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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR8K2XX6944B9S19DBM4R4
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Model:
Z.AI GLM 4.5
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
36.6s
Cost:
$0.004147
Provider:
WandB
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Rain lashed against Detective Harlow Quinn's face as she rounded the corner, her worn leather
watch
on her left wrist catching the dim glow of a streetlamp. Three blocks now, she'd been chasing Herrera through the winding streets of Soho, her military-precise strides eating up the pavement despite the slick conditions. Ahead, Tomás Herrera's dark figure darted between pedestrians, his short curly hair plastered to his head by the downpour. "Stop! Metropolitan Police!" Quinn's voice cut through the night, but Herrera only glanced back, his warm brown eyes wide with fear before he disappeared around another corner. Quinn cursed under her breath. She'd been sitting in her car outside The Raven's Nest,
watch
ing the distinctive green neon sign reflect in puddles on the street, when Herrera had emerged with that young woman—the one with the inexplicable wounds that had healed overnight. The same woman who had vanished from the hospital against medical advice. The same woman whose case file now lay open on Quinn's desk with more questions than answers. Her sharp jaw tightened as she pushed forward, ignoring the protest of her knees after eighteen years on the force. At forty-one, she was still in prime condition, but rain-slicked London streets at midnight tested anyone's resolve. Herrera was younger, faster, but Quinn had something he didn't—determination fueled by the memory of DS Morris, her partner who had died under circumstances that still kept her up at night. Unexplained circumstances with whispers of supernatural origins that Quinn had dismissed until recently. A flash of movement to her left—Herrera was cutting through an alley. Quinn followed, her hand instinctively resting on the grip of her service pistol. The alley narrowed, brick walls pressing in, garbage bins overflowing. Water poured from drainpipes overhead, creating a curtain of rain between her and her quarry. When she emerged, blinking water from her brown eyes, she found herself in Camden. The usual nighttime crowd had thinned in the downpour, leaving empty pavements and shuttered shops. Herrera was nowhere to be seen. Quinn slowed, her breathing controlled despite the exertion. She scanned the area, noting the deserted Tube station entrance ahead—abandoned for years according to city records. But as she
watch
ed, a figure slipped through a gap in the fencing surrounding the station entrance. Herrera. Quinn approached
cautiously
, her steps silent on the wet pavement. The fencing had been cut recently, the edges still raw. She slipped through the gap, finding herself in a concrete concourse that smelled of damp and decay. Emergency lighting cast long shadows across platforms where trains hadn't run in decades. A soft glow emanated from deeper within the station. Quinn followed, her hand resting on her pistol again. She could hear whispers now, a murmur of voices that shouldn't be in an abandoned place. At the bottom of a broken escalator, Herrera stood before a graffiti-covered wall. He reached into his jacket and pulled out something small—a carved bone token that gleamed faintly in the darkness. He pressed it against a specific brick, and the wall
seemed to
shimmer before parting like a curtain. Quinn's breath caught. Through the opening, she glimpsed a bustling marketplace unlike anything she'd ever seen. Stalls glowed with unnatural light, vendors hawked strange wares, and patrons—some of whom didn't look entirely human—milled about in a cavernous space that shouldn't exist beneath London. The Veil Market. The name surfaced from a file she'd read recently—whispers of a supernatural black market that moved locations with the full moon. She'd dismissed it as fairy tales, the ramblings of a witness high on something. Yet here it was. Herrera disappeared through the opening, and the wall
began to
solidify behind him. Quinn stood frozen at the bottom of the escalator, rainwater dripping from her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair. Every instinct screamed at her to call for backup, to secure the perimeter, to follow proper procedure. But proper procedure hadn't saved Morris. Proper procedure had closed his case as "unexplained" and left Quinn with unanswered questions that had gnawed at her for three years. Her fingers tightened around the grip of her pistol. This was what she'd been hunting—these people, this place, the truth behind what had
happened to
her partner. The clique that Herrera belonged to, the one she suspected
was involved
in criminal activity that defied rational explanation. The wall was almost fully solidified now. In seconds, the entrance would be gone, moving to who knew where for the next full moon. Quinn moved forward, her military precision carrying her across the concourse in three quick strides. She reached the wall just as the last shimmer of magic faded. Her hand pressed against solid brick where moments before there had been an entrance. "Damn it," she muttered, running her hands along the surface, searching for a trigger, a mechanism, anything. A voice spoke behind her. "Looking for something, Detective?" Quinn spun around, her pistol drawn and leveled in one fluid motion. A woman stood there, dark eyes
gleaming
in the dim light. She held up empty hands, but there was something unsettling about her smile—too many teeth, too sharp. "The entrance is closed," the woman said, her voice like
velvet
over gravel. "Unless you have a token." Quinn kept her pistol steady. "Who are you?" "A friend. Or an enemy, depending on your perspective. I know what you're hunting. I knew DS Morris too." At the mention of her partner's name, Quinn's finger tightened on the trigger. "What do you know about Morris?" "More than you do, apparently." The woman tilted her head. "The Market will reopen at the next full moon. But if you want answers sooner, there's another way." Quinn hesitated, her mind racing. This could be a trap. This woman could be involved in whatever had
happened to
Morris. But she also might be the only lead Quinn had had in three years. "What way?" Quinn asked, her voice steady despite the pounding of her heart against her ribs. The woman smiled again, those sharp teeth flashing. "There's always a price for knowledge, Detective Quinn. What are you willing to pay?" Rain dripped from the ceiling above, forming puddles at their feet. The abandoned tube station
seemed to
hold its breath, waiting for her answer. Behind the solid wall, Quinn could almost sense the bustle of the Market, the secrets it held, the truth about Morris that might finally be within her grasp. Her decision made, Quinn lowered her pistol
slightly
. "Tell me what you want."
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
3
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
81.7518%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1096
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"cautiously"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"cautiously"
1
"slightly"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
81.7518%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1096
totalAiIsms
2
found
0
word
"gleaming"
count
1
1
word
"velvet"
count
1
highlights
0
"gleaming"
1
"velvet"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
72
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
5
narrationSentences
72
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
2
"happened to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
80
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
32
mean
33.75
std
17.82
cv
0.528
sampleLengths
0
70
1
27
2
73
3
37
4
44
5
50
6
35
7
42
8
1
9
50
10
34
11
50
12
43
13
42
14
13
15
62
16
46
17
24
18
41
19
17
20
9
21
40
22
18
23
8
24
19
25
19
26
28
27
35
28
16
29
22
30
52
31
13
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
72
matches
0
"was involved"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
158
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1005
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
31
adverbRatio
0.030845771144278607
lyAdverbCount
14
lyAdverbRatio
0.013930348258706468
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
80
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
80
mean
13.5
std
7.01
cv
0.519
sampleLengths
0
27
1
24
2
19
3
27
4
5
5
39
6
12
7
17
8
20
9
17
10
31
11
13
12
12
13
13
14
10
15
15
16
14
17
15
18
6
19
8
20
17
21
17
22
1
23
10
24
10
25
17
26
13
27
9
28
9
29
16
30
13
31
19
32
18
33
3
34
13
35
27
36
3
37
21
38
14
39
4
40
13
41
17
42
17
43
6
44
22
45
9
46
18
47
19
48
7
49
17
62.5000%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
5
diversityRatio
0.4125
totalSentences
80
uniqueOpeners
33
91.6667%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
3
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"she muttered, running her hands along the surface, searching for a trigger, a mechanism, anything (mutter, run search)"
95.1571%