| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory asked softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.583 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 90.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1572 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.40% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1572 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "tracing" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "stark" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "unreadable" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "resonated" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "electric" | | 10 | "etched" | | 11 | "structure" | | 12 | "mechanical" | | 13 | "chill" | | 14 | "surreal" | | 15 | "cacophony" | | 16 | "searing" | | 17 | "trembled" | | 18 | "traced" | | 19 | "oppressive" | | 20 | "gloom" | | 21 | "crystal" | | 22 | "echoing" | | 23 | "dance" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1563 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1291 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.47 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Dymas | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Nyx | 8 | | Shade | 1 | | Rory | 19 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Isolde | 8 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hel-energy | 1 | | London | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Fae | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Dymas" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Varga" | | 6 | "Seer" | | 7 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.764 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 58.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "oranges that seemed to vibrate against the amber sky" | | 1 | "looked like greyhounds, but their skin wa" | | 2 | "felt like a shard of ice in her palm" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.64 | | wordCount | 1563 | | matches | | 0 | "not with water, but with a viscous, dark liquid" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.92% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 45.97 | | std | 20.56 | | cv | 0.447 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 74 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 67 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 48 | | 14 | 89 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 61 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 63 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 70 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 73 | | 27 | 75 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 55 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 37 |
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| 89.13% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "were braided" | | 1 | "was etched" | | 2 | "was written" | | 3 | "were made" |
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| 73.02% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 210 | | matches | | 0 | "was humming" | | 1 | "was frantically scrubbing" | | 2 | "was pulsing" | | 3 | "was guiding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.133 | | matches | | 0 | "She instinctively reached for her left wrist, her fingers tracing the small crescent-shaped scar there—a nervous tic that had followed her from Cardiff to the darkest corners of the cosmos." | | 1 | "Sprawling vineyards climbed the surrounding hills, but the vines weren’t wood; they were braided strands of translucent glass, pulsing with violet sap." | | 2 | "As she walked, Rory noticed—not for the first time—that the Seer’s feet left no impression on the spice-dusted ground." | | 3 | "The wind didn’t just howl; it whistled a low, dissonant chord that resonated in Rory’s teeth." | | 4 | "Beneath the trees, thick carpets of wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—electric blues and screaming oranges that seemed to vibrate against the amber sky." | | 5 | "She looked closer and realized Nyx was right; the bark of the trees was etched with fine, etched script—legalese in a language that made her head swim." | | 6 | "She looked toward a grand structure rising in the distance—a palace crafted from white bone and polished obsidian, its spires piercing the amber clouds." | | 7 | "As they drew closer, Rory saw the man’s eyes—they were hollow, filled with the same amber light as the sky." | | 8 | "He didn't look up as they passed; he simply continued his rhythmic scouring, his fingers raw and bleeding into the wine-dark water." | | 9 | "It wasn't music, but the cacophony of a thousand kitchens—the rhythmic chopping of knives, the roar of stoked fires, and the frantic shouting of orders in a dozen different tongues." | | 10 | "They didn't growl; they made a sound like silver forks scraping plates." | | 11 | "The hound didn’t bleed; it leaked a shimmering, golden syrup that smelled of honey and ozone." | | 12 | "The entrance hall was a cathedral of gluttony—chandeliers made of frozen fat dripped light onto tables that groaned under the weight of impossible delicacies." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 974 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.021560574948665298 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01026694045174538 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 15.95 | | std | 6.68 | | cv | 0.419 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 50.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.336734693877551 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 78.43% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the ground beneath them" | | 1 | "Then she looked at the" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She instinctively reached for her" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "They stood at the precipice" | | 3 | "They began the descent into" | | 4 | "They passed a grove of" | | 5 | "She looked closer and realized" | | 6 | "It reminded her of her" | | 7 | "They reached the floor of" | | 8 | "She looked toward a grand" | | 9 | "She saw a figure in" | | 10 | "He was frantically scrubbing a" | | 11 | "He didn't look up as" | | 12 | "She was a delivery girl" | | 13 | "It was guiding her toward" | | 14 | "It wasn't music, but the" | | 15 | "They looked like greyhounds, but" | | 16 | "They didn't growl; they made" | | 17 | "She simply watched the creatures" | | 18 | "She thought of the tiny" | | 19 | "Her mind, always moving a" |
| | ratio | 0.282 | |
| 65.88% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber sky of Dymas" | | 1 | "Rory stepped through the shimmering" | | 2 | "She instinctively reached for her" | | 3 | "The Shade’s form was a" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered, the sound like" | | 5 | "Rory corrected, though her voice" | | 6 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 7 | "The moonsilver dagger was a" | | 8 | "They stood at the precipice" | | 9 | "Orchards stretched toward the horizon," | | 10 | "Isolde Varga moved past them," | | 11 | "Isolde’s pale lavender eyes swept" | | 12 | "Isolde said, her voice a" | | 13 | "Rory muttered, rubbing the Heartstone" | | 14 | "The crimson gem was humming," | | 15 | "They began the descent into" | | 16 | "The wind didn’t just howl;" | | 17 | "They passed a grove of" | | 18 | "Rory reached out to touch" | | 19 | "Nyx cautioned, their violet eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.788 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 6.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped through the shimmering distortion of the Veil, her boots sinking into soil that felt more like pulverized spice than dirt." | | 1 | "She instinctively reached for her left wrist, her fingers tracing the small crescent-shaped scar there—a nervous tic that had followed her from Cardiff to the d…" | | 2 | "Orchards stretched toward the horizon, pear-shaped fruits glowing with an inner luminescence that made Rory’s eyes ache." | | 3 | "The crimson gem was humming, a rhythmic throb of heat against her chest that signaled the proximity of Hel-energy." | | 4 | "Beneath the trees, thick carpets of wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—electric blues and screaming oranges that seemed to vibrate against the amber sky." | | 5 | "Rory reached out to touch a low-hanging fruit that resembled a pomegranate but shimmered like a ruby." | | 6 | "Rory pulled her hand back as if the fruit had hissed at her." | | 7 | "They reached the floor of the valley, where a river ran not with water, but with a viscous, dark liquid that smelled of fermented blackberries and iron." | | 8 | "She looked toward a grand structure rising in the distance—a palace crafted from white bone and polished obsidian, its spires piercing the amber clouds." | | 9 | "The air grew humid, thick with steam that carried the scent of searing meat and exotic spices." | | 10 | "Isolde stood perfectly still as a third hound lunged at her, only to pass through her shimmering form as if she were a mirage." | | 11 | "The entrance hall was a cathedral of gluttony—chandeliers made of frozen fat dripped light onto tables that groaned under the weight of impossible delicacies." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, the sound like dry leaves skittering across a stone floor" | | 1 | "Rory corrected, though her voice lacked its usual bite" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her voice a melodic riddle" | | 3 | "Nyx cautioned, their violet eyes glowing brighter" | | 4 | "Rory reminded, her voice a low anchor in the surreal landscape" | | 5 | "Nyx commanded, their voice echoing with the weight of centuries" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory corrected (correct)" | | 2 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "she hissed (hiss)" | | 5 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |