulling back slightly, though she didn't move out of his reach (say, pull does not move out)"
11"Rory murmured, a faint smile touching her lips (murmur, touch)"
78.0605%