Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR6W03EDM5SHPAKAP7BHJ2

Run Details

Duration:
26.0s
Cost:
$0.004862
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked with a sound like a breaking bone, sharp and final in the narrow hallway. Aurora Carter froze, her hand still hovering over the delivery bag slung across her shoulder. The smell of ginger, star anise, and fried oil clung to her clothes, a persistent haze from her shift at the Golden Empress that no amount of London rain seemed to wash away. She had expected Eva, perhaps, or maybe the landlord coming to complain about the noise from the bar below. She did not expect the man standing on the other side of the threshold. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway, blocking the dim light from the stairwell. He looked exactly as he had three years ago, and yet entirely different. The tailored charcoal suit was sharper, the fabric absorbing the gloom of the corridor rather than reflecting it. His platinum blond hair was slicked back with ruthless precision, not a strand out of place despite the damp London evening. But it was his eyes that pinned her to the spot—the heterochromatic gaze that had once traced the line of her jaw with such devastating intimacy. One iris burned amber, warm and human; the other was a void of pure black, a window to the Avaros realm he tried so hard to keep buried. "Rory," he said. His voice was lower than she remembered, a smooth baritone that carried the faint, melodic lilt of Marseille beneath the London accent. Aurora's breath hitched, a traitorous stutter in her chest. Her bright blue eyes narrowed, instinctively defensive. "Lucien." She didn't move to invite him in. She didn't step back. "How did you find this place?" "Eva is not as discreet as she believes," Lucien replied, his gaze dropping briefly to the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, visible where her sleeve had ridden up. The memory of how he'd once kissed that scar, tracing the childhood accident with a reverence that made her feel sacred, flashed between them like a live wire. "And you are surprisingly easy to track when one knows where to look for the Golden Empress delivery receipts." "You're trespassing," she said, though her voice lacked the steel she intended. The history between them wasn't just words; it was a physical weight, a gravity that pulled at her ribs. They had parted in a storm of shouted accusations and things left unsaid, the kind of rupture that usually sealed a door forever. Yet here he was, leaning on his ivory-handled cane, looking as though he belonged in her cramped, chaotic world. "Am I?" He tilted his head, a ghost of a smile touching his lips. It didn't reach his eyes. "You haven't thrown a pot of tea at me yet. I'm taking that as an invitation." Before she could formulate a retort, Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, wove himself between Aurora's ankles and let out a demanding yowl. The spell broke. Aurora stepped back, the motion stiff, and waved a hand toward the interior of the flat. "Don't touch anything. And take your shoes off. Eva just had the rugs cleaned." Lucien complied with an elegance that made the mundane act of removing oxfords look like a ritual. He stepped inside, and immediately the flat seemed to shrink. Every surface was already drowning in Eva's research—stacks of books on Celtic mythology, scrolls detailing warding sigils, and notebooks filled with frantic scribbles covered the coffee table, the floor, and the single armchair. Lucien navigated the minefield of paper without disturbing a single sheet, his movements precise, controlled. "It's... cozy," he offered, his amber eye scanning the clutter. "It's a disaster," Aurora corrected, dropping her delivery bag onto the kitchen counter. The plastic crinkled loudly in the sudden silence. She turned to face him, crossing her arms over her chest. "Why are you here, Lucien? We said everything we needed to say in Paris. Or rather, we screamed everything we needed to say." "We didn't say everything," he countered softly. He moved further into the room, stopping just out of arm's reach. The air between them charged, thick with the unsaid. "I left because I thought it was the only way to keep you safe. My world... it bleeds, Rory. You saw what happened. I couldn't risk you becoming another casualty of my father's lineage." "I wasn't a casualty," she snapped, the old hurt flaring hot and bright. "I was a partner. You decided for me. You made the choice to walk away, to cut me off without a word for two years, and then you show up here, in my friend's flat, looking like you stepped out of a GQ spread, and expect me to just... what? Forgive you?" Lucien's expression tightened. The black pupil in his left eye seemed to dilate, swallowing more of the amber. "I never expected forgiveness. I expected to see you alive. The rumors in the underworld were... concerning. An abusive ex, a sudden flight from Cardiff, working delivery jobs in East London." His voice hardened on the last part, a flicker of anger breaking through his composure. "You deserve better than hiding above a curry house, Rory. You have a mind that could dismantle governments, and you're spending it navigating traffic in the rain." "It's called life, Lucien. It's messy and it's real, unlike your polished little underworld games." She walked past him, needing the distance, and began aggressively straightening a stack of papers on the table. Her hands were shaking. She hated that he could see it. Hated that after all this time, his presence still unraveled her cool-headed demeanor. "It is not a game," he said, his voice close behind her. She hadn't heard him move. "And I am not playing. Someone is asking about you. Not Evan. Someone worse. They know about the incident in Paris. They know you were with me." Aurora stopped moving. The room went very still, save for Ptolemy grooming his tail on the sofa. She slowly turned around. "Who?" "I don't have a name yet. Just a symbol. A mark from Avaros." He tapped the ivory handle of his cane. "I came to warn you. And to offer my protection. Again." "You think I need your protection?" She laughed, a sharp, brittle sound. "I survived Evan. I survived running away with nothing but the clothes on my back. I think I can handle whatever demon is sniffing around." "You survived," Lucien agreed, stepping closer until the heat of him radiated against her skin. "But you shouldn't have to. Not alone." He reached out, his fingers hovering near her wrist, near the scar. He didn't touch her, but the air shimmered where his hand paused. "I made a mistake, Aurora. Leaving you was the hardest thing I have ever done, and every day since has been a lesson in regret. I am not asking you to trust me blindly. I am asking you to let me stand between you and the dark, just for a little while." Aurora looked up into those mismatched eyes. She saw the exhaustion there, masked by the impeccable suit and the stoic posture. She saw the half-demon who had taught her how to pick a lock with a hairpin and how to speak enough French to order wine in a crisis. She remembered the way he used to look at her, as if she were the only source of light in a world made of shadows. The anger was still there, a hard knot in her stomach. But beneath it, the attraction hummed, undeniable and dangerous. The things left unsaid in Paris hung in the air, heavy and suffocating, demanding to be addressed. "If you stay," she said, her voice quiet, "you sleep on the floor. And you don't touch my research. And if you try to 'fix' anything with that hidden blade of yours, I will throw you out myself." A slow, genuine smile spread across Lucien's face, transforming him from the intimidating fixer back into the man she had once loved. "Understood. No fixing. Just guarding." "And Lucien?" "Yes?" "Don't call me Laila," she said, using the alias she'd briefly adopted when they first met, a name that belonged to a version of herself that no longer existed. "I'm Rory now." "Rory," he repeated, testing the name on his tongue like a promise. "It suits you." He stepped back, giving her space, but the tension in the room had shifted. It was no longer just fear or anger; it was the electric, terrifying possibility of a second chance. Outside, the rain battered against the window of the Brick Lane flat, but inside, amidst the chaos of books and scrolls, the silence felt fragile, waiting to be broken by whatever came next.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
56.4103% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Lucien replied, his gaze dropping briefly to the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, visible where her sleeve had ridden up [briefly]"
1"he countered softly [softly]"
2"she said, using the alias she'd briefly adopted when they first met, a name that belonged to a version of herself that no longer existed [briefly no longer]"
79.4380% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1459
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
2"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.8759% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1459
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"amidst"
count1
4
word"navigated"
count1
5
word"navigating"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"shimmered"
2"weight"
3"amidst"
4"navigated"
5"navigating"
66.6667% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
2"a flicker of anger"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences71
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"kissed that scar"
1"hated that he"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean50.1
std29.49
cv0.589
sampleLengths
099
1118
225
334
476
573
635
754
875
910
1055
1162
1265
1391
1457
1544
1622
1732
1837
1998
2074
2137
2238
2327
242
251
2632
2715
2865
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"was slicked"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs171
matches
0"was, leaning"
1"were shaking"
98.0282% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount994
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.04225352112676056
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.012072434607645875
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean16.33
std10.86
cv0.665
sampleLengths
018
115
233
319
414
512
613
718
821
926
1028
113
1222
139
147
158
164
176
1829
1928
2019
2112
2219
2323
2419
2514
265
2716
2821
293
3016
3114
3217
3310
3433
3515
3610
3713
388
3911
4023
417
4212
439
4434
4513
4652
473
4815
4946
50.1873% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.34831460674157305
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners31
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"Lucien replied, his gaze dropping briefly to the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, visible where her sleeve had ridden up (reply, drop briefly leave ride up)"
1"she said, though her voice lacked the steel she intended (say, lack intend)"
2"he offered, his amber eye scanning the clutter (offer, scan)"
3"Aurora corrected, dropping her delivery bag onto the kitchen counter (correct, drop)"
4"he countered softly (counter softly)"
5"she snapped, the old hurt flaring hot and bright (snap, flare)"
6"laughed (laugh)"
7"Lucien agreed, stepping closer until the heat of him radiated against her skin (agree, step radiate)"
8"she said, using the alias she'd briefly adopted when they first met, a name that belonged to a version of herself that no longer existed (say, use briefly adopt meet, belong no longer exist)"
9"he repeated, testing the name on his tongue like a promise (repeat, test like)"
82.9180%