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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR6EHWRZC1BZTP9NJBVQ8E
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Model:
Z.AI GLM 5
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
31.7s
Cost:
$0.005784
Provider:
SiliconFlow
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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AI
The world folded in on itself, and Aurora felt her stomach
lurch
as though she'd stepped off a cliff edge in the dark. Then the sensation passed, and she
was standing
somewhere else entirely. The first thing she noticed was the light. It pressed against her skin like a physical
weight
, thick and honeyed, casting e
very
thing in shades of amber and gold. She blinked rapidly, her eyes struggling to adjust after the grey gloom of a London November. Her hand found the Heartstone pendant at her throat, its surface warm against her palm, warmer than it had been in the park. The crimson gem pulsed once, twice, a heartbeat beneath her fingers. "Breathe, Aurora." Isolde's voice drifted from somewhere to her left, unhurried as ever. "The crossing affects mortals differently. The sensation will pass." Rory sucked in air and realized she'd been holding her breath. The air that filled her lungs tasted of things she couldn't name—sweet, cloying, with an undertone of woodsmoke and something that might have been roasting meat. Her stomach growled involuntarily, and she pressed a hand against her abdomen. "Where—" She stopped. The word died in her throat as her vision finally cleared. They stood at the edge of an expanse that shouldn't exist. Beyond the threshold they'd crossed, a landscape rolled outward in impossible waves. Vineyards stretched toward a horizon that curved wrong, the vines heavy with grapes in colors she had no words for—deep burgundy, certainly, but also shimmering silver and something that looked like liquid gold. Orchards dotted the hills between, their branches heavy with fruit that
seemed to
glow faintly in the amber light. Above it all, a sky the color of aged whiskey stretched endlessly. No sun, but light e
very
where, diffuse and sourceless, as if the atmosphere itself had
been steeped
in honey. "Dymas," Nyx whispered, their voice carrying that strange sibilant quality, like wind through dry leaves. Their shadowy form had become more solid here, Rory noticed. More present. The violet glow of their eyes cut through the golden haze like twin beacons. "I have not walked these grounds since before my imprisonment." Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair catching the strange light and refracting it like spider
silk
. Her feet left no impression in the packed earth of the path, something Rory had grown accustomed to over their months of uneasy alliance, but which still made something in her hindbrain twitch. "The realm of Gluttony," the half-Fae said, her pale lavender eyes scanning the horizon. "A place of indulgence and excess. Tread
carefully
here. The
very
air invites you to lose yourself." Rory's hand drifted to the Fae-forged blade at her hip. The moonsilver was cold even through the leather of its sheath, a grounding contrast to the
oppressive
warmth of this place. She thought of Evan sometimes, when she reached for a weapon. Thought of how small and helpless she'd felt in that flat in Cardiff, how certain she'd
been that she
would die there. The blade was a reminder that she wasn't that person anymore. Might never have
been that person
, if she
was being
honest with herself. "How far to whatever we're looking for?" she asked, falling into step beside Isolde as they
began to
move down the gentle slope of the hill. "That depends," Isolde replied, as infuriatingly vague as always. "On what finds us first." The path wound between the vineyards, and Rory found herself brushing against leaves that felt too smooth, too alive. Once, a tendril brushed her wrist, and she jerked away with a sharp intake of breath. Where it had touched her, her skin prickled with warmth, and she thought she saw a faint shimmer of gold before it faded. "The plants here are... responsive," Nyx said, materializing at her other side. They had been a pace behind a moment ago; Rory had long since stopped
being startled
by their movements. "They sense hunger. Desire. They offer gifts." The Shade's violet eyes
flickered
. "Accept nothing. To taste is to bind yourself to this realm." "Helpful," Rory muttered. "Thanks for the warning." "I have limited experience with Dymas," Nyx continued, their whisper-voice contemplative. "Aldric visited once, centuries ago. He sought knowledge from one of the master chefs. The meeting did not go well." "Aldric being... you? Before?" "Indeed." The word hung in the golden air,
weight
ed with centuries of loss. They walked in silence for a time, the three of them an unlikely procession through the impossible landscape. The path took them past orchards bearing fruit that made Rory's mouth water despite herself—pears with skin like burnished bronze, apples that
seemed to
hold captured starlight in their flesh, berries that wept a nectar so fragrant she could smell it from twenty feet away. Each step required deliberate effort not to reach out, not to pluck and taste. The
very
air
seemed to
hum with invitation. She thought of the Golden Empress, of Yu-Fei's crowded kitchen and the way the old man could make magic with a wok and a handful of ingredients. This was nothing like that. This was hunger weaponized, desire made manifest and turned against anyone foolish enough to wander through. "How much further?" Rory asked, and her voice came out rougher than she intended. Isolde paused, her head tilting to one side as though listening to something beyond mortal hearing. "We are being observed." Rory's hand went to the blade again, her fingers wrapping around the familiar hilt. The cold moonsilver bit into her palm, sharpening her focus. "Observed by what?" Before Isolde could answer—assuming she would have given a straight answer, which was never a safe assumption—the vineyards parted ahead of them. The path widened into a proper road, cobblestones worn smooth by centuries of foot traffic, and then the road curved around a hill and revealed what lay beyond. Rory stopped dead. A city sprawled in the valley below, but city was perhaps the wrong word. It was more like a fever dream given architecture. Buildings rose and fell in organic waves, their walls hung with living vines and flowering creepers. Smoke curled from a thousand chimneys, carrying scents that made Rory's stomach clench with sudden, vicious hunger. Roasted meat. Fresh bread. Caramelized sugar. Wine reduced to syrup. In the center of it all, dominating the skyline, rose a structure that could only be described as a palace made of glass and copper and growing things. Spires twisted toward the amber sky like reaching fingers. Gardens spilled from its terraced levels in cascades of impossible color. "The Court of Feasts," Nyx breathed, and there was something in their voice that Rory had never heard before. Longing, perhaps. Or fear. "Prince Belphegor's seat of power." "He knows we're coming," Isolde said quietly. "He has known since the moment we crossed the threshold." Rory's fingers tightened on the blade's hilt until her knuckles ached. The Heartstone pulsed against her collarbone, steady now, a metronome counting down to something she couldn't yet see. "Then I guess we don't need to knock." She took a step forward, then another. Behind her, she heard Nyx's whisper of movement, the faint rustle of shadow on stone. Isolde made no sound at all. The city waited, patient and hungry, its amber light turning e
very
thing to gold.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
66.6667%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
10
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"Isolde replied, as infuriatingly vague as always [infuriatingly always]"
1
"Isolde said quietly [quietly]"
75.4300%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1221
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
1
adverb
"very"
count
2
highlights
0
"carefully"
1
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
59.0500%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1221
totalAiIsms
5
found
0
word
"lurch"
count
1
1
word
"flickered"
count
1
2
word
"oppressive"
count
1
3
word
"silk"
count
1
4
word
"weight"
count
1
highlights
0
"lurch"
1
"flickered"
2
"oppressive"
3
"silk"
4
"weight"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
78
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
4
narrationSentences
78
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
91
matches
0
"been that she"
1
"been that person"
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
33
mean
36.73
std
24.82
cv
0.676
sampleLengths
0
23
1
11
2
78
3
22
4
49
5
14
6
75
7
30
8
51
9
80
10
88
11
26
12
14
13
58
14
54
15
7
16
31
17
4
18
13
19
85
20
48
21
14
22
20
23
27
24
50
25
3
26
66
27
48
28
28
29
17
30
37
31
28
32
13
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
78
matches
0
"been steeped"
1
"being startled"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
175
matches
0
"was standing"
1
"was being"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1063
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
41
adverbRatio
0.03857008466603951
lyAdverbCount
11
lyAdverbRatio
0.010348071495766699
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
91
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
91
mean
13.32
std
7.94
cv
0.596
sampleLengths
0
23
1
11
2
8
3
20
4
16
5
23
6
11
7
13
8
9
9
11
10
26
11
12
12
3
13
11
14
11
15
12
16
33
17
19
18
12
19
18
20
15
21
10
22
2
23
14
24
10
25
16
26
33
27
14
28
17
29
10
30
21
31
11
32
22
33
11
34
13
35
26
36
9
37
5
38
19
39
16
40
23
41
12
42
19
43
12
44
11
45
3
46
4
47
11
48
20
49
4
87.1795%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.5494505494505495
totalSentences
91
uniqueOpeners
50
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
10
fancyCount
7
fancyTags
0
"Nyx whispered, their voice carrying that strange sibilant quality, like wind through dry leaves (whisper, carry)"
1
"the half-Fae said, her pale lavender eyes scanning the horizon (say, scan)"
2
"Nyx said, materializing at her other side (say, materialize)"
3
"Rory muttered (mutter)"
4
"Nyx continued, their whisper-voice contemplative (continue)"
5
"Nyx breathed, and there was something in their voice that Rory had never heard before (breathe, be does not never hear)"
6
"Isolde said quietly (say quietly)"
87.5486%