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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR7QEXJ4AWCCSPVHW0NVVM
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Model:
Z.AI GLM 4.5
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
45.1s
Cost:
$0.005644
Provider:
Z.AI
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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
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Meta
AI
The morning mist clung to the trees of Richmond Park as Aurora Carter followed Nyx through the winding path. Her black hair, usually tied back for her deli
very
job, fell loose around her shoulders, tickling the back of her neck. The Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt pulsed faintly against her skin, a steady warmth that had grown stronger as they approached their destination. "Are you certain about this?" Rory asked, her hand instinctively touching the hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade tucked into her belt. The moonsilver dagger felt cold to the touch, as always, despite the summer warmth. Nyx turned their head
slightly
, their form shifting between solid and incorporeal as sunlight filtered through the leaves. "The Seer asked us here. There are answers within the Grove that you will need for what comes next." The trees thinned
suddenly
, revealing a circle of ancient oak standing stones, each one at least as tall as Rory. Moss clung to their weathered surfaces, and faint runes
seemed to
shimmer in and out of existence as she stared at them. This was the boundary. Rory took a deep breath, the air tasting different somehow—crisper, cleaner, charged with something she couldn't name. "After you, shadow-dweller." Nyx flowed forward, their form becoming a streak of darkness that passed between two of the standing stones. Rory hesitated for only a moment before following, stepping through the invisible barrier that separated the mundane world from the Fae-touched realm beyond. The transition was like walking through warm water—a brief resistance, then
suddenly
she was through. Rory gasped, her bright blue eyes widening. The Grove was not what she had expected. Wildflowers in impossible colors bloomed in profusion—vibrant blues,
radiant
purples, and shimmering golds that
seemed to
pulse with their own inner light. Some flowers glowed
softly
, while others
appeared to
be made of
crystalline
petals that chimed faintly in the breeze. The sky above was not the London sky she had just left. Instead, it was a perpetual twilight, with stars visible even as sunlight somehow filtered through, creating an impossible duality. The air hummed with a subtle energy that raised the hairs on her arms. "Time moves differently here," Nyx whispered, their voice like rustling leaves. "We must be cautious." Rory reached up to touch her Heartstone Pendant, which was now glowing with a soft crimson light visible through her shirt. "It's reacting to something." "To the in-between," Nyx replied, their form more solid here than in the mortal realm. "This place exists between worlds, much like I do." As they moved deeper into the Grove, Rory
noticed that the
plants
seemed to
respond to their presence. Ferns unfurled as they passed, flowers turned to track their movement, and the trees themselves
seemed to
bend
slightly
, as if curious. The path beneath their feet was not dirt but a springy moss that emitted tiny sparks of light with each step. "I don't see any footprints," Rory observed, crouching to examine the ground. "Not even ours." "The Grove does not retain such marks," Nyx explained. "Isolde walks here often, yet leaves no trace. One of the peculiarities of this place." A sudden sound made Rory freeze—a melody like crystal bells
being played
by an unseen hand. It came from all around them, seemingly emanating from the
very
air. The Fae-Forged Blade at her belt thrummed in response, and Rory instinctively wrapped her fingers around its hilt. "What
is that?" she
whispered, her cool-headedness strained by the sheer strangeness of her surroundings. "The Grove sings," Nyx replied, their form rippling with what might have been pleasure. "It recognizes you as a guest, not an intruder." Rory stood
slowly
, releasing her grip on the dagger but keeping her hand near it. As they continued, the landscape shifted subtly. One moment they walked through a forest of ancient trees, the next they were in an open meadow filled with flowers that
seemed to
bloom and wither in cycles of seconds rather than seasons. "How long have we been here?" Rory asked,
suddenly
realizing she had lost all sense of time. Nyx gestured toward a small pool of water that reflected not the sky above but a swirling galaxy of stars. "Look." Rory approached the pool and peered into its depths. Instead of her own reflection, she saw images moving—herself and Nyx entering the Grove, then multiple versions of their journey through different paths, some happening simultaneously, others in what
appeared to
be different timeframes. "Is this... past, present, and future all at once?" she asked, her voice barely audible. "The Fae do not experience time as mortals do," Nyx explained. "In this place, all moments exist concurrently." The implications made Rory's head spin. She straightened up, focusing on something solid—her Heartstone Pendant, which had grown warmer. As she touched it, a pathway of glowing mushrooms
suddenly
illuminated before them, leading deeper into the Grove. "Isolde's doing, or the Grove's?" Rory wondered aloud. "Perhaps both," Nyx replied as they followed the
luminous
path. The air grew thicker with magic, making Rory
feel
lightheaded. Colors became more vivid, sounds more distinct. She could hear not just the chime of flowers and the whisper of leaves, but also the faint sound of laughter, like distant bells, and what might be voices speaking in a language she almost understood. The Grove opened into a circular clearing dominated by a massive tree with silver bark and leaves that
shimmered
like mother-of-pearl. Its branches twisted upward into the twilight sky, seemingly reaching for the stars. Beneath its canopy grew a single flower unlike any Rory had ever seen—its petals were translucent, and inside floated a light that changed color e
very
few seconds. "The Tree of Visions," Nyx said
softly
. "Isolde often comes here to receive her prophecies." As if summoned by their presence, a figure emerged from behind the great tree. Isolde Varga moved with impossible grace, her silver hair flowing like liquid moonlight, her lavender eyes seeming to hold the wisdom of centuries. She left no footprints on the mossy ground. "Aurora Carter, child of two worlds," Isolde said, her voice carrying the musicality of the Fae Courts. "And Nyx, who walks between realms. I have been expecting you." Rory's hand went instinctively to the Fae-Forged Blade at her belt. "You asked us to come here." "Indeed," Isolde replied, a cryptic smile playing on her lips. "The Veil weakens, and dangers from Hel seek entry into your world. The Heartstone Pendant you bear responds not just to Hel portals but to the thinning of boundaries between all realms." She gestured to the Grove around them. "This place exists in balance. As one boundary weakens, others must strengthen to maintain cosmic equilibrium. But something disrupts this balance now." As if in response to her words, the sky above
flickered
. For a brief moment, the twilight
was pierced
by a crack of crimson light, and the temperature dropped noticeably. The flowers dimmed, and the haunting melody faded into silence. The Heartstone Pendant flared hot against Rory's skin, and the Fae-Forged Blade hummed with cold energy. "What
was that?" Rory
asked, her hand tightening on the dagger's hilt. Isolde's expression was grave. "The boundaries fray. The solstice approaches, and with it, opportunity for those who would see the Veil torn
completely
." Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx, whose form had become more shadowed, less distinct. "That's why you brought us here." "Not just to warn you," Isolde said, approaching the unique flower beneath the great tree. "But to prepare you." She
gently
touched the floating light within the blossom. "The Grove has much to teach those who would stand against the coming darkness. And you, Aurora Carter, have a role to play that even I cannot fully see." The flower's light
suddenly
expanded, engulfing the clearing in a soft luminescence. Rory felt a strange sensation, as if the Grove itself
was imprinting
its knowledge upon her—the flow of time between realms, the nature of boundaries, the ways of magic that existed just beyond human perception. When the light faded, Rory knew with certainty that her life had irrevocably changed. The ordinary world she had known—delivering meals for the Golden Empress, living above Silas' bar—seemed a distant memory. "The first lesson is complete," Isolde said, her lavender eyes holding Rory's gaze. "The others will come in time. For now, you must return to the mortal realm, but
know that the
Grove will always be accessible to you, should you have need." As they turned to leave, Rory looked back at the ancient,
otherworldly
place she had just begun to discover. The wildflowers still bloomed in impossible colors, the great tree still reached for the stars, and the air still hummed with magic. She touched the Heartstone Pendant, now warm but not pulsing, and the Fae-Forged Blade at her belt. Whatever came next, she would face it with the knowledge that she now belonged to more than one world.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
96.2963%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
18
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"Nyx replied, their form more solid here than in the mortal realm [more]"
1
"Nyx said softly [softly]"
13.8502%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1509
totalAiIsmAdverbs
13
found
0
adverb
"completely"
count
1
1
adverb
"gently"
count
1
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
2
3
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
4
adverb
"softly"
count
2
5
adverb
"suddenly"
count
5
6
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"completely"
1
"gently"
2
"slightly"
3
"slowly"
4
"softly"
5
"suddenly"
6
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
60.2386%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1509
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"luminous"
count
1
1
word
"crystalline"
count
1
2
word
"flickered"
count
1
3
word
"shimmered"
count
1
4
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
5
word
"radiant"
count
1
highlights
0
"luminous"
1
"crystalline"
2
"flickered"
3
"shimmered"
4
"otherworldly"
5
"radiant"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
79
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
7
narrationSentences
79
filterMatches
0
"feel"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"appeared to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
4
totalSentences
98
matches
0
"noticed that the"
1
"is that?\" she"
2
"was that?\" Rory"
3
"know that the"
95.7156%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
46
mean
32.35
std
15.69
cv
0.485
sampleLengths
0
63
1
35
2
37
3
46
4
20
5
41
6
15
7
56
8
45
9
15
10
25
11
24
12
61
13
15
14
24
15
46
16
15
17
23
18
56
19
17
20
21
21
43
22
15
23
18
24
37
25
8
26
10
27
53
28
61
29
15
30
45
31
28
32
17
33
42
34
29
35
40
36
16
37
12
38
23
39
20
40
57
41
47
42
32
43
43
44
41
45
36
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
79
matches
0
"being played"
1
"was pierced"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
196
matches
0
"was imprinting"
90.3486%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1181
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
58
adverbRatio
0.04911092294665537
lyAdverbCount
26
lyAdverbRatio
0.02201524132091448
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
98
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
98
mean
15.18
std
7.47
cv
0.492
sampleLengths
0
19
1
21
2
23
3
21
4
14
5
18
6
19
7
20
8
22
9
4
10
17
11
3
12
18
13
23
14
15
15
7
16
8
17
22
18
19
19
12
20
19
21
14
22
11
23
4
24
21
25
4
26
15
27
9
28
18
29
22
30
21
31
12
32
3
33
9
34
15
35
16
36
12
37
18
38
15
39
14
40
9
41
15
42
7
43
34
44
17
45
20
46
1
47
9
48
34
49
15
64.6259%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
5
diversityRatio
0.41836734693877553
totalSentences
98
uniqueOpeners
41
8.3333%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
18
fancyCount
12
fancyTags
0
"Nyx whispered, their voice like rustling leaves (whisper, like rustling)"
1
"Rory observed, crouching to examine the ground (observe, crouch examine)"
2
"Nyx explained (explain)"
3
"whispered (whisper)"
4
"Nyx replied, their form rippling with what might have been pleasure (reply, ripple been pleasure)"
5
"Nyx explained (explain)"
6
"wondered (wonder)"
7
"Nyx replied as they followed the luminous path (reply follow)"
8
"Nyx said softly (say softly)"
9
"Isolde said, her voice carrying the musicality of the Fae Courts (say, carry)"
10
"Isolde replied, a cryptic smile playing on her lips (reply, play)"
11
"Isolde said, approaching the unique flower beneath the great tree (say, approach)"
84.0829%