| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 96.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1432 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1432 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "lurch" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "marble" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "down her spine" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "churn" | | 13 | "crystallized" | | 14 | "oppressive" | | 15 | "footfall" | | 16 | "whimsical" | | 17 | "lilt" | | 18 | "crystalline" | | 19 | "structure" | | 20 | "shattered" | | 21 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.31% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1426 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.43% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 60 | | wordCount | 1199 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 1.75 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 21 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Shade | 4 | | British | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 2 | | Isolde | 7 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Dymas | 2 | | Fae | 4 | | London | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Half-Fae" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Earth" | | 7 | "Nyx" | | 8 | "Dymas" | | 9 | "Fae" | | 10 | "Seer" | | 11 | "Hel" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Belphegor" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.624 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 42.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like velvet underfoot" | | 1 | "looked like jagged teeth of obsidian rose" | | 2 | "ss, her weight seemingly ignored by the law" |
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| 59.75% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.403 | | wordCount | 1426 | | matches | | 0 | "not the rhythmic chewing from earlier, but a heavy, thumping footfall" | | 1 | "not for the creature, but for the towering sugar-tree beside it" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.88% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 41.94 | | std | 19.63 | | cv | 0.468 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 82 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 47 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 80 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 81 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 51 | | 13 | 59 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 62 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 58 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 71 | | 33 | 19 |
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| 96.60% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "were hunched" | | 1 | "were made" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 200 | | matches | | 0 | "were trying" | | 1 | "was glowing" | | 2 | "was staring" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.11 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment, Rory’s boots had been sinking into the damp, decaying mulch of Richmond Park; the next, the air turned cloyingly sweet, thick with the scent of overripe peaches and roasting meats." | | 1 | "The Shade’s violet eyes pulsed with a low, rhythmic light, casting long, jagged flickers across the ground—ground that was no longer British soil, but a carpet of vibrant, succulent moss that felt like velvet underfoot." | | 2 | "It wasn't the frantic throb it gave when a portal was nearby; it was a steady, rhythmic warmth, like a purring cat." | | 3 | "To their left, a waterfall cascaded down a marble cliff, but the liquid wasn't water—it was a thick, iridescent cream that pooled into a lake of froth." | | 4 | "He didn't look up as they passed; his eyes were wide, bloodshot, and fixed entirely on the symmetry of his creation." | | 5 | "She looked at Nyx, but the Shade was staring at a rift in the reality ahead of them—a shimmering distortion in the air where the amber sky of Dymas met a jagged tear of pure, starlit blackness." | | 6 | "The fruit on the sugar-trees hung rotten and weeping; the velvet moss turned to slick, black grease." | | 7 | "She felt a vibration in the ground—not the rhythmic chewing from earlier, but a heavy, thumping footfall." | | 8 | "The tree didn't just fall; it shattered, burying the tethered beast under a mountain of razor-sharp emerald fragments." | | 9 | "Ahead lay the unknown, but as she looked at her companions—the ancient Shade and the ageless Seer—Rory felt a strange, flickering confidence." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1215 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.0205761316872428 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007407407407407408 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 15.67 | | std | 6.99 | | cv | 0.446 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 37 |
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| 56.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.37362637362637363 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 91.79% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She stumbled forward, her hand" | | 1 | "Her voice felt heavy, as" | | 2 | "She felt the Heartstone Pendant" | | 3 | "It wasn't the frantic throb" | | 4 | "She tilted her head, her" | | 5 | "They began to walk, following" | | 6 | "They were hunched over long" | | 7 | "She watched one man, dressed" | | 8 | "He didn't look up as" | | 9 | "It was the sound of" | | 10 | "It was glowing now, a" | | 11 | "Her silver hair caught a" | | 12 | "She looked at Nyx, but" | | 13 | "Its moonsilver glow intensified, casting" | | 14 | "She felt a vibration in" | | 15 | "It was a creature of" | | 16 | "She felt the quick, out-of-the-box" | | 17 | "She wasn't an athlete or" | | 18 | "She looked at the translucent" | | 19 | "Their form exploded outward, a" |
| | ratio | 0.321 | |
| 36.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The transition was not a" | | 1 | "She stumbled forward, her hand" | | 2 | "Nyx bled out of the" | | 3 | "The Shade’s violet eyes pulsed" | | 4 | "Her voice felt heavy, as" | | 5 | "Nyx’s voice drifted over her" | | 6 | "Rory looked up, and the" | | 7 | "She felt the Heartstone Pendant" | | 8 | "It wasn't the frantic throb" | | 9 | "Isolde Varga moved past them" | | 10 | "The Half-Fae’s feet left no" | | 11 | "She tilted her head, her" | | 12 | "Isolde said, her voice a" | | 13 | "Rory tightened her grip on" | | 14 | "The Fae-forged blade was bitingly" | | 15 | "They began to walk, following" | | 16 | "The trunks were translucent, like" | | 17 | "The sound wasn't the roar" | | 18 | "Rory saw figures in the" | | 19 | "They were hunched over long" |
| | ratio | 0.846 | |
| 64.10% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "To their left, a waterfall" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 32.02% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The Shade’s violet eyes pulsed with a low, rhythmic light, casting long, jagged flickers across the ground—ground that was no longer British soil, but a carpet …" | | 1 | "In the distance, mountains that looked like jagged teeth of obsidian rose to meet the horizon, their slopes covered in sprawling, terraced vineyards." | | 2 | "The trunks were translucent, like spun sugar, and the leaves were broad, shimmering shards of emerald glass that tinkled in a non-existent breeze." | | 3 | "They were hunched over long stone tables that groaned under the weight of silver platters." | | 4 | "It was the sound of a thousand people chewing, a wet, rhythmic percussion that made Rory’s stomach churn." | | 5 | "It was a creature of impossible proportions, its skin the color of a bruised plum, draped in gold chains that rattled with every movement." | | 6 | "Their form exploded outward, a wave of darkness that rushed toward the obsidian thicket, stitching the creature’s shadow to the ground." | | 7 | "The cold moonsilver sliced through the crystalline trunk as if it were warm wax." | | 8 | "She was a delivery girl from Cardiff, a law school dropout who had fled a broken life, but here, in the heart of Hel’s excess, she was something else." |
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| 58.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her voice a melodic riddle" | | 1 | "Rory commanded, her voice steady" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Rory noted (note)" | | 3 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered back (whisper)" | | 5 | "Rory yelled (yell)" | | 6 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.52 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.538 | | effectiveRatio | 0.538 | |