Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR6RPQRASR8RKN9DHBABH2

Run Details

Duration:
6m 52s
Cost:
$0.019829
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked home with a solid thunk that usually settled Rory's nerves like sediment in a wine glass, but the knocking—three sharp, authoritative raps against the scarred wood—had already sent her pulse stuttering into her throat. She counted to five in Welsh, the way her mother had taught her to ward off panic, her palm flat against the door's paint-peeled surface. Through the fisheye lens of the peephole, the hallway distorted into a funhouse warping of beige walls and the curry house's exhaust steam. But she knew the silhouette. The uncompromising vertical line of the posture. The charcoal wool of the suit coat, dampening at the shoulders despite the June drizzle. The flash of ivory where his fingers gripped the cane handle. She shouldn't open it. She knew better than to open doors for ghosts. But her fingers were already working the locks. "Lucien." His name escaped before she could armor it, raw and exposed. Six weeks, four days, and seventeen hours since she'd walked barefoot through Fitzrovia at dawn, carrying her heels and her shredded dignity. The memory still burned—his sheets tangled and cooling, the distance in his heterochromatic eyes when he'd told her, cold as marble, that she was a liability his bloodline couldn't afford. "Rory." He didn't smile. The amber iris—his left eye—caught the sallow glow of the hallway bulb, warm and deceptive as honey. The right eye, the demonic one, remained absolute black, drinking in the light. Rain had begun to bead on his platinum hair, slicked back with the precision of a man who controlled every variable, yet he made no move to wipe it away. Demons didn't shiver. They didn't fidget. Ptolemy materialized at her ankles, the tabby's hackles rising in a ridge of orange and black. The cat's growl was low, subsonic, a vibration that traveled up Rory's calves. Animals always knew. Even when the woman didn't want to admit she could still taste him—smoke and bergamot—on the back of her tongue. "You can't be here," Rory said. She gripped the doorframe with her left hand, the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist burning white against her skin. Cardiff. Age seven. A broken bottle of Irn-Bru and stitches that her father had paid for in silence. She locked her elbow to keep her hand from trembling. "I am here," Lucien said. His accent curled around the vowels, French elegance draped over London consonants. He lifted the cane slightly, ivory gleaming like a knucklebone in the dim light. "May I come in, or shall we discuss your friend Eva's research into Avarosian summoning circles in a hallway where the curry house boys might overhear?" The chill that swept Rory's spine had nothing to do with the draft from the stairwell. She glanced back at the flat—Eva's flat, cramped and chaotic, every surface colonized by open grimoires and scrolls weighted down with half-finished mugs of tea. Research that could get a mundane arrested, or a woman killed, in the circles Lucien frequented. She stepped aside. The smell hit him first as he entered—ajwain and cardamom from the restaurant below, mingling with old paper and the ozone tang of Eva's laptop chargers. Lucien had to turn sideways to clear the doorframe, his shoulders spanning the width of the jamb. At five-eleven, he wasn't towering, but he occupied space differently than humans did, as though gravity owed him a favor. The cane tapped once against the floorboards, the sound muffled by the threadbare rug Eva had salvaged from a skip. Rory secured the three deadbolts with mechanical efficiency, her back to him, hyperaware of his gaze tracking the movement—the first bolt, the second, the third. Safety rituals. Habits she'd imported from Cardiff along with her accent and her fear of raised voices. When she turned, he was already assessing the room with the dispassionate attention of a broker cataloging assets, though his left hand—the one not holding the cane—twitched at his side. He navigated the labyrinth of Eva's obsession with the sure-footedness of a man used to dodging pitfalls. His gaze lingered on a scroll unspooling across the radiator—Avarosian script, she realized with a jolt, the same script he'd claimed was tattooed into the lining of his lungs, binding him to his father's realm. He didn't touch it. He respected boundaries here, in this shrine to knowledge that could unmake him. "Eva's in Camden," Rory said, the words too loud in the small space. She crossed her arms over her chest, creating a barrier. Her black hair, still damp from her own shower earlier, fell forward to curtain her bright blue eyes. "Chasing a dryad." "I know." He reached into his breast pocket and withdrew a silk handkerchief—monogrammed, absurdly expensive—to dab at the rain on his temples. "I didn't come for Eva." "Then why?" The question fragmented between them like glass. Six weeks ago, she had traced the line of his jaw in the dark, marveling at the contrast of his beauty against the danger she'd sensed coiled beneath. In the morning, he had sat on the edge of the bed, dressed in exactly this shade of charcoal, and told her that proximity to him was a death sentence written in Avarosian script. *You're human, Aurora. You break. I break things.* She had thrown his own shirt at him, the buttons scattering, and fled. Now, Lucien's jaw worked. He looked exhausted, shadows pooling beneath the amber eye in a way that suggested he hadn't slept in days. Demons didn't need sleep. Something was wrong. "There's a contract," he said quietly. He moved toward the kitchenette, navigating around a stack of books on Celtic protective rites with practiced ease. "Circulating in the Lower Market. A bounty on a human woman. Pre-Law background, Cardiff native, currently residing above a bar in Soho. The contractor wants her alive initially, for questioning. After that..." He let the sentence dangle, his black eye fixed on her face. Rory's blood turned to mercury, heavy and cold. "Evan." It couldn't be anyone else. Her ex had resources, hatred, and a memory like a steel trap. "He's finally decided to finish what he started in Cardiff." "Not Evan." Lucien was close now, close enough that she could see the individual platinum hairs at his temple, the way his throat moved when he swallowed. "The contract is in my name, Rory. Or rather, the name I used to use in Marseille. Someone knows about us. They know that threatening you is the only way to control me." Rory's arms dropped to her sides. "There is no 'us.' You made that clear." "I lied." The words cracked like a whip. He took another step, bridging the distance until she felt the heat of him—or the illusion of heat, demon biology being what it was—against her palms. "I told you I was dangerous to keep you safe. I told you to run because the alternative was showing you exactly how deep the Avarosian blood runs in my veins, and I was terrified, Rory, I was *terrified* that if you saw that beast, you would look at me the way you're looking at me now. Like I'm a stranger." Ptolemy yowled from atop the refrigerator, a banshee wail of warning. But Rory wasn't looking at him like he was a stranger. She was seeing the Lucien who had carried her groceries up four flights to the flat above Silas' bar when she'd twisted her ankle delivering for Golden Empress. The Lucien who had quoted Welsh poetry to her in bed—*Nid cariad mohono, ond cythraul*—laughing at her shock that the French fixer spoke her grandmother's tongue. The man beneath the demon. "You left," she said, her voice barely audible above the curry house's extraction fan rattling below. "To protect you." "You broke my heart." "I know." His hand lifted, trembling slightly, the fingers long and elegant and tipped with the potential for claws she knew he could manifest. But when he touched her, it was with the pad of his thumb against the crescent scar on her left wrist, tracing the white line with a reverence that made her breath hitch. "I know, Rory. And I will carry that fracture in my own chest until you decide whether to let me heal it or drive the blade in deeper." His cane leaned against the counter, abandoned. Outside, Brick Lane roared with the evening rush, buses spewing diesel and rain against the windows. But inside Eva's cluttered sanctuary, with grimoires stacked like walls around them, the world reduced to the amber and black of his eyes, the smoke and rain of his skin. Rory didn't move. She let him hold her wrist, his thumb fluttering against her pulse point. "You said I was fragile." "You are," Lucien whispered. "You are fragile and brilliant and you heal stronger at the broken places. I watched you survive Evan. I watched you build a life here, with your deliveries and your quiet nights and your three deadbolts. I thought if I removed myself, you would have peace." "And now?" "Now I find I am a selfish creature after all." His forehead touched hers, a benediction and a burden. "Let me stand between you and the dark, Rory. Not because I'm strong, but because you make me want to be better than my blood." The amber eye closed. The black one remained open, guarding, wary. But his mouth found hers with a gentleness that contradicted every weapon he carried, every lie he'd told in his thirty-two years of half-breathing. It tasted of rain and Marseille sunlight and the sharp copper of old fear dissolving. Rory's fingers curled into the lapels of his charcoal suit, pulling him closer, anchoring herself in the storm she had tried to outrun. The kiss deepened, desperation threading through gentleness. His hand slid from her wrist to her waist, spanning her ribs with a possession that didn't demand but offered shelter. She met him, arching into the charcoal-dark safety of his arms, the scar on her wrist pressed against his heart—a crescent moon meeting a solar eclipse. Outside, London raged. But the three deadbolts held, and for the first time in six weeks, Rory Carter didn't feel the need to check them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"The words cracked like [like]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.133
94.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1720
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1720
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"marble"
count1
2
word"variable"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"chaotic"
count1
7
word"mechanical"
count1
8
word"navigated"
count1
9
word"silk"
count1
10
word"fragmented"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"navigating"
count1
13
word"practiced ease"
count1
14
word"potential"
count1
15
word"tracing"
count1
16
word"sanctuary"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"marble"
2"variable"
3"silence"
4"gleaming"
5"chill"
6"chaotic"
7"mechanical"
8"navigated"
9"silk"
10"fragmented"
11"traced"
12"navigating"
13"practiced ease"
14"potential"
15"tracing"
16"sanctuary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords14
totalWords1702
ratio0.008
matches
0"You're human, Aurora. You break. I break things."
1"terrified"
2"Nid cariad mohono, ond cythraul"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1360
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Welsh2
June1
Fitzrovia1
Irn-Bru1
French2
London2
Eva5
Lucien8
Cardiff2
Avarosian2
Aurora1
Celtic1
Brick1
Lane1
Marseille1
Carter1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Carter"
places
0"Welsh"
1"Fitzrovia"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
4"Avarosian"
5"Brick"
6"Lane"
7"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1702
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"stitches that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean44.79
std31.11
cv0.695
sampleLengths
0124
113
28
31
463
570
652
753
857
957
103
1183
1272
1369
1444
1527
162
1790
1830
1968
2036
2160
2214
2395
2411
2570
2616
273
284
2985
3053
3121
3250
332
3444
3550
3677
3725
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"was tattooed"
44.96% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs215
matches
0"were already working"
1"wasn't towering"
2"was already assessing"
3"wasn't looking"
4"was seeing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount20
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences113
ratio0.115
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked home with a solid thunk that usually settled Rory's nerves like sediment in a wine glass, but the knocking—three sharp, authoritative raps against the scarred wood—had already sent her pulse stuttering into her throat."
1"The memory still burned—his sheets tangled and cooling, the distance in his heterochromatic eyes when he'd told her, cold as marble, that she was a liability his bloodline couldn't afford."
2"The amber iris—his left eye—caught the sallow glow of the hallway bulb, warm and deceptive as honey."
3"Even when the woman didn't want to admit she could still taste him—smoke and bergamot—on the back of her tongue."
4"She glanced back at the flat—Eva's flat, cramped and chaotic, every surface colonized by open grimoires and scrolls weighted down with half-finished mugs of tea."
5"The smell hit him first as he entered—ajwain and cardamom from the restaurant below, mingling with old paper and the ozone tang of Eva's laptop chargers."
6"Rory secured the three deadbolts with mechanical efficiency, her back to him, hyperaware of his gaze tracking the movement—the first bolt, the second, the third."
7"When she turned, he was already assessing the room with the dispassionate attention of a broker cataloging assets, though his left hand—the one not holding the cane—twitched at his side."
8"His gaze lingered on a scroll unspooling across the radiator—Avarosian script, she realized with a jolt, the same script he'd claimed was tattooed into the lining of his lungs, binding him to his father's realm."
9"\"I know.\" He reached into his breast pocket and withdrew a silk handkerchief—monogrammed, absurdly expensive—to dab at the rain on his temples."
10"He took another step, bridging the distance until she felt the heat of him—or the illusion of heat, demon biology being what it was—against her palms."
11"The Lucien who had quoted Welsh poetry to her in bed—*Nid cariad mohono, ond cythraul*—laughing at her shock that the French fixer spoke her grandmother's tongue."
12"She met him, arching into the charcoal-dark safety of his arms, the scar on her wrist pressed against his heart—a crescent moon meeting a solar eclipse."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1158
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.023316062176165803
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0051813471502590676
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean15.06
std11.23
cv0.745
sampleLengths
038
125
223
35
47
515
611
74
89
98
101
1111
1222
1330
144
1517
1613
1730
183
193
2016
2113
223
2320
246
2519
261
272
2815
2910
305
3112
3214
3326
3416
3525
3616
373
3826
3917
4020
4120
4225
432
4415
4530
4617
4735
484
4913
52.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.37168141592920356
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
55.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences90
matches
0"She counted to five in"
1"She shouldn't open it."
2"She knew better than to"
3"His name escaped before she"
4"He didn't smile"
5"They didn't fidget."
6"She gripped the doorframe with"
7"She locked her elbow to"
8"His accent curled around the"
9"He lifted the cane slightly,"
10"She glanced back at the"
11"She stepped aside."
12"He navigated the labyrinth of"
13"His gaze lingered on a"
14"He didn't touch it."
15"He respected boundaries here, in"
16"She crossed her arms over"
17"Her black hair, still damp"
18"He reached into his breast"
19"*You're human, Aurora."
ratio0.411
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences90
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked home"
1"She counted to five in"
2"The uncompromising vertical line of"
3"The charcoal wool of the"
4"The flash of ivory where"
5"She shouldn't open it."
6"She knew better than to"
7"His name escaped before she"
8"The memory still burned—his sheets"
9"He didn't smile"
10"The amber iris—his left eye—caught"
11"The right eye, the demonic"
12"Rain had begun to bead"
13"Demons didn't shiver."
14"They didn't fidget."
15"Ptolemy materialized at her ankles,"
16"The cat's growl was low,"
17"Animals always knew."
18"She gripped the doorframe with"
19"A broken bottle of Irn-Bru"
ratio0.8
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences90
matches
0"Even when the woman didn't"
1"Now, Lucien's jaw worked."
ratio0.022
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked home with a solid thunk that usually settled Rory's nerves like sediment in a wine glass, but the knocking—three sharp, authoritative…"
1"At five-eleven, he wasn't towering, but he occupied space differently than humans did, as though gravity owed him a favor."
2"His gaze lingered on a scroll unspooling across the radiator—Avarosian script, she realized with a jolt, the same script he'd claimed was tattooed into the lini…"
3"He respected boundaries here, in this shrine to knowledge that could unmake him."
4"The Lucien who had quoted Welsh poetry to her in bed—*Nid cariad mohono, ond cythraul*—laughing at her shock that the French fixer spoke her grandmother's tongu…"
5"But when he touched her, it was with the pad of his thumb against the crescent scar on her left wrist, tracing the white line with a reverence that made her bre…"
6"But his mouth found hers with a gentleness that contradicted every weapon he carried, every lie he'd told in his thirty-two years of half-breathing."
7"His hand slid from her wrist to her waist, spanning her ribs with a possession that didn't demand but offered shelter."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, the words too loud in the small space"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.067
81.5860%