| 92.86% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 28 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She turned back [back]" | | 1 | "She knelt again [again]" | | 2 | "Evans protested weakly [weakly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.596 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.107 | | effectiveRatio | 0.107 | |
| 86.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1467 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.28% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1467 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "shattered" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "intensity" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "wavered" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "intricate" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.27% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1466 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 30.36% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1003 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 2.39 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 2 | | Harlow | 2 | | Quinn | 24 | | Tube | 1 | | Morris | 1 | | Evans | 13 | | Veil | 3 | | Compass | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Market | 2 | | Detective | 2 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Morris" | | 4 | "Evans" | | 5 | "Market" | | 6 | "Detective" |
| | places | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Compass" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.304 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed thicker deeper than the lighting should allow" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.682 | | wordCount | 1466 | | matches | | 0 | "not like heat haze, but like oil on water" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 35.76 | | std | 20.38 | | cv | 0.57 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 66 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 43 | | 23 | 60 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 78 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 68 | | 31 | 55 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 37 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 66 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 27 |
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| 86.19% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "been sucked" | | 1 | "was etched" | | 2 | "was attuned" | | 3 | "were etched" | | 4 | "been sacrificed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 190 | | matches | | 0 | "was reacting" | | 1 | "was staring" |
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| 15.31% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 112 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "Grief didn't solve cases; evidence did." | | 1 | "And the smell—it wasn't just rust anymore." | | 2 | "The compass wasn't just a trinket; it was attuned to supernatural energy, crafted by a Shade artisan from the Veil Market." | | 3 | "The tiles on the wall weren't just dirty; they were etched with faint, glowing runes that only became visible when viewed through the periphery of her vision." | | 4 | "The rift wasn't just a theory; it was a wound in the world, right here in the belly of Camden." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 905 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.02983425414364641 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009944751381215469 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 112 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 112 | | mean | 13.09 | | std | 8.04 | | cv | 0.614 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 27 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 67.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.45045045045045046 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 39.22% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a stillness that felt" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 97.65% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the worn leather" | | 1 | "She pushed the thought aside." | | 2 | "It was a young woman," | | 3 | "She inspected the ground within" | | 4 | "Her brown eyes narrowed, scanning" | | 5 | "She gestured to the victim's" | | 6 | "She towered over the sergeant," | | 7 | "She ran a gloved finger" | | 8 | "She turned back to the" | | 9 | "It was ozone and burnt" | | 10 | "She reached into her pocket" | | 11 | "It was the Veil Compass," | | 12 | "She held the compass flat" | | 13 | "It spun wildly for a" | | 14 | "She pointed the compass toward" | | 15 | "She indicated a series of" | | 16 | "She knelt again, brushing away" | | 17 | "It was bone." | | 18 | "He was staring at the" | | 19 | "He knew the story." |
| | ratio | 0.306 | |
| 7.06% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The air beneath Camden tasted" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over" | | 2 | "The fluorescents overhead flickered with" | | 3 | "Quinn barked, her voice cutting" | | 4 | "She adjusted the worn leather" | | 5 | "The memory was a dull" | | 6 | "She pushed the thought aside." | | 7 | "Grief didn't solve cases; evidence" | | 8 | "Quinn approached the body." | | 9 | "It was a young woman," | | 10 | "Sergeant Evans fell into step" | | 11 | "Quinn crouched, her knees cracking" | | 12 | "She inspected the ground within" | | 13 | "Evans pointed to a shattered" | | 14 | "Quinn didn't move." | | 15 | "Her brown eyes narrowed, scanning" | | 16 | "She gestured to the victim's" | | 17 | "Evans offered, shifting his weight" | | 18 | "Quinn countered, standing up" | | 19 | "She towered over the sergeant," |
| | ratio | 0.906 | |
| 58.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "If the needle was reacting" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The air beneath Camden tasted of rust, wet concrete, and something older, something that clung to the back of the throat like copper blood." | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over the yellow police tape with a precision that bordered on aggression, her boots clicking sharply against the cracked tiles of…" | | 2 | "She adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist, a reflexive check of time that grounded her." | | 3 | "She towered over the sergeant, her five-foot-nine frame radiating a tension that made him take a half-step back." | | 4 | "The brass casing was dull with a patina of verdigris, and the face was etched with protective sigils that hurt the eyes if one stared too long." | | 5 | "It spun wildly for a second before locking onto the space directly above the victim's head, trembling with violent intensity." | | 6 | "Carved with intricate symbols that matched the sigils on her compass." | | 7 | "He was staring at the compass, which was now vibrating so hard Quinn's hand shook." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 28 | | uselessAdditionCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Evans said, though his confidence wavered" | | 1 | "She turned back, her gaze sweeping the platform again" | | 2 | "Quinn muttered, more to herself than to Evans" | | 3 | "Quinn hissed, her patience fracturing" | | 4 | "Quinn said, turning to face him" | | 5 | "Quinn said, her voice dropping to a grim murmur" | | 6 | "Evans said, but his voice lacked its earlier conviction" | | 7 | "Quinn said, the name slipping out before she could stop it" | | 8 | "Quinn ordered, her voice regaining its steel" | | 9 | "she said, not looking at him" | | 10 | "Evans asked, his voice trembling slightly" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 18 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn barked (bark)" | | 1 | "Quinn muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Evans sighed (sigh)" | | 3 | "Quinn snapped (snap)" | | 4 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Quinn hissed (hiss)" | | 6 | "Quinn ordered (order)" | | 7 | "Evans protested weakly (protest)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.383 | | leniency | 0.766 | | rawRatio | 0.444 | | effectiveRatio | 0.34 | |