| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.533 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 59.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1120 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1120 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "vibrated" | | 1 | "surreal" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "ephemeral" | | 4 | "otherworldly" | | 5 | "sense of" | | 6 | "fleeting" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "marveled" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "stomach" | | 16 | "echoes" | | 17 | "apprehension" | | 18 | "flicker" | | 19 | "streaming" | | 20 | "pounding" | | 21 | "warmth" | | 22 | "raced" | | 23 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1097 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 932 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.86 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 4 | | Varga | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Dymas | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Scenes | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Aurora | 8 | | Nyx | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Varga" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Veil" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed alive their edges softly humming with an ancient energy that thrummed beneath her feet" |
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| 17.68% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.823 | | wordCount | 1097 | | matches | | 0 | "not entirely unpleasant, but decidedly alien" | | 1 | "no longer static but" |
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| 62.50% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "felt that sense" | | 1 | "watched that border" |
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| 75.83% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 45.71 | | std | 18.99 | | cv | 0.415 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 97 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 70 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 63 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 62 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 52 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 46 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 155 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 64 | | ratio | 0.25 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora paused, her eyes narrowing slightly as she took in the riot of colors blooming in the damp, fertile air—wildflowers stretching upwards, their petals shimmering faintly in hues too vibrant for any conventional spring, as if they carried whispers of a realm untouched by time." | | 1 | "The moment she crossed the boundary, her senses prickled—a faint, humming vibrated deep in her bones, not entirely unpleasant, but decidedly alien." | | 2 | "Outside, the world moved on, but here—here, moments stretched and folded like the petals of the blooming flowers, unending, yet fleeting." | | 3 | "The whisper of soft wind played tricks of sound—music, perhaps, or some ancient language woven into a melody only the woods understood." | | 4 | "Aurora’s fingertips brushed the pendant at her neck—the Heartstone, pulsating faintly, warm against her skin." | | 5 | "She drew it carefully, more to touch the strange, untouched magic than because she believed it would be needed—yet." | | 6 | "The remaining trees parted to reveal a clearing—an amphitheater of glowing stones, each one like a miniature mirror, shimmering with a faint, iridescent sheen." | | 7 | "Aurora marveled at the sight—the stones seemed alive, their edges softly humming with an ancient energy that thrummed beneath her feet." | | 8 | "She stepped forward, eyes tracing the faint carvings etched into their surfaces—symbols she couldn’t recognize, yet somehow felt familiar, like memories buried deep." | | 9 | "Her hand reached instinctively for the Heartstone pendant—warm now, stronger than before—just as she felt a sudden, strange shift in the air." | | 10 | "Scenes from distant worlds—towers of glass and steel, ancient forests with no end, skies swirling with colors she’d never seen—flooded her vision." | | 11 | "Aurora’s stomach clenched as the echoes danced around her, whispering riddles and warnings—visions of the Veil flickering, rifts tearing through the fabric of the realms, shadows slipping between worlds." | | 12 | "The air grew thick with a new presence—an almost imperceptible shift that invisibly tugged at them, urging them deeper." | | 13 | "Aurora’s eyes caught a flicker at the edge of her vision—something dark and streaming, like shadow-bound tendrils stretching from the stones, whispering silent promises of knowledge and power." | | 14 | "Her mind raced—she had to decide whether to press on, risking the unknown truths behind the shadow’s whisper, or retreat to the safety of the outside, where the world’s quiet, familiar rhythm awaited." | | 15 | "The realm was alive—an ancient, breathing entity, holding its secrets tight, waiting just beneath the shimmering surface." |
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| 85.12% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 640 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender leaf-shaped form." |
| | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.046875 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0234375 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 64 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 64 | | mean | 17.14 | | std | 7.88 | | cv | 0.459 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 54.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.375 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, voice like a" | | 1 | "She left no footprints, the" | | 2 | "she told them quietly, eyes" | | 3 | "They all felt that sense" | | 4 | "She looked down at it," | | 5 | "She drew it carefully, more" | | 6 | "Their surfaces reflected and distorted" | | 7 | "She stepped forward, eyes tracing" | | 8 | "they whispered, voice blending with" | | 9 | "Her hand reached instinctively for" | | 10 | "Her senses thrummed with the" | | 11 | "It was beautiful, and unsettling." | | 12 | "She grasped the Fae blade" | | 13 | "she said, voice steady despite" | | 14 | "Her fingers stroked the Heartstone" | | 15 | "Her mind raced—she had to" | | 16 | "She took a deep breath," | | 17 | "she said softly, voice steady" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 6.30% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted as they" | | 1 | "Aurora paused, her eyes narrowing" | | 2 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 3 | "Nyx slithered forward like a" | | 4 | "The shifting silhouette moved between" | | 5 | "they murmured, voice like a" | | 6 | "Isolde Varga’s silver hair shimmered" | | 7 | "She left no footprints, the" | | 8 | "she told them quietly, eyes" | | 9 | "They all felt that sense" | | 10 | "The whisper of soft wind" | | 11 | "Aurora’s fingertips brushed the pendant" | | 12 | "She looked down at it," | | 13 | "Nyx shifted again, their form" | | 14 | "The girl nodded, clutching the" | | 15 | "The blade was always cold," | | 16 | "She drew it carefully, more" | | 17 | "Every step into this uncharted" | | 18 | "The remaining trees parted to" | | 19 | "Their surfaces reflected and distorted" |
| | ratio | 0.907 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 55.75% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted as they stepped past the ancient oak standing stones, a ripple of something unseen passing through the shadows that clung stubbornly to the edge…" | | 1 | "Aurora paused, her eyes narrowing slightly as she took in the riot of colors blooming in the damp, fertile air—wildflowers stretching upwards, their petals shim…" | | 2 | "Nyx slithered forward like a shadow unbound, their form flickering between solid and intangible, violet eyes glowing softly in the dim, surreal light." | | 3 | "She looked down at it, the crimson gem whispering of Dymas and a realm of excess, its glow faint and almost hesitant, as if wary of awakening something older th…" | | 4 | "Aurora marveled at the sight—the stones seemed alive, their edges softly humming with an ancient energy that thrummed beneath her feet." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she told, eyes reflecting the strange luminescence around them" | | 1 | "they whispered, voice blending with the wind" | | 2 | "she said softly, voice steady," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |