Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
170
glossingSentenceCount
9
matches
0
"as if listening to the rain"
1
"as if checking the platform behind her for someone else"
2
"not quite a smile"
3
"bottles that seemed to hold smoke, knives with edges that caught light without reflecting it, jars of dark powder, bundles of herbs tied with hair-thin twine"
4
"smelled like pennies and lilacs, why the C"
5
"something like recognition flickered there"
6
"looked like a sliver of bone carved smoot"
7
"as if listening to Quinn’s footsteps through the wet on her boots"
"Soho at midnight had a way of pretending it was still bright—shopfronts lit for no one, taxi headlights smearing through wet air—but the alley beside The Raven’s Nest stayed stubbornly dark."
1
"Around his neck something caught green—metal, round—before it vanished under his shirt."
2
"He flinched—an instant too late to play innocent."
3
"Herrera moved like someone who’d spent time hauling stretchers up stairwells—fast, economical, no wasted sway."
4
"A taxi honked—sharp, angry—brakes squealing as he slid past its bonnet."
5
"Quinn didn’t have his timing; she had weight and authority."
6
"He threaded between vehicles with a recklessness that wasn’t panic; it was urgency."
7
"Quinn still heard his last shout in her sleep—cut off, wrong, like a radio dying."
8
"Now Herrera—former paramedic, struck off for “unauthorized treatments,” always hovering on the edge of the same names she couldn’t connect—was running through the rain like he’d done it a hundred times."
9
"The air that rose from below smelled stale, metallic, and faintly sweet—like rotting fruit under iron."
10
"A gap opened, and warm light spilled out—amber and green, like old gas lamps and sickly neon mixed."
11
"Something laughed—high, brittle."
12
"His eyes flicked to her left wrist—her watch, maybe, or the way her hand hovered near her belt out of habit."
13
"The edge pressed hard against her knuckles—cold stone, unyielding."
14
"People moved in tight currents between tables laid with goods that didn’t belong in any legal shop—bottles that seemed to hold smoke, knives with edges that caught light without reflecting it, jars of dark powder, bundles of herbs tied with hair-thin twine."
15
"And the faces—"
16
"A shape detached from the nearest stall—a stocky man with a shaved head and a coat too heavy for underground."
17
"Found him for a second—his dark head, his shoulders—then lost him again behind a hanging curtain of beads that clacked softly as someone passed."
18
"The way it sat—worn leather, familiar."
19
"Quinn’s mind flashed Morris again—his grin, his patience, the way he’d called her Quinny when no one else dared."
20
"She could back out, call it in, bring uniforms, flood the entrance—"
21
"Voices brushed her ears—bargains made in murmurs, names spoken like threats."
22
"A shoulder bumped hers; a hand trailed too close to her coat pocket."
23
"Somewhere ahead, a shout rose—sharp, urgent—and the crowd rippled like water struck by a stone."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
111
technicalSentenceCount
9
matches
0
"The left arm hung a fraction stiff, as if he still remembered old damage."
1
"His right hand went to his chest, the reflexive protective press of someone who kept something valuable there."
2
"Herrera moved like someone who’d spent time hauling stretchers up stairwells—fast, economical, no wasted sway."
3
"Quinn’s mind tugged at files, at whispered informant tips, at the unlabelled fear that sat at the base of her throat whenever a case turned strange."
4
"Then his gaze lifted past her, as if checking the platform behind her for someone else."
5
"Not heat exactly, but a thick, living air that carried incense, oil, damp wool, and something sharper that made the back of her throat prickle."
6
"People moved in tight currents between tables laid with goods that didn’t belong in any legal shop—bottles that seemed to hold smoke, knives with edges that cau…"
7
"Found him for a second—his dark head, his shoulders—then lost him again behind a hanging curtain of beads that clacked softly as someone passed."
8
"The woman’s head tilted, as if listening to Quinn’s footsteps through the wet on her boots."