Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1298
adjectiveStacks
2
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
1
"wide, straight black hair"
adverbCount
33
adverbRatio
0.025423728813559324
lyAdverbCount
17
lyAdverbRatio
0.013097072419106317
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
109
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
109
mean
15.5
std
8.31
cv
0.536
sampleLengths
0
11
1
27
2
22
3
20
4
29
5
17
6
4
7
27
8
23
9
15
10
27
11
11
12
15
13
28
14
31
15
12
16
25
17
15
18
7
19
17
20
6
21
16
22
38
23
20
24
8
25
15
26
36
27
13
28
4
29
22
30
15
31
22
32
26
33
7
34
5
35
8
36
7
37
19
38
19
39
10
40
21
41
14
42
13
43
10
44
7
45
11
46
7
47
17
48
4
49
11
63.9144%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
7
diversityRatio
0.42201834862385323
totalSentences
109
uniqueOpeners
46
0.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
19
fancyCount
19
fancyTags
0
"she whispered, the words snatched away by a breeze that felt too warm for December (whisper, snatch away feel too)"
1
"Nyx said, their voice sounding like dry leaves skittering over stone, a whisper carried on a wind that didn't touch Aurora's face (say, sound like skitter carry on does not touch)"
2
"Aurora said, her voice steadier than she felt (say, feel)"
3
"came a third voice, melodic and detaching from the space ahead of them (come detach)"
4
"Isolde said, though her tone held no reproach, only a strange, timeless curiosity (say, hold)"
5
"Isolde replied, turning on her heel (reply, turn on)"
6
"Isolde called back without looking (call back)"
7
"Nyx warned, the violet glow of their eyes intensifying (warn, intensify)"
8
"Aurora said, stopping as the ground beneath them began to slope downward into a dip filled with a low-lying mist (say, stop begin slope fill)"
9
"Isolde corrected (correct)"
10
"Nyx's voice cut through the vision, sharp and cold (nyx voice cut through the vision sharp and cold)"
11
"she breathed, forcing her mind to engage, to analyze the inconsistency (breathe, force engage, analyze)"
12
"the seer said, her expression softening just a fraction (say, soften just)"
13
"Isolde said, her voice dropping to a hush that compelled silence (say, drop compel)"
14
"she said quietly, not taking her eyes off the water (say quietly, does not take eye)"
15
"Aurora murmured, recalling the lore she'd scraped together from late-night research and whispered warnings (murmur, recall scrape whisper)"
16
"Isolde said, stepping up beside them (say, step up)"
17
"Aurora said, her voice losing its tremor, replaced by the steel of the girl who had left everything behind to survive (say, lose replace leave survive)"