Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMR9P4G5CSK3VHZRGNZN83T

Run Details

Duration:
30.4s
Cost:
$0.006107
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air inside the grove did not smell like Richmond Park. Outside the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary, the London winter bit with a damp, grey chill, carrying the scent of wet pavement and exhaust. Here, the air was thick and sweet, heavy with the perfume of blooming nightshade and something sharper, like ozone before a storm. Aurora Carter paused just across the threshold, her hand instinctively going to the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. It was a nervous tic, a phantom itch from a childhood fall that had nothing to do with the magic humming against her skin, but the gesture grounded her. "Bloody hell," she whispered, the words snatched away by a breeze that felt too warm for December. Beside her, Nyx shifted. The Shade's form was less distinct here, the living shadow blurring at the edges as if the ambient light of the realm was trying to dissolve them. Their faintly glowing violet eyes scanned the canopy above, where leaves of impossible emerald and violet interlocked to block out the London sky. In its place hung a soft, pearlescent haze that provided illumination without a visible source. "The barrier is thin here," Nyx said, their voice sounding like dry leaves skittering over stone, a whisper carried on a wind that didn't touch Aurora's face. "The Veil stretches like old silk. One tug, and it snaps." Aurora followed Nyx's gaze, though she saw nothing but the shimmering distortion of the air. She didn't have the supernatural sight the Wardens spoke of, but she could feel the pressure of it, a static charge raising the fine hairs on her arms. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, a habit from her shifts at the Golden Empress, even though the insulated box felt absurdly mundane against the backdrop of eternal spring. Inside the bag, beneath stacks of takeout containers, the Heartstone Pendant pulsed. It wasn't a rhythmic beat, but a irregular throb of warmth against her hip, the deep crimson gem reacting to the proximity of the rift. "Isolde said to stick to the path," Aurora said, her voice steadier than she felt. "Or whatever passes for a path here." "There are no paths," came a third voice, melodic and detaching from the space ahead of them. "Only choices you have already made." Isolde Varga stepped out from behind a curtain of weeping willows that dripped with silver blossoms. The Half-Fae seer moved with a fluidity that defied physics; her silver hair, reaching all the way to her waist, floated as if she were underwater, yet her feet made no impression on the lush moss beneath them. Where Aurora's boots sank slightly into the earth, leaving clear treads, Isolde left the ground undisturbed, ghosting over the terrain. Her pale lavender eyes fixed on Aurora, unblinking. "You're late," Isolde said, though her tone held no reproach, only a strange, timeless curiosity. "Or perhaps you are early. Time is a slippery fish in this pocket. An hour for you might be a minute for the world you left, or a decade. Did you lock your flat door, Aurora?" Aurora frowned, the cool-headed logic she prided herself on scrambling to catch up. "Yes. Double deadbolt. Why?" "Just wondering if you will return to find it has crumbled to dust while you blinked," Isolde replied, turning on her heel. "Come. The grove does not tolerate loiterers, and the shadows here have teeth if provoked." Nyx drifted closer to Aurora, their solid form coalescing into a tall, humanoid silhouette of darkness that blocked the strange, directionless light. "She speaks truth, though she wraps it in riddles. The Fae compulsion binds her tongue; she cannot lie. But she can certainly lead us in circles." "Not circles," Isolde called back without looking. "Spirals. There is a difference." They followed the seer deeper into the clearing. The flora was aggressive in its beauty. Wildflowers bloomed in clusters of burning orange and electric blue, unfolding and closing in rapid cycles as they watched. Vines thicker than Aurora's wrist coiled around tree trunks that seemed to breathe, their bark expanding and contracting slowly. The silence of the place was the most unnerving part. There were no birds, no insects buzzing, only the rush of a nearby stream that sounded suspiciously like human whispered conversations. Aurora reached out to touch a flower with petals that looked like spun glass. As her finger neared, the plant recoiled, shrinking into a tight, defensive bud. "Don't," Nyx warned, the violet glow of their eyes intensifying. "Everything here is alive. Even the stone." Aurora pulled her hand back, wiping her palm on her jeans. "Right. Noted. No touching the alien gardening." The deeper they ventured, the more the sense of unease prickled at the base of Aurora's neck. It wasn't fear, exactly. It was the feeling of being watched by the landscape itself. The trees seemed to lean in, their branches forming archways that felt less like invitations and more like jaws. The light shifted, growing warmer, amber-hued, reminding her uncomfortably of the descriptions of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony. But this was Fae territory, a neutral ground, or so she had been told. The Heartstone grew hotter, the silver chain burning slightly against her collarbone. "Isolde," Aurora said, stopping as the ground beneath them began to slope downward into a dip filled with a low-lying mist. "Where are we going? You said you had information about the rift points. About the Winter Solstice weakening the Veil." Isolde stopped at the edge of the mist. She turned, her ethereal face unreadable. "The Veil weakens because the world forgets to hold it together. People stop believing in the boundary, so the boundary fades. We go to the place where the forgetting is loudest." "And that's down there?" Aurora gestured to the fog. "That is where the echo is strongest," Isolde corrected. "Step carefully. The mist shows you what you hunger for. For some, it is food. For others, power. For you, Aurora Carter, daughter of Brendan and Jennifer... it might be safety." Aurora stiffened. The mention of her parents, of the life she had fled in Cardiff, landed with the weight of a physical blow. She thought of Evan, the abusive ex she had run from, and the fragile sanctuary she had built above Silas' bar in London. The mist seemed to swirl, taking on shapes. For a heartbeat, she saw the warm glow of her flat's kitchen, the smell of garlic and ginger from the restaurant downstairs, the face of Eva smiling at her. It was so vivid she took a step forward. "Rory," Nyx's voice cut through the vision, sharp and cold. "It is not real. Look at the feet." Aurora blinked, shaking her head. She looked down at the vision of her flat. The floorboards were there, but beneath them, she saw nothing but a void of swirling stars. The image flickered, distorting. The safety she craved was a trap, a lure designed by the realm to keep her static. "Right," she breathed, forcing her mind to engage, to analyze the inconsistency. "No footprints. Just like you, Isolde." "Precisely," the seer said, her expression softening just a fraction. "The mind is a hungry thing. It eats illusions and starves for truth. That is why you are here. You see the cracks in the story." Isolde raised a hand, her fingers long and slender, tipped with nails that looked like polished moonstone. She swept her arm through the mist. The fog parted instantly, revealing a circle of standing stones much smaller than the ones at the entrance, arranged around a pool of water that reflected a sky full of unfamiliar constellations. In the center of the pool floated a single, black leaf, untouched by the ripples. "The rift is not a door," Isolde said, her voice dropping to a hush that compelled silence. "It is a wound. And something is trying to pick at the stitches." Aurora moved toward the pool, the Heartstone now throbbing rapidly, a steady drumbeat against her ribs. She knelt by the water's edge. The reflection showed her own face—bright blue eyes wide, straight black hair framing a expression of grim determination—but behind her reflection, standing in the water that should have been shallow, was a towering figure clad in armor made of bone and ash. It wasn't there when she looked up, only in the mirror of the pool. "Nyx," she said quietly, not taking her eyes off the water. "Do you see that?" The Shade drifted over, their form solidifying until they cast a shadow on the grass. They looked into the pool, their violet eyes narrowing. "I see it. A soldier of Hel. Perhaps from Dymas, though the armor suggests the lower circles." "Prince Belphegor's domain," Aurora murmured, recalling the lore she'd scraped together from late-night research and whispered warnings. "Gluttony. They're hungry for more than just feasts." "They are hungry for the breach," Isolde said, stepping up beside them. The wildflowers around the pool seemed to wilt instantly in the seer's presence, as if recognizing a greater power. "The Solstice approaches. The Veil will tear. If that soldier steps through, he will not come alone." Aurora stood up, the cold air of the illusion fading, replaced by the very real, very dangerous chill of the moment. She reached into her bag and pulled out the Fae-Forged Blade Isolde had gifted her days ago. The moonsilver dagger was slender and leaf-shaped, radiating a cold that seeped into her palm, comforting in its lethality. In the dim light of the grove, the blade began to glow with a faint, luminescent hue. "Then we make sure the tear doesn't happen," Aurora said, her voice losing its tremor, replaced by the steel of the girl who had left everything behind to survive. She gripped the hilt, feeling the magic hum in resonance with the Heartstone. "Show me where the stitch is weakest, Isolde. I'm ready to do some sewing." Isolde smiled, a rare, genuine expression that made her look suddenly young, despite her three hundred years. "At last," the seer whispered. "The story begins."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
63.1579% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she whispered, the words snatched away by a breeze that felt too warm for December [away too]"
1"Isolde said, though her tone held no reproach, only a strange, timeless curiosity [only]"
2"the seer said, her expression softening just a fraction [just]"
3"she said quietly, not taking her eyes off the water [quietly]"
52.9412% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1700
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"precisely"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
4"suddenly"
5"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.0588% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1700
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"resonance"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"sanctuary"
2"throb"
3"resonance"
4"flickered"
5"silk"
6"unreadable"
7"weight"
8"echo"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean45.68
std28.41
cv0.622
sampleLengths
0109
117
269
338
4111
522
623
782
851
917
1037
1148
1212
1384
1427
1517
1618
1795
1841
1945
209
2140
2292
2318
2451
2518
2636
2771
2830
2978
3015
3141
3225
3348
3474
3556
3625
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"being watched"
1"been told"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs225
matches
0"was trying"
88.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1298
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"wide, straight black hair"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.025423728813559324
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.013097072419106317
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean15.5
std8.31
cv0.536
sampleLengths
011
127
222
320
429
517
64
727
823
915
1027
1111
1215
1328
1431
1512
1625
1715
187
1917
206
2116
2238
2320
248
2515
2636
2713
284
2922
3015
3122
3226
337
345
358
367
3719
3819
3910
4021
4114
4213
4310
447
4511
467
4717
484
4911
63.9144% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.42201834862385323
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners46
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount19
fancyTags
0"she whispered, the words snatched away by a breeze that felt too warm for December (whisper, snatch away feel too)"
1"Nyx said, their voice sounding like dry leaves skittering over stone, a whisper carried on a wind that didn't touch Aurora's face (say, sound like skitter carry on does not touch)"
2"Aurora said, her voice steadier than she felt (say, feel)"
3"came a third voice, melodic and detaching from the space ahead of them (come detach)"
4"Isolde said, though her tone held no reproach, only a strange, timeless curiosity (say, hold)"
5"Isolde replied, turning on her heel (reply, turn on)"
6"Isolde called back without looking (call back)"
7"Nyx warned, the violet glow of their eyes intensifying (warn, intensify)"
8"Aurora said, stopping as the ground beneath them began to slope downward into a dip filled with a low-lying mist (say, stop begin slope fill)"
9"Isolde corrected (correct)"
10"Nyx's voice cut through the vision, sharp and cold (nyx voice cut through the vision sharp and cold)"
11"she breathed, forcing her mind to engage, to analyze the inconsistency (breathe, force engage, analyze)"
12"the seer said, her expression softening just a fraction (say, soften just)"
13"Isolde said, her voice dropping to a hush that compelled silence (say, drop compel)"
14"she said quietly, not taking her eyes off the water (say quietly, does not take eye)"
15"Aurora murmured, recalling the lore she'd scraped together from late-night research and whispered warnings (murmur, recall scrape whisper)"
16"Isolde said, stepping up beside them (say, step up)"
17"Aurora said, her voice losing its tremor, replaced by the steel of the girl who had left everything behind to survive (say, lose replace leave survive)"
18"the seer whispered (whisper)"
83.2395%