| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.538 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 74.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1383 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "warmly" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "deliberately" | | 5 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.77% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1383 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "crystal" | | 6 | "normalcy" | | 7 | "depths" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "k with wonder" | | 1 | "was nervous" |
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| 63.49% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 63 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1362 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 1148 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.66 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 13 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 19 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | October | 1 | | Aldric | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Pre-Law | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Dymas | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Isolde | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Seer" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae-forged" | | 4 | "Dymas" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.672 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift when she tried to focus on them directly" | | 1 | "something like reverence" | | 2 | "melody that seemed to know her name" | | 3 | "seemed very far away now, a memory from another life—the life where she was just Rory Carter, delivery girl, Pre-Law dropout, refugee from a bad relationship and a city that held too many painful memories" |
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| 53.16% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.468 | | wordCount | 1362 | | matches | | 0 | "Not wrong in a threatening way, but wrong in the way" | | 1 | "not music, exactly, but close enough" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 35.84 | | std | 28.86 | | cv | 0.805 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 87 | | 11 | 67 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 100 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 64 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 76 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 57 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 106 | | 32 | 70 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 45 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 199 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.179 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment the path through Richmond Park had been ordinary—autumn leaves, distant dog walkers, a jogger's fluorescent jacket disappearing around a bend—and then the oaks simply weren't oaks anymore." | | 1 | "The stones—seven of them, arranged in an irregular circle—rose from the earth like broken teeth." | | 2 | "She still wasn't sure why the seer had given it to her—the half-Fae had spoken only in riddles, as always, something about threads and cutting and choices that bleed—but the weight of it was reassuring now." | | 3 | "That was the only way her mind could process it—a sensation of being turned inside out and right-side up simultaneously, of falling in every direction at once while standing perfectly still." | | 4 | "The clearing was perhaps fifty feet across, carpeted in wildflowers that shouldn't have been blooming—couldn't have been blooming, not in late October—yet there they were: foxglove and bluebells, wild roses and flowers she had no names for, their petals colors that existed somewhere between violet and silver and a shade of blue that made her eyes water to look at directly." | | 5 | "Not wrong in a threatening way, but wrong in the way that dreams are wrong—too saturated, too deep, the blue of it stretching upward into a purple that graduated into something her mind kept sliding off of, refusing to categorize." | | 6 | "It wasn't difficult—every step revealed something new, some detail that pulled at her attention and refused to let go." | | 7 | "Trees ringed the grove's edges, but they weren't the oaks she'd passed through—these were pale-barked and twisted, their branches heavy with fruit that glowed faintly from within, casting soft illumination like paper lanterns." | | 8 | "The wildflowers gave way to mushrooms—massive things, some taller than Rory, their caps patterns of bioluminescent spirals that pulsed in rhythms she could almost understand, almost recognize as language." | | 9 | "Somewhere in the distance, something sang—not music, exactly, but close enough that her heart ached to hear it, a melody that seemed to know her name." | | 10 | "The childhood accident that had left it seemed very far away now, a memory from another life—the life where she was just Rory Carter, delivery girl, Pre-Law dropout, refugee from a bad relationship and a city that held too many painful memories." | | 11 | "Rory had expected something grand—a palace of crystal, perhaps, or a tower of living wood." | | 12 | "Her pale lavender eyes held depths that shouldn't have fit in a human-shaped face—depths that contained futures and pasts and possibilities branching in infinite directions." | | 13 | "She was small—shorter than Rory, delicate-boned, ageless in the way of something that had simply stopped keeping track—and she left no footprints as she stepped forward, her bare feet passing over the chiming grass without a single note." | | 14 | "Nyx's violet eyes flickered once—encouragement or warning, she couldn't tell." |
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| 96.51% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1182 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.043993231810490696 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015228426395939087 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 16.21 | | std | 11.7 | | cv | 0.722 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 61 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 42 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 56.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.40476190476190477 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the distance, something" | | 1 | "Then she stepped across the" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "They were something older, their" | | 1 | "They shouldn't have been possible." | | 2 | "She still wasn't sure why" | | 3 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 4 | "They didn't finish the sentence" | | 5 | "They didn't need to." | | 6 | "It wasn't difficult—every step revealed" | | 7 | "She reached toward one of" | | 8 | "They gestured at their shadowy" | | 9 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" | | 10 | "Her silver hair fell to" | | 11 | "She was small—shorter than Rory," | | 12 | "She smiled, and her teeth" | | 13 | "She turned, moving back into" |
| | ratio | 0.215 | |
| 52.31% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones appeared between" | | 1 | "Rory stopped so suddenly that" | | 2 | "They were something older, their" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered, their voice carrying" | | 4 | "The stones—seven of them, arranged" | | 5 | "They shouldn't have been possible." | | 6 | "Rory had walked through Richmond" | | 7 | "The Heartstone pendant against her" | | 8 | "Rory's hand drifted unconsciously to" | | 9 | "She still wasn't sure why" | | 10 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 11 | "The world inverted." | | 12 | "That was the only way" | | 13 | "The autumn chill of the" | | 14 | "The grove spread before her" | | 15 | "The clearing was perhaps fifty" | | 16 | "The flowers swayed in a" | | 17 | "Nyx breathed, and even their" | | 18 | "Rory took a step forward," | | 19 | "They didn't finish the sentence" |
| | ratio | 0.815 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "Before they were Aldric, Rory" | | 1 | "Before they became trapped between." |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "They were something older, their bark silver-grey and carved with spiraling symbols that seemed to shift when she tried to focus on them directly." | | 1 | "She still wasn't sure why the seer had given it to her—the half-Fae had spoken only in riddles, as always, something about threads and cutting and choices that …" | | 2 | "The autumn chill of the park vanished, replaced by air that tasted of honey and green growing things and something else, something that fizzed against her tongu…" | | 3 | "The clearing was perhaps fifty feet across, carpeted in wildflowers that shouldn't have been blooming—couldn't have been blooming, not in late October—yet there…" | | 4 | "Not wrong in a threatening way, but wrong in the way that dreams are wrong—too saturated, too deep, the blue of it stretching upward into a purple that graduate…" | | 5 | "It wasn't difficult—every step revealed something new, some detail that pulled at her attention and refused to let go." | | 6 | "A stream wound through the far edge of the clearing, its water running uphill in defiance of physics, silver fish darting through it that might have been fish o…" | | 7 | "Trees ringed the grove's edges, but they weren't the oaks she'd passed through—these were pale-barked and twisted, their branches heavy with fruit that glowed f…" | | 8 | "The childhood accident that had left it seemed very far away now, a memory from another life—the life where she was just Rory Carter, delivery girl, Pre-Law dro…" | | 9 | "Small, round-roofed, covered in flowering vines that bloomed in colors she still couldn't name." | | 10 | "Her pale lavender eyes held depths that shouldn't have fit in a human-shaped face—depths that contained futures and pasts and possibilities branching in infinit…" | | 11 | "Her silver hair fell to her waist, unbound, catching that sourceless light and reflecting it in ways that made it seem alive, moving with its own current." | | 12 | "She was small—shorter than Rory, delicate-boned, ageless in the way of something that had simply stopped keeping track—and she left no footprints as she stepped…" |
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| 17.86% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "They gestured, the movement conveying what words couldn't" | | 1 | "Isolde said, and her voice was music and honey and something sharp beneath, like a knife wrapped in silk" | | 2 | "She smiled, and her teeth were just slightly too white, too perfect" |
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| 34.62% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Nyx warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.231 | |