Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR6P2S1CHC4VE6QHCAQT3D

Run Details

Duration:
2m 11s
Cost:
$0.023941
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air before them shimmered like heat haze off summer tarmac, though the London chill bit deep into Aurora's bones. She stood at the edge of the rift, her hand resting instinctively on the hilt of the moonsilver dagger at her hip. The Fae-forged blade was cold enough to burn through her jacket, a constant reminder of the danger waiting on the other side. Around her neck, the Heartstone pendant pulsed with a rhythmic, feverish warmth, the crimson gem glowing like a dying ember. It is time, Isolde said. Her voice was melodic, yet carried the weight of centuries. The Seer stood barefoot on the frost-rimed grass, her silver hair cascading down to her waist like a waterfall of mercury. She did not shiver. She never seemed to feel the cold of the mortal plane. Aurora glanced at Nyx. The Shade hovered slightly off the ground, a humanoid silhouette of living shadow that drank the faint streetlight from the park beyond. Faintly glowing violet eyes fixed on the distortion in the air. The wind does not sing here, Nyx whispered, the sound like dry leaves skittering over pavement. It holds its breath. Aurora took a breath of her own, testing the air. It smelled of ozone and old dust, the scent of a room sealed for a hundred years. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, a habit from her life above Silas' bar, though tonight she carried no food, only survival gear. Her left wrist throbbed, the small crescent-shaped scar from her childhood itching as if sensitive to the shift in pressure. Stay close, Aurora said, her voice steady despite the hammering of her heart. She stepped toward the shimmer. The transition was not a step but a fall. Gravity lurched sideways. The grey gloom of Richmond Park vanished, swallowed by a sudden, overwhelming warmth. Aurora stumbled, her boots finding purchase on soil that was soft and loamy, far too rich for English earth. She straightened, her bright blue eyes widening as she took in the sky. It was amber. Not the golden hue of a sunset, but a permanent, warm glow that bathed the landscape in the light of eternal late afternoon. There was no sun, only the sky itself radiating illumination. Welcome to Dymas, Isolde said. She stood beside Aurora, though she had not walked the distance. One moment she was at the rift, the next she was beside the protagonist. Where Isolde's boots should have crushed the clover, the grass stood undisturbed. She left no footprints. The air was thick with scent. It was intoxicating, a cloying mixture of ripe grapes, roasting meat, spiced wine, and something darker, like musk and decay hidden beneath the sweetness. It was the smell of a feast that had been going on for too long. Gluttony, Aurora murmured, touching the pendant. The crimson stone was hot against her skin now, vibrating slightly. It reacts to the realm's energy. It reacts to excess, Isolde corrected, her pale lavender eyes scanning the horizon. Here, hunger is a god, and satisfaction is a sin. They began to move forward, descending a gentle slope into a sprawling valley. Vines heavy with fruit the size of melons draped over trellises made of bone-white wood. The fruits burst with color, violets and deep oranges that seemed to pulse in time with the amber sky. Aurora kept her hand on the Fae blade. The cold metal grounded her, cutting through the humid haze that threatened to make her lightheaded. Nyx flowed beside them, their shadowy form stretching and contracting. The shadows here are heavy, Nyx whispered. They cling. In the corner of Aurora's vision, the Shade's form flickered, momentarily solidifying into a tall man in period clothing before dissolving back into smoke. The memory of Aldric, the sorcerer they had once been, surfacing in this place of power. Do not touch the fruit, Isolde warned, her tone light but absolute. To eat here is to sign a contract in blood and sugar. Aurora nodded, though her stomach gave a treacherous growl. The smell was overwhelming, triggering a primal urge to consume. She forced her mind to focus on the details, the cool-headed analysis that had kept her alive through Evan's abuse and the chaotic flight to London. The vegetation was too dense. The colors were too saturated. It was a landscape designed to overwhelm the senses. They walked through a vineyard where the leaves whispered as they passed, though there was no wind. Aurora noticed the silence of their own movement. Her boots sank into the earth without a crunch. Nyx made no sound. Only Isolde seemed to generate a faint chime, like a bell tolling underwater, with every step she didn't quite take. How long do we have? Aurora asked. Time is a fluid here, Isolde said, stopping beside a tree laden with pods that wept a golden sap. An hour may be a minute. A minute may be a year. It depends on how much you indulge. Aurora looked at the pendant. The pulse was slowing, matching the rhythm of her own heartbeat. We need to find the rift back before the solstice ends. The Veil will strengthen. The Veil is a membrane, Isolde said, turning to face her. It breathes. To leave, you must not hold your breath. You must exhale. Aurora frowned, parsing the riddle. Don't fight the return. Accept the shift. Nyx drifted ahead, their violet eyes scanning the ridgeline. Something watches, the Shade whispered. From the orchards. Aurora followed Nyx's gaze. Between the trunks of the bone-white trees, shapes moved. They were not human, but they were not beasts either. They were large, bloated forms that shuffled with a purpose, carrying baskets of the oversized fruit. Helbound souls, contracted from Earth. Their eyes were hollow, fixed on the task, devoid of the hunger that permeated the air. They don't see us, Aurora observed, noting the way the workers walked past them without turning their heads. They see only the feast, Isolde said. To them, we are shadows. To be here is to be a guest. To be a guest is to be expected to eat. Aurora tightened her grip on the dagger. The cold seeped into her palm, sharpening her focus. Then we don't stay guests. We find what we came for and we leave. The amber sky seemed to deepen in color, shifting toward a richer, more dangerous hue. The warmth pressed against them, heavy as a blanket. Aurora felt the weariness of the journey trying to settle into her limbs, the诱惑 to sit beneath the vines and rest just for a moment. She shook her head, the movement sharp. Lead the way, Isolde, Aurora said. But keep us moving. Isolde smiled, a cryptic curving of lips that held no warmth. The path is always moving, Rory. We must simply be faster than the hunger. They pressed on into the heart of the realm, the amber light casting long, distorted shadows that seemed to reach for them, while the Heartstone pulsed steadily against Aurora's chest, a crimson heartbeat in a world of excess.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
83.1933% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1190
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.5798% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1190
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"lurched"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"cascading"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"lurched"
1"throbbed"
2"flickered"
3"shimmered"
4"cascading"
5"weight"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences109
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean39.47
std20.4
cv0.517
sampleLengths
084
151
257
372
418
557
636
746
845
923
1023
1171
1259
1324
1464
1558
167
1738
1831
1924
2012
2117
2260
2318
2430
2530
2656
2710
2825
2938
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs215
matches
0"was intoxicating"
1"was slowing"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1190
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.021848739495798318
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.009243697478991597
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean10.86
std6.71
cv0.618
sampleLengths
020
122
222
320
45
510
621
74
811
94
1022
1111
1216
134
1410
1517
1625
1720
1813
195
209
213
2213
2319
2413
253
2623
2710
285
2911
3014
3112
324
336
3424
3515
366
3711
386
3913
4010
4113
4215
4319
448
4516
4610
477
482
4924
51.9878% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3669724770642202
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners40
100.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
92.8683%