| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Hayes gestured vaguely [vaguely]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.464 | | leniency | 0.929 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 84.12% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1574 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "loosely" | | 3 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.29% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1574 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "dancing" | | 1 | "predictable" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "chaotic" | | 4 | "oppressive" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "profound" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "glint" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "dance" | | 11 | "magnetic" | | 12 | "complex" | | 13 | "scanned" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "shattered" | | 16 | "crystalline" | | 17 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 145 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 67 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1574 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.95% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 1233 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.54 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 19 | | Camden | 1 | | Aldwych | 1 | | Victorian | 1 | | Hayes | 9 | | Kowalski | 3 | | British | 2 | | Museum | 2 | | Morris | 3 | | Eva | 7 | | Ancient | 1 | | History | 1 | | Oxford | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Compass | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Hayes" | | 3 | "Kowalski" | | 4 | "Museum" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "British" | | 1 | "Ancient" | | 2 | "Oxford" |
| | globalScore | 0.73 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 71.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like hand-drawn diagrams and archa" | | 1 | "seemed entirely disconnected from magnetic north" | | 2 | "looked like a stylized key" |
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| 72.94% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.271 | | wordCount | 1574 | | matches | | 0 | "not in a death spasm, but loosely, as if she’d just let something go" | | 1 | "no footprints but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 46.29 | | std | 25.2 | | cv | 0.544 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 75 | | 3 | 98 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 94 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 76 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 71 | | 17 | 77 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 74 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 78 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 46 | | 27 | 81 | | 28 | 66 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 58 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 28 |
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| 75.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "been sealed" | | 1 | "was propped" | | 2 | "were perched" | | 3 | "been moved" | | 4 | "were curled" | | 5 | "was tucked" | | 6 | "was estimated" | | 7 | "was snagged" | | 8 | "was etched" | | 9 | "was made" | | 10 | "been murdered" |
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| 95.83% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 192 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t pointing" | | 1 | "was reacting" | | 2 | "was beginning" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 145 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1239 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "heavy, leather-bound books" | | 1 | "single, needle-thin sliver" |
| | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.02744148506860371 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009685230024213076 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 145 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 145 | | mean | 10.86 | | std | 8.48 | | cv | 0.782 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 53.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.36551724137931035 | | totalSentences | 145 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the oppressive silence of" | | 1 | "Just before midnight." | | 2 | "Instead of cardinals, the rim" | | 3 | "Just that same look of" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 96.19% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "He was young, eager, and" | | 1 | "he said, his breath fogging" | | 2 | "She moved toward the source" | | 3 | "Her curly red hair was" | | 4 | "She had seen this once" | | 5 | "Her partner, DS Morris." | | 6 | "She forced it down, focusing" | | 7 | "It was open." | | 8 | "She looked at Eva’s hands." | | 9 | "They rested in her lap," | | 10 | "Her fingers were curled slightly," | | 11 | "They weren't clouded with the" | | 12 | "They held a look of" | | 13 | "She glanced at the worn" | | 14 | "Her attention was snagged by" | | 15 | "It was small, half-hidden in" | | 16 | "She motioned to a forensics" | | 17 | "He deposited the object into" | | 18 | "It was a compass." | | 19 | "It was heavy in her" |
| | ratio | 0.31 | |
| 67.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 99 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of damp" | | 1 | "DC Hayes stood near the" | | 2 | "He was young, eager, and" | | 3 | "he said, his breath fogging" | | 4 | "Quinn’s gaze swept the scene" | | 5 | "The dust on the platform" | | 6 | "She moved toward the source" | | 7 | "The victim was propped against" | | 8 | "Her curly red hair was" | | 9 | "A smattering of freckles stood" | | 10 | "Quinn recognized the unnerving stillness" | | 11 | "A research assistant at the" | | 12 | "Quinn asked, crouching down but" | | 13 | "Hayes said, joining her" | | 14 | "Quinn’s eyes narrowed." | | 15 | "She had seen this once" | | 16 | "A different disused building, a" | | 17 | "Her partner, DS Morris." | | 18 | "The memory was a cold" | | 19 | "She forced it down, focusing" |
| | ratio | 0.786 | |
| 39.68% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, she was beginning to." |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn recognized the unnerving stillness of a body that hadn’t been moved post-mortem." | | 1 | "At its center, a single, needle-thin sliver of dark, polished metal spun erratically, a frantic, silent dance that seemed entirely disconnected from magnetic no…" | | 2 | "Quinn looked one last time at the young woman with the brilliant red hair, a scholar who had ventured too far into the footnotes of history." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, his breath fogging in the subterranean chill" | | 1 | "Quinn said, her voice quiet but carrying in the echoing space" | | 2 | "Hayes offered, trying to fit the scene into a box he understood" | | 3 | "Hayes asked, a note of concern in his voice" | | 4 | "Quinn said, her voice low" | | 5 | "Quinn ordered, her voice regaining its authoritative clip" |
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| 78.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Hayes commented (comment)" | | 1 | "Quinn ordered (order)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.321 | | leniency | 0.643 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |