| 51.85% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 27 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Eva said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "She hesitated then [then]" | | 2 | "Eva asked aloud [aloud]" | | 3 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.643 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.148 | | effectiveRatio | 0.148 | |
| 93.86% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2443 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "tightly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 79.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2443 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "potential" | | 3 | "restrained" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "otherworldly" | | 6 | "maw" | | 7 | "tenderness" | | 8 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "e with hope" | | 1 | "t with fear" |
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| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 144 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2421 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 31 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.93% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 66 | | wordCount | 1890 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.48 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Market | 10 | | Quinn | 2 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Harlow | 28 | | Eva | 18 | | Oxford | 1 | | Morris | 4 | | Shade | 1 | | Camden | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Market" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Kowalski" | | 3 | "Harlow" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Morris" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.759 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like soot under their nails" |
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| 34.78% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 1.652 | | wordCount | 2421 | | matches | | 0 | "not where the body lay but collected in a crescent near the wall tiles" | | 1 | "not toward the dark mouth of the old tunnels but toward the tiled wall at the far end of the platform" | | 2 | "Not a formal name, but a shape they'd both known for months: people who trafficked" | | 3 | "not the residual trace of a rift but the imprint of a plan, a human thing cut with intent" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | | |
| 67.98% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 57.64 | | std | 22.36 | | cv | 0.388 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 104 | | 1 | 90 | | 2 | 77 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 75 | | 5 | 86 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 64 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 81 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 67 | | 13 | 111 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 77 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 56 | | 21 | 88 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 73 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 52 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 78 | | 30 | 69 | | 31 | 75 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 64 | | 35 | 44 | | 36 | 58 | | 37 | 48 | | 38 | 64 | | 39 | 40 | | 40 | 85 | | 41 | 63 |
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| 94.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "being told" | | 1 | "was patterned" | | 2 | "was frayed" | | 3 | "been rewritten" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 314 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 12 | | flaggedSentences | 22 | | totalSentences | 144 | | ratio | 0.153 | | matches | | 0 | "The leather strap of her watch creaked when she checked the time—military habit, not the orientation of a detective—and the face told her nothing she didn't already know: late enough for the Market to be winding down, early enough for the mood of it to be raw." | | 1 | "People lingered at the edges—shadows with wallets and secrets." | | 2 | "It hadn't congealed into the thick, matte clots Harlow expected; it lay like someone had taken the edge off life and let it spread." | | 3 | "There was no irony in it; she didn't call Eva that in front of the brass." | | 4 | "Eva's name carried other things—mileage in museum corridors, a degree from Oxford, a knack for seeing a sigil where an ordinary person saw graffiti." | | 5 | "Harlow's breath caught and she felt the old, stubborn ache in the place where another ghost lived—Morris—then shoved it down." | | 6 | "\"Shade work. Crafted—\" she tapped the metal, \"—by a Shade artisan. This points to the nearest supernatural rift.\"" | | 7 | "The skin oil had turned the brass dark in a crescent shape; whoever had held it had something like soot under their nails." | | 8 | "There was also a smudge of something pale, chalky, in a sigil across the face that didn't belong to the compass's maker—the line was too fresh, the powder unburned." | | 9 | "Harlow peeled back a corner of his sleeve and found the underside of the forearm was cleaner; hairless in the way people shaved their limbs for reasons that had nothing to do with hygiene." | | 10 | "The blood was colder than it should be; it held a metallic smell that suggested a preservative or a chemical with a haemostatic property." | | 11 | "\"Token work. Bone is entry currency here; people trade with it. They dust the sigils for ceremony, but they also use it to con—make something look ritual when it's a cover.\"" | | 12 | "Under yellow light, the tiles told stories: a child's boot—too small and shallow for an adult—made a print near the tile seam, as if to suggest innocence or misdirection." | | 13 | "Her mind slid to Morris then—the vague handful of details that had never added up, the compass in his pocket smeared with someone else's oil." | | 14 | "Eva's fingers found the compass again through the plastic; she traced the pattern of the sigils with a fingertip." | | 15 | "It was not a polite thing for the earth; it prodded at the scar of a partner lost to a set of circumstances that had not been put to rights." | | 16 | "Someone had tried to clean it; the thread was frayed, but the stitch pattern was particular—two loops, impossible to do if your hands shook." | | 17 | "\"You think it's them,\" she said—the clique." | | 18 | "It was inexplicably warm through the plastic; someone had handled it very recently." | | 19 | "If the clique had learned to mimic the rift, then the danger was not only supernatural; it was human ingenuity dressed up as terror." | | 20 | "Her jaw tightened; the watch glinted low on her wrist." | | 21 | "She did not like the way her mouth tasted—like metal and old ash." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1434 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same fresh, skillful abrasions." |
| | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.03277545327754533 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007670850767085077 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 144 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 144 | | mean | 16.81 | | std | 9.17 | | cv | 0.545 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 29 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 41.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3055555555555556 | | totalSentences | 144 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 89.03% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots made a soft," | | 1 | "She'd pushed her glasses up" | | 2 | "Her voice had the careful" | | 3 | "She had the look of" | | 4 | "She moved the sheet back" | | 5 | "It hadn't congealed into the" | | 6 | "She crouched and took in" | | 7 | "She drew out a small" | | 8 | "she tapped the metal, \"—by" | | 9 | "Her second thought was to" | | 10 | "She leaned forward, watching the" | | 11 | "It did not rest." | | 12 | "It drifted, minute and precise," | | 13 | "She kept her voice flat." | | 14 | "It had been flat for" | | 15 | "Her fingers brushed the compass" | | 16 | "She checked the body again" | | 17 | "She hesitated, then added" | | 18 | "Her voice was small in" | | 19 | "They'd used the compass to" |
| | ratio | 0.327 | |
| 35.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 96 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "The station smelled of old" | | 1 | "Harlow Quinn kept her shoulders" | | 2 | "Her boots made a soft," | | 3 | "The leather strap of her" | | 4 | "Strings of mismatched lamps hung" | | 5 | "Tonight a sheet covered the" | | 6 | "People lingered at the edges—shadows" | | 7 | "A Market hand in a" | | 8 | "Eva Kowalski was already there," | | 9 | "She'd pushed her glasses up" | | 10 | "Eva said without looking up" | | 11 | "Her voice had the careful" | | 12 | "She had the look of" | | 13 | "She moved the sheet back" | | 14 | "The body was male, mid-thirties," | | 15 | "The throat bore a shallow" | | 16 | "The eyes were almost unnaturally" | | 17 | "Blood pooled at an angle" | | 18 | "It hadn't congealed into the" | | 19 | "She crouched and took in" |
| | ratio | 0.85 | |
| 88.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Whoever had moved this body" | | 1 | "If the clique had learned" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 34.36% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn kept her shoulders squared against it, as if posture could keep smell and superstition at bay." | | 1 | "Strings of mismatched lamps hung over a cluster of stalls where, under ordinary circumstances, someone would be haggling for a bone whistle or a vial that smell…" | | 2 | "She drew out a small brass compass, its casing dulled by verdigris, its face etched with protective sigils that caught the light like old teeth." | | 3 | "It had been flat for three years now, a practiced thing that stood between her and the thing she didn't understand at all." | | 4 | "There was also a smudge of something pale, chalky, in a sigil across the face that didn't belong to the compass's maker—the line was too fresh, the powder unbur…" | | 5 | "On the back of his hand, a crescent of darker skin was patterned as if ringed tightly for hours." | | 6 | "The part nearest the ventilation shaft broke the pattern: a faint scuff as if someone had forced the grate and risen through, or placed something heavy against …" | | 7 | "Under yellow light, the tiles told stories: a child's boot—too small and shallow for an adult—made a print near the tile seam, as if to suggest innocence or mis…" | | 8 | "Her mind slid to Morris then—the vague handful of details that had never added up, the compass in his pocket smeared with someone else's oil." | | 9 | "Not a formal name, but a shape they'd both known for months: people who trafficked in the Market's gray morals, who kept secrets too useful to trade away." | | 10 | "Someone pulled the sheet back over the dead man with a tenderness that looked absurd among concrete and ash." | | 11 | "Outside, the station mouth led back into rainy Camden and the ordinary lights of a city that did not know it sheltered its own shadow trades." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 27 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 20 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.476 | | leniency | 0.952 | | rawRatio | 0.05 | | effectiveRatio | 0.048 | |