| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora's hand moved instinctively [instinctively]" | | 1 | "Isolde corrected gently [gently]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.541 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 79.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1682 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "gently" | | 4 | "slightly" | | 5 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1682 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "footfall" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "resolved" | | 9 | "electric" | | 10 | "gleaming" | | 11 | "comforting" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "cascading" | | 14 | "crystallized" | | 15 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | | |
| 16.27% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1667 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1262 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.98 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | October | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Nyx | 8 | | Aurora | 25 | | London | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Shoreditch | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Welsh | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae-forged" | | 4 | "Shoreditch" | | 5 | "Fae" | | 6 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.51 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed affected by this place, their edges sharper, more defined than Aurora had ever seen them" | | 1 | "seemed almost deliberate" | | 2 | "quite see but somehow felt beneath her feet—a rightness in some directions, a subtle wrongness in others" | | 3 | "looked like an eye, and when it blinked a" | | 4 | "words that seemed to arrive in Aurora's mind a half-second before she heard them with her ears" | | 5 | "felt like morning frost" | | 6 | "something like sorrow in her voice" | | 7 | "as if listening" | | 8 | "quite silence" |
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| 20.04% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.8 | | wordCount | 1667 | | matches | | 0 | "not the absence of sound, but rather sound of a different quality entirely" | | 1 | "not a physical barrier, but something else, something" | | 2 | "not unkindly, but with the weight of someone who had seen too many futures to" |
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| 97.22% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "eyes that saw" | | 1 | "noticed that her" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 40.66 | | std | 25.07 | | cv | 0.616 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 65 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 70 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 62 | | 21 | 91 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 76 | | 28 | 53 | | 29 | 57 | | 30 | 61 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 50 | | 34 | 92 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 81 | | 37 | 58 | | 38 | 52 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 27 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 203 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was composing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.125 | | matches | | 0 | "\"The boundary is here.\" Their voice carried that strange quality it always had—less sound than sensation, like whispers brushing the inside of her skull." | | 1 | "\"Wise.\" Nyx's violet eyes—the only part of them that held any color—flickered with what might have been approval." | | 2 | "The next, silence swallowed everything—not the absence of sound, but rather sound of a different quality entirely." | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in waves of color that shouldn't exist together—deep violet pressed against burning orange, soft pink bleeding into electric blue." | | 4 | "The trees here weren't oaks anymore—or rather, they were oaks in the same way a cathedral was a collection of stones." | | 5 | "They moved deeper into the grove, following a path that Aurora couldn't quite see but somehow felt beneath her feet—a rightness in some directions, a subtle wrongness in others." | | 6 | "She heard music—distant, wordless, achingly beautiful—that seemed to come from the trees themselves, their silver bark vibrating with harmonics she felt in her bones." | | 7 | "Aurora was composing a suitably cutting response when the trees fell away, and she found herself standing at the edge of a clearing within the clearing—a space that felt somehow more real than the dreamscape around it, more grounded, more intentional." | | 8 | "The Seer looked exactly as she had when Aurora met her in a cramped café in Shoreditch three weeks ago—silver hair cascading to her waist, pale lavender eyes that saw too much, an ageless face that could have belonged to a woman of twenty or two hundred." | | 9 | "Aurora stopped at the edge of the clearing, suddenly aware of how solid the boundary felt—not a physical barrier, but something else, something that required permission to cross." | | 10 | "Aurora glanced at Nyx, who inclined their head slightly—as close to a shrug as a being of living shadow could manage." | | 11 | "Isolde smiled—not unkindly, but with the weight of someone who had seen too many futures to offer false comfort." |
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| 92.68% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1282 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 62 | | adverbRatio | 0.0483619344773791 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015600624024960999 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 17.36 | | std | 11.05 | | cv | 0.636 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 30 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 46.53% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.3541666666666667 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, though she already" | | 1 | "Their voice carried that strange" | | 2 | "She stepped forward." | | 3 | "She blinked, and the grove" | | 4 | "They bloomed in defiance of" | | 5 | "They trailed off, which was" | | 6 | "They rose impossibly high, their" | | 7 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 8 | "She passed a pond whose" | | 9 | "She heard music—distant, wordless, achingly" | | 10 | "She looked complete." | | 11 | "She rose in a single" | | 12 | "She stepped across the threshold." | | 13 | "She gasped, stumbling, and Isolde" | | 14 | "Her lavender eyes had gone" | | 15 | "Her grip tightened" | | 16 | "She released Aurora's arm and" | | 17 | "She thought of her father" | | 18 | "She thought of her mother's" | | 19 | "She thought of her own" |
| | ratio | 0.3 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed out" | | 1 | "Aurora paused at the threshold," | | 2 | "she asked, though she already" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant beneath her" | | 4 | "Their voice carried that strange" | | 5 | "Aurora could feel something, though" | | 6 | "The air seemed to press" | | 7 | "The world shimmered there, like" | | 8 | "Nyx's violet eyes—the only part" | | 9 | "Aurora touched the small crescent" | | 10 | "The childhood wound had long" | | 11 | "She stepped forward." | | 12 | "The transition happened between one" | | 13 | "The next, silence swallowed everything—not" | | 14 | "The air itself seemed to" | | 15 | "Aurora's first breath tasted of" | | 16 | "She blinked, and the grove" | | 17 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in" | | 18 | "They bloomed in defiance of" | | 19 | "Aurora looked up and found" |
| | ratio | 0.929 | |
| 71.43% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Even they seemed affected by" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed out of the morning mist like broken teeth, ancient oaks twisted into shapes that defied the natural grain of wood." | | 1 | "Aurora paused at the threshold, her breath clouding in air that had grown suddenly cold despite the mild October day behind her." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in waves of color that shouldn't exist together—deep violet pressed against burning orange, soft pink bleeding into electric b…" | | 3 | "They bloomed in defiance of season, petals unfurling toward a sky that had shifted from London's perpetual gray to a soft, luminous gold." | | 4 | "They rose impossibly high, their silver-white bark gleaming like polished bone, their branches interweaving overhead in patterns that seemed almost deliberate." | | 5 | "The wildflowers parted before them, stems bending away as if pushed by an invisible hand, and Aurora tried not to think about how they straightened again immedi…" | | 6 | "Aurora was composing a suitably cutting response when the trees fell away, and she found herself standing at the edge of a clearing within the clearing—a space …" | | 7 | "The Seer looked exactly as she had when Aurora met her in a cramped café in Shoreditch three weeks ago—silver hair cascading to her waist, pale lavender eyes th…" | | 8 | "She gasped, stumbling, and Isolde caught her elbow with fingers that felt like morning frost." | | 9 | "The grove seemed to press closer, the silver trees leaning in as if listening." | | 10 | "Aurora felt the Fae blade pulse cold at her hip, felt the pendant burn warm against her heart, felt something vast and patient and ancient watching her from the…" |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, their voice carrying a warning" | | 1 | "Nyx advised, a beat too late" | | 2 | "Nyx paused, their form flickering" | | 3 | "She released, her silver hair catching the amber light like liquid mercury" |
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| 41.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx advised (advise)" | | 3 | "Isolde corrected gently (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.324 | | leniency | 0.649 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.216 | |