Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR5Q72GPST0ZM2TNNR9G42

Run Details

Duration:
48.2s
Cost:
$0.011073
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The slit in the world felt like a wound and a promise at once. Aurora had learned to notice such things—the way the air hummed a little wrong, the way pigeons skittered from sidewalks as if the city smelled a storm before it came. Tonight the noise was a softer frequency: a faint, steady thrum at her sternum where the Heartstone hung, warm as someone else's palm. It thrummed when she breathed. It throbbed when Nyx reached for her shoulder with fingers that were not fingers, with a touch that scattered warm dust like a sigh. "Here," Nyx whispered, and the voice was only wind where it should have been solid sound, old paper sliding. Their outline leaned taller in the lamplight, a coat of shadow thrown over a skeleton city. The faint violet in their eyes glowed like coals buried under ash. They had found the seam behind an alley cluttered with refuse and the smell of fryer oil—an odder place for a doorway to the Prince of Gluttony's realm. Nyx had a way of knowing thresholds. Aurora reminded herself they weren't following curiosity alone; the pendant insisted, pulsing harder, as if remembering a road it had once walked. Isolde moved beside them like an answer to a question no one had asked. She wore the pale calm of someone more used to asking than being asked; her silver hair caught the streetlight and threw it back strange. Even standing in the city, her feet seemed reluctant to leave contact with Earth—her footprints had stopped the moment she stepped into the lane, as if she now walked above the ground. For all she was a seer who left no prints, in the way she tilted her head and held her hands together she read like a book. "A ribbon of amber waits on the other side," she said. Her voice didn't so much speak as set a riddle down on the pavement. "If you go hungry for what you have not tasted, the ribbon will feed you. If you go full of what you cannot name, it will unmake your name." Isolde could not lie. She could drown truths in the dark of riddles, but the bones beneath them were true. Aurora felt that; the pendant thrummed in agreement. She slid her fingers over the silver chain where the Heartstone lay—a thumbnail of crimson that glowed faint from within—and felt heat bloom against her palm. It was only heat, and then it was more: a pull that made her bones feel like something set in sugar. She tightened her grip. Nyx moved first, folding into the slit like smoke, and the alley inhaled them. Aurora tried to think of the Veil—those lectures from late nights, the Wardens' dry pamphlets—how it shimmered and sometimes tore at rift points. The pamphlet had a diagram, neat and lethal. Now the diagram was wrong. The world spilled orange into a valley of light, and the seam closed behind them with the soft click of a drawer sliding home. Amber sky, the nature of the word fat with heat and late sunlight, arched above a place that remembered sun but not the one on Earth. It hung like a honeyed glaze, thick enough to taste. Vines braided themselves through columns of stone, and the leaves shone as if polished. The air smelled—thick, layered—of cinnamon and roasting meat, wildflower honey and the wetness of crushed grapes. It was all a beginning: a scent that wanted to collect in lungs and settle there, peaceful and obscene. Aurora's first step was on soil that did not give but smiled. It was soft and springing, like bread dough beneath a chef's palm. Each footfall whispered. The vineyards rolled in impossible crescents, grape strings heavy enough to pull down branches into bows and curtains. Workers moved beneath the leaves—helbound men and women with Earth-worn hands, their faces lit by the same amber as everything else. They did not look like the living exactly; they moved with an economy sharpened by endless repetition, and their eyes carried dim, patient hunger. Somewhere up the hill a trumpet laughed like a mouthful of coins. A great table sprawled out beneath oaks whose root flanges curled like the edges of carved pie crust. Plates the size of millstones held dishes that steamed with steam that smelled like memory. In the near distance towers the size of bellies rose, and between them chefs in robes embroidered with spices yelled and gestured. The whole valley sounded like a kitchen mid-war: the friction of knives, the clink of silver, laughter that doubled and became a melody. "Feasts for rulers," Isolde said, but it was more a curtain pulled back than a description. "They cook what you are likely to trade." The Fae blade at Aurora's belt was cold enough to make the hairs on her arm stand up. Isolde had given it to her and the moonsilver never warmed, even under a sky that seemed to hold sunlight like soup. The blade's faint luminescence fought with the amber; it blinked and became something like a promise to cut through. Nyx drifted ahead, trailing shadow like a flag. At times their form congealed enough to resemble a person in a coat, at times nothing more than a darker absence in the light. They tasted the air with a face that never quite coalesced. "This place tastes of waits," Nyx said, and it sounded like they were telling a secret to a child. "Of bargains left cooling on a sill." At the edge of the main square, a fountain poured wine that ran like quicksilver, dark and vibrant. It splashed into a basin where heads of fruit bobbed and called. When Aurora leaned, she could see reflections in the liquid: not her own face but scenes—brief, vivid—like tasting cards. A childhood bedroom with a blue ceiling and Evan's voice; a courtroom bench from a life she had never chosen; a kitchen downstairs in the Golden Empress where Yu-Fei shouted over sizzling oil. Her stomach clenched as if it were a separate organ with its own memory, answering each reflected image with an ache that wanted to be soothed. "Do not drink," Isolde said, and there was no malice in it—only an angle of her chin and the riddle left hanging with a stone's exactness. "It will show you what you savor until your fingers are empty." Aurora did not go to the basin. The pendant's warmth increased, a steady drum under her collarbone. It had been given to her by hands she did not know; she had worn it like armor. Here it felt like a compass needle. The thought that someone had sent it from this place passed through her like a cold breath and then was rearranged into an image she could hold: a pair of hands setting a small stone into a leather pouch and then letting it fall through a tear in the Veil. A man at a table noticed her. He slid a plate across the polished wood with a smile that was practiced, a tilt of features that had been worked until it shone polite. The dish steamed with a scent that weighed like a story. For an instant Aurora saw, in the shape of the steam, the face of Evan—patient, apologetic—and the ache in her chest tightened. The man’s eyes flicked for a moment like hungry animals startled by movement. "Try," the man said, and his voice was honey wrapped in leather. "A taste to remember them by." Isolde's hand reached for the pendant and paused. "Names on the tongue will become recipes," she murmured. "Be careful what you chew." Nyx laughed then, dry and scattered. They moved closer to the table and let their shadow drift along the dishes. The silverware clinked like little bells. "The rules here are simple," Nyx said, voice in Aurora's ear. "You give what you loved and they'll give you back a better version. Or a worse. Depends on who's holding the ladle." They walked deeper into the market—a place alive with consumption, where stalls sold aromatics that glowed faintly under the amber sky, where a butcher carved meat that shimmered and wept little memories. Aurora's pulse matched the thrum of the pendant. It was hard to think straight with hunger's heavy cousin pressing at her throat—an appetite that had nothing to do with food. It pulled at other things: attention, secrecy, promises, the small corner of your life you had tucked away and told no one. Here those corners were citrus on the air. They found a grove of trees whose leaves were thin plates of sugarglass. Hands could not pry them loose without bleeding light. A boy—no older than sixteen, a worker—sat under one tree and ate a leaf. As he did so, his eyes rolled back and he began to speak in a language that was not any of the ones Aurora knew. The words were stories compressed, compressed and then poured out. Faces who had never met him bowed in his tale. He laughed with tears of oil on his cheeks and did not seem to taste the blood Blossom had taken; he did not register his hands. He was singing the folding of someone else's life into his own. Isolde watched with a face like weather. "They will teach you the impossible price," she said. "You must not be distracted by what they teach you." Aurora understood the warning as something practical. Taste this leaf, and you would trade a memory; taste the wine and you would give your name away in return. The pendant burned. Her scar on her wrist, the small crescent saved from a childhood accident, tingled—tender as if the World had found that curve and wanted to see what it meant. She rolled the chain in her fingers until the Heartstone felt like an ember against her palm. "How long can the Veil hold?" she asked, because feeling the world tilt made her reach for facts as sailors check the seams on a boat. Isolde's eyes went distant, like someone reading a map without touching it. "It breathes with people," she said. "It will tucker and open where the hunger is deepest. The winter will pull it thin, and the Wardens will notice, but for now there is a lull in the watch." She spoke no direct lie. She shaped the truth into the blade of a riddle that kept its edge. In the distance, a banner unfurled with a seam of coin sewn across the hem. Prince Belphegor was not present, not yet; he was rumor and pressure and the taste of the stew. But his court's business slid in like smoke: representatives with mouths too wide and hands that collected what mortals could not see they'd lost. A table of judges sat perched like gulls, their feathers glinting with spices. Every gesture in their kingdom felt like negotiation. Nyx drifted to the edge of a hall where they set out small plates like traps. "Smaller bites for smaller sins," they said. Their silhouette trembled with an excitement that was almost pain. "Here, Aurora—listen." They rested a portion of their shadow on the stone, and in that darkness something slipped out: the echo of another life, as if the land itself had swallowed a memory and was returning a thin, silvered sample. It tasted like Sunday dinners and thick gravy and the sudden knowledge of someone's mercy. Aurora's gut clenched; images slid across the underside of her eyelids—Eva's laugh from a childhood treehouse, the smell of cards in a courtroom she had never sat in. The pendant flared hot and then cool. "Leave it," Isolde said. "You are not what you cannot make yourself from other people's dinners." Aurora's throat worked. In the square people began to unwrap things: treasures, small satisfactions, and the helbound turned these scraps into currency. They had the look of people who had traded away parts of themselves in exchange for a professional's efficiency. A woman with a faded badge pinned to her robe caught Aurora's eye and held it. There was recognition in her glance—another life, perhaps, or a mirror—and Aurora felt the dangerous want: to ask for it back, to ask the fountain to sew up yesterday. Instead she tightened her fingers on the pendant until it pinched. The Heartstone pulsed faster, an erratic drum that told her nothing she could read with easy comfort. Nyx's voice slid behind her, softer, a ghost's hand in the dark. "You will be offered wonder at a price. They price things in the currency you least suspect: the fraction of self you leave on a plate." Beyond the market, a garden opened with an architecture of excess. Trees bent beneath fruit that sang faintly when touched. A pond mirrored the amber without showing where the sky ended and the reflection began. They moved as if toward a center of gravity: a banquet to end a hunger. The farther in they went, the louder the world demanded. Aurora's hands shook—not from cold but from the pressure of wanting to understand what had wanted her here. She remembered Isolde's gift clinking at her left hip and the way the blade had felt like truth. She felt the Veil as a blind weight around her shoulders, and she felt, beneath that, an urge to step forward and see if the Heartstone's warmth was a map or a promise. Nyx's shadow brushed her hand and left a line of cold where it passed over the blade. For the first time since they had crossed, Aurora allowed herself to be surprised: the Fae blade hummed faintly in response, a low, silver note like a metal tongue on a glass rim. "Some doors are made for closing," Isolde said. "Not every feast invites a guest to leave." She turned the last words into a smile and into a riddle that sat between them. "But some doors will open because you asked." They stood in the glow and decided, almost at once, with the gravity of a small choice that felt vast: to look and not swallow; to take notes and not taste. Aurora closed her fist around the pendant and held it close to her chest as if it were a small heart. Beyond them the banquet rose like a sound—the myriad instruments of appetite tuning together—and for a breath Aurora felt every want in the world walking toward her like a lit candle. She smelled Evan and Yu-Fei and a child's scraped knee. She smelled the city where she had fled and the grove where Isolde had planned; she tasted the memory of a place she might never have lived. The world pressed on, indulgent and insistent. Nyx curled a shadow-finger toward a morsel of bread shaped like a ring that had come from some baker's impossible oven. "If you must take," they said, the whisper like a page turning, "take something that cannot be eaten: a lesson, a warning, a truth." Their outline softened at the thought of lessons. "Or don't take at all." Aurora lifted her chin. The pendant felt like a compass, a heartbeat, and a question. Behind the golden laughter and the loud clink of plates, something ancient shifted: the Veil breathed around the seams of their bodies. The world offered them an opulence that was a riddle and a trap; the pendant pulsed in time with her decision. They turned away from the fountain and the great table. For a moment she thought she would burst from the pressure of all the things left untasted, but instead, shoulders steadied, she and Nyx and Isolde strode back the way they had come. The vines rustled, as if disappointed, and a few fruit-slices glistened, watching them leave. When the seam closed behind them, the city smell tasted like rain and petrol and the mundane, and for a second Aurora tasted relief that was almost hungrier than any meal. On the street, the Heartstone was cool again, merely warm as the last breath of a bath. The pendant's glow dimmed but did not go out. Somewhere down the block a dog barked. Aurora's hands ached with the memory of amber light. She had seen an otherworld, felt its wants, and kept her name. For the first time, she understood what Isolde meant when the seer spoke in riddles—that truth could be a thin slice of sugar or a blade, and that sometimes the first taste was the hardest to refuse.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.6667% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Nyx whispered, and the voice was only wind where it should have been solid sound, old paper sliding [only]"
1"Isolde said, but it was more a curtain pulled back than a description [more back]"
2"Isolde said, and there was no malice in it—only an angle of her chin and the riddle left hanging with a stone's exactness [only]"
100.0000% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount2789
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.7304% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount2789
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count2
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"footfall"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"flicked"
2"shimmered"
3"glinting"
4"trembled"
5"weight"
6"footfall"
7"echo"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences155
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences155
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
3"seem to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences168
matches
0"felt that; the"
1"found that curve"
69.3434% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean68.9
std27.06
cv0.393
sampleLengths
096
1104
298
354
479
574
685
790
890
924
1059
1169
12108
1338
1492
1579
1618
1722
1859
1992
20119
2126
2277
2326
2468
2578
2635
2788
2816
2986
3066
3178
32101
3340
3452
3575
3658
3758
3888
3991
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences155
matches
0"being asked"
1"been given"
2"was rearranged"
3"was practiced, been worked"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs430
matches
0"weren't following"
1"were telling"
2"was singing"
3"was returning"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2517
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount68
adverbRatio0.027016289233214145
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0031783869686134287
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences168
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences168
mean16.4
std8.82
cv0.538
sampleLengths
014
130
223
35
424
519
616
712
828
97
1022
1114
1225
1332
1427
1511
1614
1729
184
1916
208
2126
2221
234
2414
2523
268
275
2824
2926
3010
3114
3216
3319
3412
3512
363
3718
3821
3924
4012
4118
4215
4322
4423
4516
468
4718
4822
4919
48.4127% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.31547619047619047
totalSentences168
uniqueOpeners53
41.6667% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered, and the voice was only wind where it should have been solid sound, old paper sliding (whisper, only wind be sound, slide)"
1"Isolde said, but it was more a curtain pulled back than a description (say, be more pull)"
2"Nyx said, and it sounded like they were telling a secret to a child (say, sound like tell)"
3"Isolde said, and there was no malice in it—only an angle of her chin and the riddle left hanging with a stone's exactness (say, does not be no leave hanging)"
4"the man said, and his voice was honey wrapped in leather (say, be wrap)"
5"she murmured (murmur)"
6"Nyx said, voice in Aurora's ear (say, voice)"
7"they said, the whisper like a page turning, Their outline softened at the thought of lessons (say, like turn, soften)"
87.8718%