| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora corrected automatically [automatically]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.577 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 88.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1289 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1289 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "resolving" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "analyzed" | | 10 | "dancing" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "throb" | | 13 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "knuckles turned white" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.27% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 1282 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Psychogenic hallucination," | | 1 | "Pre-Law brain trying to rationalize supernatural phenomena." | | 2 | "Safe. For now." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 52.60% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 1078 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 1.95 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 21 | | Others | 1 | | English | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | November | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | July | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Courts | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | East | 1 | | London | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "July" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "East" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.526 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 39.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "whisper that seemed to come from inside her own head, a rasp of dry leaves" | | 1 | "something like polished obsidian" | | 2 | "felt like touching a live wire" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1282 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 36.63 | | std | 21.92 | | cv | 0.598 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 79 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 70 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 63 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 74 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 66 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 63 | | 24 | 69 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 50 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 26 |
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| 93.82% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "been redrawn" | | 1 | "was supposed" | | 2 | "being dissected" |
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| 15.84% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "were already waiting" | | 1 | "were watching" | | 2 | "were breathing" | | 3 | "wasn't reacting" | | 4 | "was reacting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0.088 | | matches | | 0 | "Today, as Aurora ducked under the iron railing, the air tasted different—sharp, like ozone and crushed mint." | | 1 | "The park map was wrong; the contours of the earth seemed to have been redrawn by a drunk artist." | | 2 | "It was subtle—a distortion in the air, much like the heat haze rising off asphalt in July, but this was cold." | | 3 | "Wildflowers—lavender, foxglove, and something with petals the color of bruised plums—clustered around the base of the standing stones." | | 4 | "The air here wasn’t wind; it was a breeze that carried a scent Aurora couldn’t place—too sweet, like overripe fruit fermenting in the sun." | | 5 | "She looked older than the photos Aurora had seen in her phone—though that was a contradiction in terms for a being of the Fae Courts." | | 6 | "Her voice didn’t just carry; it seemed to vibrate the dust motes dancing in the air." | | 7 | "The strangeness of it washed over her—a heavy, exquisite vertigo." | | 8 | "She was a lawyer’s daughter; she could negotiate with devils." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1090 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.03394495412844037 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015596330275229359 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 12.57 | | std | 7.61 | | cv | 0.606 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 45.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.35294117647058826 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 40.65% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the world shimmered." |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 44.39% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "They were mostly shadow, a" | | 1 | "She pulled her black jacket" | | 2 | "she said, though her heart" | | 3 | "They walked for twenty minutes." | | 4 | "It should have taken them" | | 5 | "It was subtle—a distortion in" | | 6 | "She didn’t walk, exactly." | | 7 | "She glided, her boots sinking" | | 8 | "It was a heavy, organic" | | 9 | "They emerged into the clearing." | | 10 | "It wasn’t a forest clearing" | | 11 | "It was a garden of" | | 12 | "They bloomed year-round, even in" | | 13 | "They drifted closer to Aurora," | | 14 | "She felt the weight of" | | 15 | "It was supposed to pulse" | | 16 | "She reached up with her" | | 17 | "They approached the center of" | | 18 | "She looked older than the" | | 19 | "Her silver hair, long and" |
| | ratio | 0.439 | |
| 14.88% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "The gate to Richmond Park" | | 1 | "The Others were already waiting." | | 2 | "Nyx stood by the ancient" | | 3 | "They were mostly shadow, a" | | 4 | "Nyx’s voice was a whisper" | | 5 | "Aurora tightened her grip on" | | 6 | "The Fae-Forged Blade lay heavy" | | 7 | "She pulled her black jacket" | | 8 | "she said, though her heart" | | 9 | "They walked for twenty minutes." | | 10 | "It should have taken them" | | 11 | "The park map was wrong;" | | 12 | "The undergrowth grew thicker, the" | | 13 | "It was subtle—a distortion in" | | 14 | "Aurora squinted, blinking rapidly." | | 15 | "The rough, fibrous texture smoothed" | | 16 | "The canopy above, previously dense" | | 17 | "Aurora whispered, reaching up to" | | 18 | "The crescent-shaped scar there felt" | | 19 | "Isolde said, her voice floating" |
| | ratio | 0.89 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "To her left, Isolde waited," | | 1 | "If she had to fight" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx stood by the ancient oak that marked the park’s eastern edge, their form flickering like a candle in a drafty hallway." | | 1 | "They were mostly shadow, a humanoid silhouette that drank the grey twilight of the English afternoon, but their faintly glowing violet eyes cut through the gloo…" | | 2 | "To her left, Isolde waited, a statue of silver-stitched silk in a parka that looked entirely too warm for the crisp November wind." | | 3 | "The undergrowth grew thicker, the brambles curling away from Nyx as they passed, as if the plants were afraid of the void in their companion’s shape." | | 4 | "She glided, her boots sinking slightly into the moss before resolving, leaving no footprint behind, as the codex warned." | | 5 | "Aurora stepped over the rough roots that had previously been smooth bark." | | 6 | "*Pre-Law brain trying to rationalize supernatural phenomena.* But the ground felt solid beneath her feet, the soles of her sneakers pressing down on dirt and ro…" | | 7 | "It was a heavy, organic grounding that matched the heaviness in her stomach." | | 8 | "The air here wasn’t wind; it was a breeze that carried a scent Aurora couldn’t place—too sweet, like overripe fruit fermenting in the sun." | | 9 | "For now.* The stone was warm against her skin, radiating a dull heat that contrasted sharply with the cold moonmetal of her dagger." | | 10 | "They approached the center of the grove where Isolde had knelt, facing a pool of water that didn't reflect the white sky, but instead showed a swirling nebula o…" | | 11 | "Her pale lavender eyes locked onto Aurora, and for a second, Aurora felt as though she were being dissected, fileted, and analyzed by a microscopic lens." | | 12 | "The crimson gem inside pulsed once, a sharp throb that matched her heartbeat." |
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| 58.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, though her heart hammered a frantic, rhythmic beat against her ribs" | | 1 | "Isolde said, her voice floating above the wind" |
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| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Aurora corrected automatically (correct)" | | 3 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.538 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |