Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMRB1RAWCH0K8Y1MRMY7RG5

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49.1s
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$0.008268
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The mist clung to the low-hanging branches of the oaks in Richmond Park, turning the twilight world into a watercolor painting of grey and green. Aurora Carter pulled her jacket tighter around herself, the damp English chill seeping through the fabric. At her hip, the weight of the Fae-forged blade was a constant, cold reminder of why she was here. Nyx drifted beside her, their incorporeal form barely disturbing the heavy air. The Shade looked less like a person and more like a tear in the fabric of the evening, a silhouette of living shadow with faint violet eyes that seemed to hover independently of their face. "It is close," Nyx whispered, their voice sounding like dry leaves skittering over pavement. Ahead of them, Isolde Varga moved with a silence that made Rory’s skin prickle. The Half-Fae didn’t walk so much as glide, her silver hair trailing behind her like a bridal veil, despite the lack of wind. Rory glanced down at the ground as they stepped off the beaten path. Where her own boots sank into the mud and Nyx’s shadow-feet left no impression, Isolde left absolutely nothing. No footprints, no displaced pebbles. It was as if the earth itself refused to acknowledge her weight. "Keep your mind sharp, child of the law," Isolde murmured, her pale lavender eyes fixed on a copse of trees that looked no different from the thousand others surrounding them. "The Grove does not suffer the closed mind." Rory resisted the urge to snap back that she wasn't a lawyer anymore. Instead, she touched the Heartstone pendant hanging at her throat. The deep crimson gemstone, usually dormant, pulsed with a faint, rhythmic warmth. It wasn't the burning heat she’d been told to expect near a Hel portal, but a gentle, heartbeat-like thrumming. "The Veil is thin here," Rory noted, watching the air between the ancient oks shimmer. It looked like heat rising off asphalt, a faint distortion that twisted the lines of the tree trunks behind it. "Non-existent, where we go," Isolde corrected softly. They reached the standing stones. They were jagged, weathered things, half-buried in the undergrowth, arranged in a rough circle that felt too intentional to be natural. Rory paused at the perimeter. Here, the sounds of the city—the distant hum of traffic, the bark of a dog—abruptly cut out. The silence wasn't empty; it was heavy, pressurized, like the air inside a submarine. "Step through," Isolde said, standing in the center of the circle. She turned, her expression unreadable. "But do not wander. The flowers here are jealous of their color." Rory took a breath and exchanged a glance with Nyx. The Shade solidified slightly, taking on a more human shape to offer a reassuring nod. "Behind you," Nyx said. Rory stepped over the boundary line marked by a fallen stone. The sensation hit her physically, a sudden drop in pressure that popped her ears. The grey mist of the park vanished instantly, replaced by a world that felt oversaturated, too bright and too sharp. She stumbled, catching herself on the trunk of a tree that felt smoother than polished glass. She looked up and froze. They were no longer in a dreary London park. The sky above them was a tapestry of indigo and violet, devoid of clouds but filled with the slow, lazy drift of moons—or perhaps just large, glowing spores—drifting in a non-existent breeze. The light here had no source; it seemed to emanate from the very air, turning the shadows long and soft. "The Grove," Nyx breathed, sounding awed. "I had forgotten the taste of this air." Rory straightened, her eyes widening. The flora was alien, chaotic beauty run wild. Ferns unfurled in spirals of iridescent blue, their leaves translucent like insect wings. Flowers the size of dinner plates bloomed in clusters along the path, their petals shifting colors from deep orange to violent pink as she watched them. There was no grass underfoot, only a thick, spongy moss that released a cloud of glittering spores with every step she took. "It’s incredible," Rory whispered. She knelt, brushing her fingers over a low-growing bush. The leaves didn't feel like plant matter; they felt like velvet, warm to the touch. "Is this all on Earth? Just... tucked away?" "And elsewhere," Isolde said, appearing at Rory's elbow. "The Grove exists between. A breath held in time." Rory stood and walked deeper into the clearing. The air smelled impossibly sweet, a heady mixture of honeysuckle, ozone, and something metallic, like copper. It made her head spin slightly. She gripped the hilt of the Fae-forged blade at her hip. The metal was freezing, a stark contrast to the warm, humid air of the Grove. The cold grounded her, anchoring her senses against the sensory overload. As they moved deeper, the geometry of the place felt wrong. Rory looked toward the horizon—or what should have been the horizon—but the landscape simply curled upward, trees growing at angles that defied gravity. Pathways spiraled into the sky, and waterfalls flowed upward, defying physics with a graceful, terrifying indifference. "Do not stare at the sky too long," Isolde warned, her voice echoing slightly as if she were speaking from the bottom of a well. "The eyes are the window to the soul, and here, the curtains are always drawn." Nyx drifted toward a massive, twisting tree that sat in the center of the grove. Its bark was black as ink, its roots snaking through the ground like sleeping dragons. Nyx reached out, their hand shifting from solid shadow to mist as they brushed against the wood. "Old," Nyx said. "Older than the stone. Older than the Veil." Rory joined them, looking up into the canopy. The branches didn't have leaves; instead, they were draped in long, shimmering ribbons of light that chimed softly when the breeze moved. It was a sound like distant wind chimes, a melody that made her chest ache with a sudden, inexplicable nostalgia for a place she had never been. "This is where you live?" Rory asked Isolde. "When I am not walking your grey streets," Isolde replied. She ran a hand through a patch of wildflowers that bloomed instantly at her touch, their petals opening to reveal eyes of polished obsidian before closing again. "The Fae Courts banished me, but they could not banish me from the spaces between." A sudden movement in the corner of Rory’s eye made her spin around, hand tightening on the blade. "Did you see that?" "The shadows move," Nyx said calmly, though their form had tensed, becoming more solid, more warrior-like. "They are always watching here. This is a place of wild magic, Aurora. It does not love the human shape." Rory squinted. The shadows under the iridescent ferns were lengthening, stretching toward her boots like spilt ink. She took a step back, the Heartstone pendant flaring with a sudden spike of heat against her skin. "They sense the blade," Isolde said, not sounding concerned. "It is a court weapon. A piece of order in a garden of chaos." Rory looked down at the leaf-shaped dagger. The moonsilver metal was glowing faintly, reacting to the ambient magic. "Right. Order. I'll try to keep that in mind." She stepped carefully over a root that seemed to be breathing, expanding and contracting with a slow, rhythmic motion. The unease was settling in her stomach now, twisting with the wonder. This place was beautiful, yes, but it was also predatory. It felt like walking into the open mouth of a beast that hadn't decided whether to swallow or speak. "Is the time difference happening now?" Rory asked. She checked her watch, but the second hand was spinning wildly, making a complete rotation every few seconds before stopping entirely, then spinning backward. "Time is a suggestion here," Isolde said cryptically. She gestured toward a crystal-clear pool that reflected a sky full of stars, despite the twilight illumination of the grove. "Drink, if you wish to see the truth. But know that the truth often tastes like ash." Rory looked at the water. It was perfectly still, yet the reflection showed not her face, but a version of herself surrounded by fire, holding the blade high. She flinched and looked away. "I think I'll stick to the tap water back at the flat," Rory said dryly, though her heart was hammering against her ribs. Nyx drifted closer to her, their shadowy form providing a strange comfort amidst the bioluminescent chaos. "This place is not for you, Aurora Carter. It is too loud." "It's beautiful," Rory admitted, forcing herself to look at a flower that was singing a high, piercing note. "But it feels like I’m intruding." "You are," Isolde said simply. She turned and began to walk back toward the standing stones, her silver hair leaving trails of light in the air behind her. "Come. The air grows heavy. The wild things are waking." As if on cue, the chime in the trees shifted key. The melody deepened, slowing down. The giant flowers with the eyes turned their gaze toward Rory, unblinking. The moss beneath her feet felt less like a cushion and more like a muscle, tensing up. Rory didn't need to be told twice. She unhooked the blade, just an inch, letting the cold silver air kiss her wrist where the small crescent scar lay. The presence of the weapon seemed to push back the encroaching flora, the ferns retracting slightly from the light of the blade. "Let's go," Rory said, backing away slowly. She followed Nyx and Isolde toward the distortion of the Veil. As she crossed the threshold of the standing stones, the sensory overload of the Grove—the smells, the colors, the singing air—snapped out of existence instantly. The damp grey mist of Richmond Park rushed back in, cold and smelling of exhaust fumes and wet dogs. The silence of the Grove was replaced by the distant roar of the A205. Rory blinked, her eyes struggling to adjust to the mundane dimness. She looked down. Her boots were muddy. On her jacket, a single petal from the Grove clung to the wool—iridescent blue, warm to the touch, and slowly dissolving into nothing but sparkling dust. "Safe," Nyx whispered beside her, their form fading back into the shadows of the park trees. Rory exhaled, a long, shaky breath that fogged in the cold air. She touched the Heartstone pendant; it was cool again. But the cold of the Fae blade at her hip lingered, and she knew that for the first time, she understood exactly what lay on the other side of the wall. It wasn't just magic. It was life, wild and uncaring, and she had just walked through its living room.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
27.2727% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount7
adverbTags
0"Isolde corrected softly [softly]"
1"Isolde warned, her voice echoing slightly as if she were speaking from the bottom of a well [slightly]"
2"Nyx said calmly, though their form had tensed, becoming more solid, more warrior-like [calmly, more more]"
3"Isolde said cryptically [cryptically]"
4"Rory said dryly, though her heart was hammering against her ribs [dryly]"
5"Isolde said simply [simply]"
6"Rory said, backing away slowly [slowly]"
39.1256% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1807
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count4
3
adverb"slowly"
count2
4
adverb"softly"
count2
5
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"perfectly"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
4"softly"
5"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.7277% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1807
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"tapestry"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"amidst"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"tapestry"
1"velvet"
2"unreadable"
3"stark"
4"weight"
5"amidst"
6"echoing"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences114
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences114
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences130
matches
0"know that the"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean36.47
std19.23
cv0.527
sampleLengths
060
147
214
385
438
554
635
77
862
928
1025
114
1211
1334
1421
1561
1614
1774
1836
1917
2067
2150
2240
2347
2411
2557
268
2752
2822
2936
3035
3123
3227
3360
3432
3545
3633
3723
3828
3924
4038
4145
4250
437
4436
4533
4644
4716
4871
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences114
matches
0"been told"
1"were draped"
2"was replaced"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs260
matches
0"was freezing"
1"were speaking"
2"were lengthening"
3"was glowing"
4"was settling"
5"was spinning"
6"was hammering"
7"was singing"
99.2510% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1542
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount63
adverbRatio0.04085603112840467
lyAdverbCount30
lyAdverbRatio0.019455252918287938
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean13.75
std6.99
cv0.509
sampleLengths
025
116
219
312
435
514
614
723
813
918
105
1112
1230
138
1413
1510
1612
1719
1815
1920
207
215
2221
235
2417
2514
2611
275
2812
2910
3015
314
3211
3314
3420
3516
365
379
3832
3920
406
418
425
438
4413
4526
4622
474
489
4915
47.4359% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.33076923076923076
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners43
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount17
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered, their voice sounding like dry leaves skittering over pavement (whisper, sound like skitter)"
1"Isolde murmured, her pale lavender eyes fixed on a copse of trees that looked no different from the thousand others surrounding them (murmur, eyes fixed look surround)"
2"Rory noted, watching the air between the ancient oks shimmer (note, watch)"
3"Isolde corrected softly (correct softly)"
4"Isolde said, standing in the center of the circle (say, stand)"
5"Nyx breathed, sounding awed (breathe, sounding awed)"
6"Rory whispered (whisper)"
7"Isolde said, appearing at Rory's elbow (say, appear)"
8"Isolde warned, her voice echoing slightly as if she were speaking from the bottom of a well (warn, echo slightly speak)"
9"Nyx said calmly, though their form had tensed, becoming more solid, more warrior-like (say calmly, tense, become more warrior-like)"
10"Isolde said, not sounding concerned (say, does not sounding concerned)"
11"Isolde said cryptically (say cryptically)"
12"Rory said dryly, though her heart was hammering against her ribs (say dryly, hammer)"
13"Rory admitted, forcing herself to look at a flower that was singing a high, piercing note (admit, force look sing)"
14"Isolde said simply (say simply)"
15"Rory said, backing away slowly (say, back away slowly)"
16"Nyx whispered beside her, their form fading back into the shadows of the park trees (whisper back)"
80.5184%