| 0.0000% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Lucien said, his tone shifting to something more businesslike [more]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "Rory said, hating how her voice wavered slightly [slightly]" |
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| 1.2158% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 1316 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "precisely" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "slowly" | | 5 | "suddenly" | | 6 | "really" | | 7 | "very" |
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| 100.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 46.8085% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 1316 | | totalAiIsms | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "facade" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "wavered" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "navigated" |
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| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "clear that whatever" | | 1 | "help that werewolf" |
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| 100.0000% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 26.61 | | std | 18.43 | | cv | 0.693 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 65 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 66 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 43 | | 20 | 49 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 62 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 46 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 55 | | 36 | 49 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 35 | | 48 | 33 |
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| 100.0000% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 147 | | matches | | |
| 88.0860% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 802 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.05361596009975062 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018703241895261846 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 11.75 | | std | 8.98 | | cv | 0.765 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 29 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 79.5796% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.5045045045045045 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 8.3333% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien said, his tone shifting to something more businesslike (say, shift more businesslike)" | | 1 | "he said quietly (say quietly)" | | 2 | "Rory said, hating how her voice wavered slightly (say, hate waver slightly)" | | 3 | "she said, watching his face (say, watch)" |
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