| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1184 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1184 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "reminder" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "carried the weight" | | 7 | "cascading" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "lurched" | | 10 | "gloom" | | 11 | "scanning" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "treacherous" | | 16 | "chaotic" | | 17 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.11% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 97.12% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora felt the weariness of the journey trying to settle into her limbs, the诱惑 to sit beneath the vines and rest just for a moment." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1184 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "It is time, Isolde said." | | 1 | "The wind does not sing here, Nyx whispered, the sound like dry leaves skittering over pavement." | | 2 | "Stay close, Aurora said, her voice steady despite the hammering of her heart." | | 3 | "Welcome to Dymas, Isolde said." | | 4 | "Gluttony, Aurora murmured, touching the pendant." | | 5 | "It reacts to excess, Isolde corrected, her pale lavender eyes scanning the horizon." | | 6 | "The shadows here are heavy, Nyx whispered." | | 7 | "Do not touch the fruit, Isolde warned, her tone light but absolute." | | 8 | "Time is a fluid here, Isolde said, stopping beside a tree laden with pods that wept a golden sap." | | 9 | "The Veil is a membrane, Isolde said, turning to face her." | | 10 | "They see only the feast, Isolde said." | | 11 | "Lead the way, Isolde, Aurora said." |
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| 64.75% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 1173 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.71 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Aurora | 20 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Isolde | 11 | | Seer | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Shade | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | English | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Aldric | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Rory | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Seer" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Veil" | | 7 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Dymas" | | 4 | "Earth" |
| | globalScore | 0.647 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 56.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "oranges that seemed to pulse in time with the amber sky" | | 1 | "quite take" | | 2 | "shadows that seemed to reach for them, while the Heartstone pulsed steadily against Aurora's chest, a crimson heartbeat in a world of excess" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.534 | | wordCount | 1184 | | matches | | 0 | "not a step but a fall" | | 1 | "Not the golden hue of a sunset, but a permanent, warm glow" | | 2 | "not human, but they were not beasts either" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 39.47 | | std | 20.4 | | cv | 0.517 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 72 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 71 | | 12 | 59 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 64 | | 15 | 58 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 56 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 213 | | matches | | 0 | "was intoxicating" | | 1 | "was slowing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 235 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 6 | | adverbRatio | 0.02553191489361702 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01276595744680851 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 109 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 109 | | mean | 10.86 | | std | 6.71 | | cv | 0.618 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 51.99% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3669724770642202 | | totalSentences | 109 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 94.34% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Faintly glowing violet eyes fixed" | | 1 | "Only Isolde seemed to generate" | | 2 | "Then we don't stay guests." |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 87.92% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood at the edge" | | 1 | "It is time, Isolde said." | | 2 | "Her voice was melodic, yet" | | 3 | "She did not shiver." | | 4 | "She never seemed to feel" | | 5 | "It holds its breath." | | 6 | "It smelled of ozone and" | | 7 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 8 | "Her left wrist throbbed, the" | | 9 | "She stepped toward the shimmer." | | 10 | "She straightened, her bright blue" | | 11 | "It was amber." | | 12 | "She stood beside Aurora, though" | | 13 | "She left no footprints." | | 14 | "It was intoxicating, a cloying" | | 15 | "It was the smell of" | | 16 | "It reacts to the realm's" | | 17 | "It reacts to excess, Isolde" | | 18 | "They began to move forward," | | 19 | "She forced her mind to" |
| | ratio | 0.33 | |
| 77.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "The air before them shimmered" | | 1 | "She stood at the edge" | | 2 | "The Fae-forged blade was cold" | | 3 | "It is time, Isolde said." | | 4 | "Her voice was melodic, yet" | | 5 | "The Seer stood barefoot on" | | 6 | "She did not shiver." | | 7 | "She never seemed to feel" | | 8 | "Aurora glanced at Nyx." | | 9 | "The Shade hovered slightly off" | | 10 | "The wind does not sing" | | 11 | "It holds its breath." | | 12 | "Aurora took a breath of" | | 13 | "It smelled of ozone and" | | 14 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 15 | "Her left wrist throbbed, the" | | 16 | "She stepped toward the shimmer." | | 17 | "The transition was not a" | | 18 | "Gravity lurched sideways." | | 19 | "The grey gloom of Richmond" |
| | ratio | 0.764 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "To eat here is to" | | 1 | "To leave, you must not" | | 2 | "To them, we are shadows." | | 3 | "To be here is to" | | 4 | "To be a guest is" |
| | ratio | 0.047 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The Shade hovered slightly off the ground, a humanoid silhouette of living shadow that drank the faint streetlight from the park beyond." | | 1 | "Her left wrist throbbed, the small crescent-shaped scar from her childhood itching as if sensitive to the shift in pressure." | | 2 | "Aurora stumbled, her boots finding purchase on soil that was soft and loamy, far too rich for English earth." | | 3 | "Not the golden hue of a sunset, but a permanent, warm glow that bathed the landscape in the light of eternal late afternoon." | | 4 | "The fruits burst with color, violets and deep oranges that seemed to pulse in time with the amber sky." | | 5 | "The cold metal grounded her, cutting through the humid haze that threatened to make her lightheaded." | | 6 | "She forced her mind to focus on the details, the cool-headed analysis that had kept her alive through Evan's abuse and the chaotic flight to London." | | 7 | "Time is a fluid here, Isolde said, stopping beside a tree laden with pods that wept a golden sap." | | 8 | "They pressed on into the heart of the realm, the amber light casting long, distorted shadows that seemed to reach for them, while the Heartstone pulsed steadily…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |