| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1343 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 18.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1343 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "variable" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "lurched" | | 10 | "velvet" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "oppressive" | | 13 | "input" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "charged" | | 17 | "enigmatic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | | |
| 1.76% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1329 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.91% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 1055 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.42 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Passage | 1 | | Through | 1 | | Oak | 1 | | Gate | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | December | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Isolde | 11 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 15 | | London | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Mostly | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 4 | | Shade | 3 | | Earth | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Oak" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "Earth" |
| | globalScore | 0.789 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite cloud, seemed to hold its own luminescence" | | 1 | "flowers that seemed to shift color as you looked at them, petals that had a subtle luminescence of their own" | | 2 | "something like electricity" | | 3 | "as if crossing a threshold in her own home, which, Rory realized, she was" |
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| 49.51% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.505 | | wordCount | 1329 | | matches | | 0 | "not the thin, brittle light of winter London, but something warm" | | 1 | "Not just to see this impossible place, but to find something in it" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 44.3 | | std | 26.25 | | cv | 0.593 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 76 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 61 | | 7 | 55 | | 8 | 63 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 79 | | 15 | 86 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 65 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 101 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 58 | | 23 | 62 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 68 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 44 | | 29 | 31 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.34% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | | 0 | "was resisting" | | 1 | "was asking" | | 2 | "was profoundly disorienting" | | 3 | "was like holding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.157 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stopped dead, her breath misting in the cold December air, and the others drew up beside her—Nyx a careful shadow against the dying winter light, Isolde gliding forward with that unnerving grace that made no sound." | | 1 | "The space between them shimmered—barely visible, a distortion like heat rising from summer pavement, except wrong." | | 2 | "She'd known what to expect—Isolde had warned her, in her maddeningly roundabout way." | | 3 | "She'd worked delivery routes through London for six months now; she understood the principle of variable distance, at least in metaphor." | | 4 | "But this—this was something else entirely." | | 5 | "It wasn't painful, but it was profoundly disorienting—as if she'd stepped from summer into autumn into spring all at once." | | 6 | "The shimmer became solid, a wall of luminescence that wrapped around her, and then—" | | 7 | "First came the light—not the thin, brittle light of winter London, but something warm and golden, like perpetual autumn afternoon." | | 8 | "She knelt to look at them and found blossoms she had no names for—flowers that seemed to shift color as you looked at them, petals that had a subtle luminescence of their own." | | 9 | "Nyx emerged from the shimmer behind her, solidifying into their true form—that towering silhouette of living shadow, seven feet of darkness that nevertheless moved with precision and grace." | | 10 | "Rory stood, brushing dirt from her jeans—Earth dirt, real dirt, though it felt unreal now." | | 11 | "The clearing opened up as they walked, which shouldn't have been possible from where they'd entered—the space revealed itself like the petals of one of those impossible flowers." | | 12 | "Nyx moved to the stream, bending—that strange, boneless motion of the Shade—and seemed to look at their reflection." | | 13 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against her collarbone—no longer faint now, but with a steady, insistent rhythm." |
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| 92.52% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1071 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.04855275443510738 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017740429505135387 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 14.93 | | std | 9.99 | | cv | 0.669 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 36 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 84.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.5280898876404494 | | totalSentences | 89 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Almost looked like language." | | 1 | "Mostly she was asking herself." | | 2 | "Architecturally impossible from the outside," | | 3 | "Of course, there was no" | | 4 | "Somewhere in this Grove, somewhere" |
| | ratio | 0.065 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed faintly, a rhythm" | | 1 | "They formed a rough circle," | | 2 | "She didn't turn to face" | | 3 | "She'd known what to expect—Isolde" | | 4 | "Her scar itched, a phantom" | | 5 | "Their voice, that whisper-thin thing," | | 6 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" | | 7 | "She'd worked delivery routes through" | | 8 | "She pulled the Fae-Forged blade" | | 9 | "she asked, though the question" | | 10 | "It wasn't painful, but it" | | 11 | "Her stomach lurched." | | 12 | "She stumbled forward and gasped." | | 13 | "She knelt to look at" | | 14 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 15 | "She kept the Fae blade" | | 16 | "She'd come here for a" | | 17 | "It was vast." | | 18 | "She turned in a slow" | | 19 | "It thrummed with warmth." |
| | ratio | 0.273 | |
| 63.90% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "# Passage Through the Oak" | | 1 | "Rory stopped dead, her breath" | | 2 | "Rory said, her fingers brushing" | | 3 | "It pulsed faintly, a rhythm" | | 4 | "The oaks were massive, easily" | | 5 | "They formed a rough circle," | | 6 | "The space between them shimmered—barely" | | 7 | "The air had a thickness" | | 8 | "Isolde said, her voice like" | | 9 | "She didn't turn to face" | | 10 | "Rory managed a smile, though" | | 11 | "She'd known what to expect—Isolde" | | 12 | "The shimmering distortion made her" | | 13 | "Her scar itched, a phantom" | | 14 | "Nyx drifted closer to the" | | 15 | "Those faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 16 | "Their voice, that whisper-thin thing," | | 17 | "Isolde continued, finally turning to" | | 18 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" | | 19 | "Rory nodded, absorbing this." |
| | ratio | 0.792 | |
| 64.94% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 57.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stopped dead, her breath misting in the cold December air, and the others drew up beside her—Nyx a careful shadow against the dying winter light, Isolde gl…" | | 1 | "They formed a rough circle, but their trunks seemed to lean inward, creating a natural gateway that made Rory's blue eyes narrow." | | 2 | "The air had a thickness to it, as if the atmosphere itself was resisting." | | 3 | "It wasn't painful, but it was profoundly disorienting—as if she'd stepped from summer into autumn into spring all at once." | | 4 | "Architecturally impossible from the outside, but here, in this place where time bent to different rules, the distances stretched in ways that made sense and did…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her fingers brushing the Heartstone pendant at her throat" | | 1 | "Rory managed, though her mouth was dry" | | 2 | "she asked, though the question wasn't really directed at anyone" | | 3 | "She moved, her feet making no marks in the soft earth" | | 4 | "Isolde said, not unkindly" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.45 | | leniency | 0.9 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |