| 77.55% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 24 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said flatly [flatly]" | | 1 | "Isolde said simply [simply]" | | 2 | "Rory said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.49 | | leniency | 0.98 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.122 | |
| 80.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1806 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "utterly" | | 5 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1806 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "fractured" | | 4 | "absolutely" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "uncanny" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "profound" | | 10 | "intensity" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "depths" | | 13 | "racing" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "unreadable" | | 16 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 143 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1825 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 23 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.34% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 70 | | wordCount | 1540 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.75 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | November | 1 | | Rory | 27 | | Nyx | 11 | | Isolde | 13 | | Hel | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Cool-headed | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Veil | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Veil" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Dymas" |
| | globalScore | 0.623 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 89.02% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "something close to wonder" | | 1 | "something like curiosity colored their whisp" |
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| 35.62% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.644 | | wordCount | 1825 | | matches | | 0 | "not the warm throb it gave near Hel portals, but something different" | | 1 | "not the stillness of calm water, but the stillness of glass, of something solid pretending to be" | | 2 | "not evasion, Rory realized, but genuine inability" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 32.02 | | std | 24.96 | | cv | 0.78 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 65 | | 6 | 77 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 79 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 76 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 86 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 49 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 48 | | 33 | 62 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 58 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 58 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 44 | | 41 | 51 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 60 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 74 | | 49 | 43 |
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| 99.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "were pitched" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 89.81% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 242 | | matches | | 0 | "was pulling" | | 1 | "were breathing" | | 2 | "was flickering" | | 3 | "was pulling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 143 | | ratio | 0.112 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt it first in her lungs — a warmth that had no business existing in Richmond Park in late November." | | 1 | "\"Interesting,\" Nyx whispered, and even that single word carried a quality Rory had never heard from them before — something close to wonder." | | 2 | "Bluebells and foxglove and things Rory couldn't name — flowers that shouldn't have been blooming in any season, let alone all at the same time." | | 3 | "The pendant at her throat pulsed once — not the warm throb it gave near Hel portals, but something different." | | 4 | "She stopped walking and turned to face them both, her pale lavender eyes settling on Rory with an expression that might have been pity or might have been amusement — with Isolde, it was impossible to tell." | | 5 | "Not bad — wrong." | | 6 | "The gesture looked uncanny on a being without discernible features — just the silhouette of a person listening, backlit by violet eyes." | | 7 | "Its surface was utterly still — not the stillness of calm water, but the stillness of glass, of something solid pretending to be liquid." | | 8 | "Instead, the water — if it was water — was dark, the kind of dark that had depth to it, like looking down into a well with no bottom." | | 9 | "Rory's hand went instinctively to the Fae blade at her belt — the leaf-shaped dagger Isolde had given her the week before." | | 10 | "Not a reflection — there were no reflections." | | 11 | "The compulsion that bound her tongue — the Fae inability to speak an untruth — had never felt more terrifying than in that quiet admission." | | 12 | "Rory remembered — Nyx existed between realms." | | 13 | "Rory took their arm — or tried to." | | 14 | "The hum of the Veil had grown louder in Rory's ears, or perhaps the Heartstone had simply tuned her hearing to it, because now she could pick out variations — places where the frequency dipped or swelled, a kind of sub-audible topography mapping the barrier between worlds." | | 15 | "Her lips pressed together — not evasion, Rory realized, but genuine inability." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1534 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 56 | | adverbRatio | 0.03650586701434159 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01303780964797914 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 143 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 143 | | mean | 12.76 | | std | 8.74 | | cv | 0.685 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 37 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 58.04% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3776223776223776 | | totalSentences | 143 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 64.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead she turned her attention" | | 1 | "Instead, the water — if" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 84.08% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "She took another step forward" | | 1 | "They reformed on the other" | | 2 | "She left no footprints as" | | 3 | "She hadn't realized she'd been" | | 4 | "Their shadow-form rippled at the" | | 5 | "She stopped walking and turned" | | 6 | "She'd learned in the three" | | 7 | "They paused, and something like" | | 8 | "She led them deeper." | | 9 | "She yanked her hand away." | | 10 | "They had gone fully incorporeal," | | 11 | "Its surface was utterly still" | | 12 | "It reflected nothing." | | 13 | "She could see the shadows" | | 14 | "They solidified beside her, one" | | 15 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 16 | "She stared at the pool" | | 17 | "She had stopped several feet" | | 18 | "Her ageless face had gone" | | 19 | "Its moonsilver hilt was cold," |
| | ratio | 0.34 | |
| 8.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed the moment" | | 1 | "Rory felt it first in" | | 2 | "The cold drizzle that had" | | 3 | "She took another step forward" | | 4 | "Isolde said from somewhere ahead," | | 5 | "They reformed on the other" | | 6 | "Nyx whispered, and even that" | | 7 | "Isolde corrected, not turning around" | | 8 | "She left no footprints as" | | 9 | "Bluebells and foxglove and things" | | 10 | "The grove opened before them" | | 11 | "Light filtered through the leaves" | | 12 | "Rory saw one blossom the" | | 13 | "Rory pulled her hand back." | | 14 | "She hadn't realized she'd been" | | 15 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 16 | "A single beat, like a" | | 17 | "The crimson stone caught the" | | 18 | "Nyx observed, drifting closer" | | 19 | "Their shadow-form rippled at the" |
| | ratio | 0.903 | |
| 48.54% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 9.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt it first in her lungs — a warmth that had no business existing in Richmond Park in late November." | | 1 | "She left no footprints as she walked, and Rory watched the wildflowers behind her spring back upright as though the seer had never passed through them at all." | | 2 | "Bluebells and foxglove and things Rory couldn't name — flowers that shouldn't have been blooming in any season, let alone all at the same time." | | 3 | "Rory saw one blossom the color of a bruise slowly turning to track their movement, its petals unfurling like fingers." | | 4 | "Their shadow-form rippled at the edges, as if the grove's ambient energy was pulling at them." | | 5 | "She stopped walking and turned to face them both, her pale lavender eyes settling on Rory with an expression that might have been pity or might have been amusem…" | | 6 | "The rustle of wind through leaves came in rhythmic waves, almost tidal, as though the grove were breathing." | | 7 | "Her ageless face had gone very still, her lavender eyes fixed on the dark water with an intensity that bordered on fear." | | 8 | "The compulsion that bound her tongue — the Fae inability to speak an untruth — had never felt more terrifying than in that quiet admission." | | 9 | "Their form was flickering badly now, shadow bleeding at the edges, as though the thin place was pulling at the fabric of what they were." | | 10 | "Someone who wanted her standing here with a Fae blade on her hip and a Heartstone from Dymas against her skin twenty-six days before the winter solstice." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 24 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her silver hair catching light that had no visible source" | | 1 | "Isolde corrected, not turning around" | | 2 | "they admitted, and the honesty startled her more than anything in the grove had" |
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| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 21 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 2 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 3 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Isolde added (add)" | | 5 | "they admitted (admit)" | | 6 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |