Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR8YR897QNTN2V5K6S21E8

Run Details

Duration:
2m 51s
Cost:
$0.019843
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory stood before the oak stones. The winter afternoon had been grey and biting when she'd crossed Richmond Park proper, her breath pluming in sharp clouds, but here at the tree line where the ancient oaks stood in a circle older than the city walls, the air hung still. No frost sparkled on the grass. No wind stirred the bare branches of the trees outside the perimeter. The Heartstone Pendant thumped against her sternum—not with the arrhythmic panic it had shown near Evan's worst rages, but a steady, insistent warmth like blood pulsing through a second vein. Behind her, the city noise dissolved. No traffic rumble from the A307. No distant sirens wailing toward Kingston. Just the whisper that wasn't wind, the kind of silence that pressed against her eardrums. "You're certain this is the boundary?" Nyx asked. Their voice came from everywhere and nowhere, a susurration that made the hairs on Rory's nape lift and her left wrist ache—the small crescent scar there, souvenir from a childhood fall in her father's Cardiff office, suddenly sensitive to the charged air. She glanced back. In the fading daylight, the Shade was barely there—a humanoid silhouette of trembling dusk, violet eyes hovering like embers in the gloom. They'd gone incorporeal to cross the open park, flickering between solid and void, but here at the threshold, they coalesced, becoming fully solid with a sound like wet silk dragging across stone. Six-foot-two of living shadow, and still they hesitated at the gap between the stones. "The pendant thinks so," Rory said. Her fingers brushed the silver chain. The crimson gem at its center had developed a faint inner glow, deep as wine, pulsing in time with her heartbeat. She stepped forward. The standing stones—three of them, carved from oak blackened by centuries but somehow unrotted, their grain swirling with patterns that hurt to follow—flanked the gap. Passing between them felt like walking through cobwebs spun from ice and intention. For a heartbeat, her lungs refused to draw breath. Her vision narrowed to a pinprick of violet—Nyx's eyes, steady behind her—then expanded violently, colors flooding back too bright, too saturated. She stumbled into elsewhere. The light hit her first. Impossibly golden, filtering through a canopy that shouldn't exist in December. Above, ancient oaks intertwined their branches not with bare winter fingers but with thick summer leaves the size of dinner plates, trembling with hues of emerald and jade that seemed to generate their own radiance. Rory blinked, her bright blue eyes watering, struggling to adjust. The air smelled of honey and crushed mint and something darker—iron, perhaps, or blood seasoned with wine. Her flat in London above Silas' pub smelled of old wood and fryer grease from the Golden Empress kitchen; this place smelled like hunger and satisfaction all at once, ancient and immediate. Her phone buzzed in her pocket. She pulled it out—a cracked screen showing 3:47 PM. Then 3:12. Then 4:89. The numbers danced, impossible, before the screen went black despite the 60% charge it had shown minutes ago. "Dead battery," she lied to herself, pocketing it, but her stomach twisted. The lore had mentioned time moved differently here—an hour inside could be minutes or days outside—but feeling it glitch in her hand made her throat tight. "Remarkable," Nyx breathed. They'd followed her through, and now their form flickered madly, solid one moment, translucent the next, their edges bleeding into the shadows cast by the impossible trees. "The Veil runs thin here. Thinner than I've felt since 1643, since the ritual that..." They trailed off, shadowy hands clenching. "It is like being home and being devoured simultaneously." Rory touched the Fae-forged blade at her hip. The moonsilver was cold even through her canvas jacket, a reassuring bite against her palm that grounded her. "You're flickering more than usual. Can you hold together?" "The boundaries here... they are not binary. Not solid and void, but shades of perhaps." Nyx tilted their head, voice dropping to a whisper carried on wind that wasn't there. "Like a room where the floor has become the ceiling, and yet one must still walk." They moved deeper. The ground beneath Rory's Doc Martens—worn from delivery routes through Camden and Kentish Town—wasn't the frozen mud of Richmond Park but soft loam that breathed, rising and falling like a sleeping chest. Wildflowers crushed under her soles with sounds like tiny bells. Bluebells in winter. Foxgloves tall as her shoulder with throats that opened and closed like mouths tasting the air, breathing out pollen that glowed gold in the shafts of light. Rory crouched, ignoring the damp seeping through her jeans, and touched a petal. It felt real enough—velvet and dew—but when she looked up, the angle of the sunlight had shifted violently. They'd been here three minutes, maybe four, but the shadows stretched longer now, as if hours had passed. Or perhaps only seconds. Her internal clock, usually reliable as her barrister father's courtroom rhetoric, spun uselessly. "Time moves differently," she said, standing. Her voice fell flat, absorbed by the strange air, deadened as if spoken into deep water. "It dances," said a voice like silver bells dropped into deep water. "It marches. It sleeps. Here, it does all three at once." Rory spun, hand going to the blade. The dagger slid free with a sound like a sigh, its leaf-shaped edge catching the amber light, faintly luminescent though the sky above showed no moon. Isolde Varga stood between two trees that hadn't been there a moment before. At least, Rory hadn't seen them. The Half-Fae seer wore white linen that might have been spun from the mist coiling around her ankles, and her silver hair fell to her waist, unmoving in the breathless grove air. Her eyes—pale lavender, iris-less and ancient—fixed on Rory with an intensity that made the scar on Rory's wrist throb. Isolde stepped forward, and Rory watched, transfixed, as the moss and wildflowers failed to bend beneath her bare feet. No depression in the earth. No crunch of vegetation. She simply drifted, existing slightly above the world. "You bring the Nightwhisper," Isolde said, those unsettling eyes shifting to Nyx. "And the Heartstone. Good. The way opens farther now than it has in three centuries, and I would not have you lose your path in the deep places, where the grove remembers being the heart of the Court, before Exile." "We're just here to find the—" Rory started. "You are here because the stone beats and the shadow yearns and the girl with the barrister's logic and the delivery driver's resilience needs answers she cannot find in books or courts or Chinese takeaway boxes." Isolde smiled, and it was terrible and beautiful, full of too many teeth or perhaps just the right amount for someone three hundred years old. "I cannot tell you which answers you will find. Truth binds my tongue as iron binds the fae, but I can show you where to look, if you have the courage to walk deeper." She turned, her hair swinging like a curtain of moonlight, and walked into the trees. Immediately, the grove seemed to deepen around them, the space expanding impossibly. The oaks grew thicker, their bark taking on silver sheens that reflected nothing, and the wildflowers changed—orchids with spotted throats that pulsed like hearts, then things with translucent petals through which Rory could see the veins carrying luminescent sap. Rory looked back. The standing stones were gone. Just more forest, endless and singing with a frequency that vibrated in her teeth. "Rory," Nyx whispered. They'd gone thin again, their edges blurring into the shadows between trees, barely maintaining solidity. "Do you feel that? The Veil... it isn't just thin here. It's singing." She did. A resonance in the pendant that had gone from warm to hot against her chest. The air tasted of copper and ripe peaches, of Dymasian wine spilled in offering. They followed Isolde because there was no path back, only forward, and Rory's cool-headed nature reasserted itself—observe, catalog, survive. She noted the way a bird called out, but the sound came from the earth, not the sky. She noted how Nyx's shadow stretched in three directions at once. They emerged into a clearing that defied geometry. Rory stopped breathing. The space opened upward not to sky but to water—an impossible inverted ocean suspended above them, waves frozen in amber light, schools of fish like falling stars drifting through the liquid depths. Below, a pool mirrored the impossible sea, but the water was black as obsidian and showed no reflection of the trees or the figures standing at its edge. Around it, the standing stones rose again, but these were carved not from oak but from something crystalline that sang when the silence touched it. Isolde stood at the pool's edge, her white gown stirring though there was no breeze. "The Grove dreams of Dymas sometimes. Of gluttony and sweetness. Of Prince Belphegor's vineyards where the grapes weep wine and the sky burns amber with excess. It remembers when the Fae and the Hel-born traded in this place, before the wars, before the Exile." "Is that where the portal leads?" Rory asked. She forced her feet to move closer to the pool. The Heartstone was nearly burning now against her chest. "To Gluttony? To Dymas?" Isolde's laugh was like breaking glass wrapped in velvet. "Everywhere and nowhere. The Veil is a skin, Rory Carter. You have scratched it with your blade and warmed it with your stone. But to tear it..." She gestured to the pool. The black water rippled, and in its surface, Rory saw London—not the London she knew, but a London of brass towers and blood-filled gutters, where the Golden Empress burned green and Silas' bar was a hollow tooth in a shattered jaw. She saw herself there, older, eyes empty of the bright blue they now held, the crescent scar on her wrist glowing with sickly light. "Is that true?" Rory's voice cracked. "Will that happen?" "It is possible," Isolde said, and she stepped onto the pool's surface, her feet leaving no ripples, walking on the black water as if it were solid ground. "I cannot lie. But possibility is a forest with many paths. You carry the blade that cuts possibilities. You wear the stone that finds the cracks. Choose which reflection you will make real." Nyx moved to Rory's side, solidifying with visible effort, their violet eyes reflecting the inverted ocean. "Aldric chose wrong once," they said, their whisper carrying the weight of centuries. "I have lived between since 1643. I know the taste of regret, the hunger of the trapped. But standing still also chooses, Rory. Inaction is a door as surely as this pool." Rory looked at the Fae-forged blade in her hand. Cold. Precise. Capable of cutting magical wards and demons and perhaps the veil itself. She thought of Evan, of the delivery scooter parked outside Silas' bar, of her mother's voice on the phone last week asking when she'd visit Cardiff. She thought of the warmth of the pendant, pulsing like a second heart against her ribs. The grove waited, timeless and hungry, wildflowers blooming eternal in the space between worlds, and Rory stepped forward to meet it, her boots sinking slightly into the loam that was not quite earth, the air that was not quite air, ready to cut her path through the impossible.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
84.4398% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1928
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.1328% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1928
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"crystalline"
count1
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"resonance"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"velvet"
count2
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"clenching"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"dances"
count1
highlights
0"crystalline"
1"throb"
2"resonance"
3"flickered"
4"velvet"
5"silk"
6"clenching"
7"weight"
8"dances"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences107
filterMatches
0"observe"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"feel that? The"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean54.26
std35.52
cv0.655
sampleLengths
097
133
2121
333
43
568
64
7110
875
960
1035
1146
12141
1322
1423
1533
16106
1752
188
1995
2088
2131
2279
238
243
2585
2659
2731
2841
2965
309
3161
3261
3365
3448
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences107
matches
0"been spun"
1"were gone"
2"were carved"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs259
matches(empty)
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1541
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount61
adverbRatio0.03958468526930565
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.0136275146009085
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean15.96
std11.99
cv0.751
sampleLengths
06
143
26
312
430
56
66
76
815
98
1042
113
1222
1332
1414
156
166
1721
183
1925
2013
219
2221
234
245
2511
2635
2710
2817
2932
306
319
322
332
3418
3512
3626
373
3827
3921
409
418
4218
439
4430
4516
463
4732
4810
493
56.3025% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.37815126050420167
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners45
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"she lied to herself, pocketing it, but her stomach twisted (lie pocket twist)"
1"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
2"she said, standing (say, stand)"
3"said a voice like silver bells dropped into deep water (say drop)"
4"Isolde said, those unsettling eyes shifting to Nyx (say, shift)"
5"started (start)"
6"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
7"Isolde said, and she stepped onto the pool's surface, her feet leaving no ripples, walking on the black water as if it were solid ground (say, step leave walk be)"
8"they said, their whisper carrying the weight of centuries (say, carry)"
87.5809%