| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.524 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1331 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1331 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "predator" | | 4 | "measured" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "pounding" | | 7 | "footfall" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "scanned" | | 11 | "perfect" | | 12 | "trembled" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "wavered" | | 15 | "velvet" | | 16 | "silk" | | 17 | "searing" | | 18 | "echo" | | 19 | "dance" | | 20 | "etched" | | 21 | "sentinel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | matches | | |
| 92.29% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1316 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1124 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.87 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Aurora | 21 | | Isolde | 10 | | Nyx | 11 | | Varga | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Veil | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Blade" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.566 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 91.18% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "lines that seemed to shift under scrutiny" | | 1 | "as though peering through the Veil itself" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.76 | | wordCount | 1316 | | matches | | 0 | "not Nyx’s but countless slender shapes" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.42% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 37.6 | | std | 17.15 | | cv | 0.456 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 77 | | 1 | 69 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 53 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 67 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 42 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 45 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 34 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 198 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 122 | | ratio | 0.107 | | matches | | 0 | "Warm amber light filtered through a haze that shimmered at the boundary of vision—an imperceptible quiver that spoke of a barrier between worlds." | | 1 | "She tested the dagger at her hip—a slender, leaf-shaped blade of moonsilver, cold against her palm even above the leather of her coat." | | 2 | "Wildflowers of impossible color—turquoise poppies, lavender bells—bent toward her, petals quivering." | | 3 | "Aurora felt dizzy as the carvings pulsed with memory—ancient spells entwined with laughter and tears." | | 4 | "Aurora’s pulse spiked; she scanned the underbrush." | | 5 | "She caught her reflection—bright blue eyes dulled by wonder and fear—superimposed on shifting illusions beneath the glassy surface." | | 6 | "Moonlight—though a sun orb hung low and golden—filtered through unseen openings, lending the grove a twin day-night aspect." | | 7 | "Aurora’s watch lay hidden in her coat; she knew hours might slip by like droplets through a sieve." | | 8 | "She reached for it, heart hammering with curiosity—then felt Nyx’s shadow fall over her hand." | | 9 | "“Some fruits bear sweetness; others harbor ruin,” they cautioned." | | 10 | "Aurora hesitated, imagining the pulp searing her throat, or worse—enchanting her mind." | | 11 | "Shadows danced between the trunks, not Nyx’s but countless slender shapes—branches or spirits, she couldn’t tell." | | 12 | "The shimmering at the grove’s edge grew more pronounced—a quiet dance of light and shadow where oaks curved inward." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1150 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender, leaf-shaped blade" | | 1 | "ice-cold against her" |
| | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.020869565217391306 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004347826086956522 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 122 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 122 | | mean | 10.79 | | std | 6.87 | | cv | 0.637 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 59.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.36885245901639346 | | totalSentences | 122 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 31.75% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the grove opened into" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers curled around the" | | 1 | "Their voice came as a" | | 2 | "She tested the dagger at" | | 3 | "It never warmed to human" | | 4 | "She tucked it back, fingers" | | 5 | "It tasted of wildflowers in" | | 6 | "She looked back: the dew-dappled" | | 7 | "She brushed a finger across" | | 8 | "It glowed faintly where her" | | 9 | "She jerked her hand away," | | 10 | "Their shadow melded with the" | | 11 | "She felt naked, tracked by" | | 12 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 13 | "Its warmth spread through her" | | 14 | "They moved deeper, among the" | | 15 | "She recalled Isolde’s words: She" | | 16 | "They paused by a pool," | | 17 | "Its surface held a perfect" | | 18 | "She knelt at the water’s" | | 19 | "She caught her reflection—bright blue" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 17.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora paused at the edge" | | 1 | "Her fingers curled around the" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted beside her, form" | | 3 | "The Shade’s faintly glowing violet" | | 4 | "Their voice came as a" | | 5 | "Aurora drew a measured breath." | | 6 | "She tested the dagger at" | | 7 | "It never warmed to human" | | 8 | "Isolde’s gift, Isolde’s warning." | | 9 | "She tucked it back, fingers" | | 10 | "The instant she crossed the" | | 11 | "It tasted of wildflowers in" | | 12 | "Aurora’s footsteps left no trace" | | 13 | "She looked back: the dew-dappled" | | 14 | "A thrill of unease slid" | | 15 | "Wildflowers of impossible color—turquoise poppies," | | 16 | "She brushed a finger across" | | 17 | "It glowed faintly where her" | | 18 | "Petal edges seemed to undulate," | | 19 | "She jerked her hand away," |
| | ratio | 0.886 | |
| 47.62% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Before her rose a ring" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Warm amber light filtered through a haze that shimmered at the boundary of vision—an imperceptible quiver that spoke of a barrier between worlds." | | 1 | "Her fingers curled around the worn silver chain at her throat, where the Heartstone Pendant pulsed with a faint inner glow, as if a heartbeat from somewhere uns…" | | 2 | "It glowed faintly where her skin brushed it, as though alive to her touch." |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She let, as though peering through the Veil itself" |
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| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "The oracle continued: (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.19 | | leniency | 0.381 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |