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Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMRB33SDEZ9CR0VE8S8953A
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Model:
Gemini 3 Flash (Preview)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Thriller: chase through city streets
Duration:
20.7s
Cost:
$0.007596
Provider:
Google AI Studio
Model input
System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The rain in London didn’t fall so much as it dissolved the world into a grey, shivering blur. Detective Harlow Quinn stood in the mouth of an alleyway off Camden High Street, her coat collar turned up against the damp, her lungs burning with the metallic tang of the city’s exhaust. She checked the worn leather
watch
on her left wrist. Midnight had crawled past ten minutes ago. Fifty yards ahead, a shadow detached itself from the brickwork. It was a man, hunched and frantic, his movements lackadaisical in a way that spoke of exhaustion rather than ease. Quinn
knew that gait
. It was the frantic stumble of a man who had more to lose than just his freedom. "Police! Stay where you are!" Quinn’s voice cracked like a gunshot through the rhythmic drumming of the downpour. The figure didn’t hesitate. He bolted, his boots kicking up sprays of oily puddle water. Quinn didn’t wait for backup. There was no time. Three years ago, she had waited for backup during a raid in Southwark, and DS Morris had come home in a mahogany box with his eyes turned to glass. She wouldn’t
make that mistake
again. Not tonight. She took off, her movements defined by eighteen years of grit and a posture of military precision that the years hadn't been able to erode. Her boots hammered the pavement, the sound
echoing
off the shuttered storefronts. The suspect ducked around a corner, heading toward the rusted iron gates of an old industrial yard, but Quinn was faster. She saw the flash of his jacket—a nondescript olive green—as he dived toward a chain-link fence. "I said stop!" Quinn yelled, her hand hovering near her hip, though she knew the paperwork for drawing a sidearm in this district was a nightmare she didn’t want to
navigate
. The man scrambled over the fence with a desperate, animalistic energy. Quinn followed, her fingers catching on the cold wire, the salt-and-pepper hair at her temples plastered to her skin by the rain. She vaulted over and landed in the mud on the other side. They were behind a row of derelict warehouses, the air thick with the smell of wet soot and rotting timber. The suspect
wasn't heading
for the street. He
was heading
for a kiosk that looked like an abandoned entrance to a Tube station. It was a relic of the Blitz, a ghost-hole in the earth that should have
been welded
shut decades ago. The man reached the heavy iron door, fumbled with something in his pocket, and shoved it into a slit in the metal. There was a heavy, mechanical thud—not the sound of a key turning in a lock, but something deeper, more ancient. The door swung inward on silent hinges, and the man slipped into the darkness. Quinn skidded to a halt in front of the entrance. She pulled a heavy mag-lite from her belt, the beam cutting a jagged hole in the gloom. The door was still
slightly
ajar. Above her, a stray gust of wind rattled the corrugated iron roofing of a nearby shed, sounding like a slow round of applause. She hesitated. E
very
instinct honed in the Metropolitan Police told her to wait, to call it in, to secure the perimeter. But the suspect was her only lead to the clique that had been bleeding the city dry—the same people she suspected were responsible for the 'unexplained' anomalies found in Morris’s autopsy report. She reached out and touched the door. It felt ice-cold, vibrating with a low-frequency hum that set her teeth on edge. She peered at the ground. Near the threshold lay a small, discarded object. She knelt, its beam illuminating a jagged piece of ivory. It wasn't a key. It was a bone, carved with strange, interlocking runes and polished to a dull sheen. A bone token. Quinn pocketed the token, her jaw tightening until it felt like it might snap. She stepped inside. The air changed instantly. The damp chill of the London night evaporated, replaced by a thick, heavy heat that smelled of scorched cinnamon, ozone, and old parchment. The stairs didn't lead to a platform. They spiraled down into a vaulted cavern that she knew, with a sudden, sinking certainty, was not on any city map. She descended, her
footsteps
muffled by a layer of dust that looked suspiciously like ash. As she turned the final corner of the staircase, the silence
was shattered
by a
cacophony
of sound—the braying of strange animals, the clinking of glassware, and a dozen languages layered over one another in a chaotic
symphony
. The Veil Market stretched out before her in the belly of the abandoned station. Stalls
were fashioned
out of rusted train cars and scaffolding, illuminated by flickering lanterns that burned with violet and green flames. Figures in heavy cloaks moved between the shadows, trading things that Quinn’s rational mind refused to categorize: jars of shimmering liquid, bundles of dried herbs that
seemed to
twitch, and scrolls of human skin. She kept her head down, her hand resting on the hilt of her baton. She was a goldfish in a shark tank, and she knew it. She scanned the crowd, looking for the olive jacket. "You look lost, Detective." The voice was calm, melodic, and carried a thick Spanish lilt. Quinn spun around, her flashlight beam splashing across a man leaning against a stack of crates filled with smoked glass vials. He was younger than her, perhaps late twenties, with olive skin and short, curly dark brown hair that caught the dim light. He wore a Saint Christopher medallion around his neck, and as he shifted his
weight
, his sleeve pulled back to reveal a long, jagged scar running the length of his left forearm. "Tomás Herrera," Quinn said, her voice dropping to a low, dangerous register. "The paramedic with the revoked license." Tomás smiled, though his warm brown eyes remained guarded. "I prefer 'independent consultant' these days. And you’re a long way from the Yard, Harlow. This isn't your jurisdiction. It isn't anyone's." "I followed a suspect in a felony assault," Quinn said, stepping closer, her height giving her a slight edge over him. "Olive jacket, five-ten, heading toward the east mezzanine. Where is he?" Tomás sighed, checking the Saint Christopher medal as if for luck. "He’s gone into the deeper tunnels. You follow him down there, and you won't come back with a badge. You might not come back at all. The Veil Market doesn’t like outsiders who bring the smell of the law with them." "I don't care what this place likes," Quinn snapped. "I saw what happened to Morris. I saw the things the 'clique' is playing with. I’m not letting another one slip away into the dark." Tomás’s expression softened, just for a second. "I knew Morris. He was a good man. But he died because he tried to apply human logic to a world that doesn't use it. Look around you, Harlow. Do you think a pair of handcuffs will hold anything here?" Quinn looked. At a nearby stall, a woman with eyes the color of mercury
was weighing
out a handful of what looked like shimmering stardust. Next to her, a man with too many fingers
was whispering
to a bird trapped in a cage of bone. It was an impossible nightmare, a black market for the soul, hidden right beneath the feet of millions of unsuspecting Londoners. "He's heading for the Nest after this, isn't he?" Quinn asked, her voice tight. "The Raven's Nest. I’ve seen your name on the visitor logs for that bar in Soho, Tomás. You’re the one patching them up." Tomás didn't deny it. "I give people a second chance when the system fails them. Just like you try to give victims justice. We just have different methods." He stepped forward, putting himself between Quinn and the deeper tunnels. "Go home, Detective. Go back to the rain and the streetlights. If you stay here, they'll smell the iron in your blood and the conviction in your heart. Both are considered delicacies in the Market." Quinn stared him down, her sharp jaw set in a line of pure defiance. She could feel the bone token in her pocket, a cold
weight
against her thigh. She thought of the "unexplained circumstances" of Morris’s death—the way the coroner had backed away from the body, the way the Chief had told her to 'let it go' for the sake of her career. "I'm not going anywhere until I have him," Quinn said. "Then you're a fool," Tomás whispered. Suddenly, a bell chimed—a deep, resonant sound that
seemed to
vibrate through the
very
floorboards of the station. The marketgoers froze. The violet lanterns
flickered
and died. "The wind is changing," Tomás said, his voice urgent. "The Market is moving. If you’re still inside when the gates shift, you’ll end up in the middle of the North Sea or worse." He grabbed her arm—a bold move, considering she could have broken his wrist in three places—and began pulling her back toward the spiral staircase. "The suspect is gone, Harlow. But if you want to find the people behind this, come to the Nest tomorrow night. Ask for Silas. Tell him the man with the scar sent you." Quinn looked back at the chaos of the Market. She saw the olive-jacketed man disappear into a cluster of weeping willow trees that shouldn't have been able to grow in the dark. She felt the ground beneath her feet
begin to
groan, the reality of the station buckling as it prepared to transit to whatever graveyard or alleyway it would inhabit next. She had a choice. She could dive into the madness and likely disappear forever, or she could retreat, regroup, and take the fight to their home turf. She pulled her arm free from Tomás's grip. "Tomorrow night," she said, her voice like steel. "And if you’re lying to me, Herrera, I’ll find a cell deep enough that even your 'clique' won't be able to hear you scream." Tomás gave a grim nod of respect. "I believe you." Quinn turned and ran, her boots hitting the metal stairs as the world behind her
began to
dissolve into a swirl of ash and violet light. She burst through the iron door and out into the London rain, falling to her knees on the wet pavement. Behind her, the kiosk door was shut. It was rusted, draped in old cobwebs, and locked with a heavy, mundane padlock that looked like it hadn't been touched in forty years. She stood up, shaking, and looked at her
watch
. Only three minutes had passed. She reached into her pocket and pulled out the bone token. It was still there—cold, jagged, and
very
real. She looked toward the lights of Camden, the neon blurring in the rain. The city looked the same, but for Harlow Quinn, the veil had finally shredded. She didn't just want justice anymore. She wanted the truth, and she knew exactly where she had to go to get it. Soho
was calling
.
created_at
"2026-02-17T02:55:06.824725+00:00"
2/17/2026, 2:55:06 AM
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native_tokens_completion
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native_tokens_reasoning
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.0000%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
8
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
78.5982%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount
1869
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
1
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
2
adverb
"very"
count
2
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"suddenly"
2
"very"
100.0000%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.0000%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
57.1964%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount
1869
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"cacophony"
count
1
1
word
"symphony"
count
1
2
word
"flickered"
count
1
3
word
"weight"
count
2
4
word
"footsteps"
count
1
5
word
"echoing"
count
1
6
word
"navigate"
count
1
highlights
0
"cacophony"
1
"symphony"
2
"flickered"
3
"weight"
4
"footsteps"
5
"echoing"
6
"navigate"
100.0000%
Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.0000%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
108
matches
(empty)
100.0000%
Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
2
hedgeCount
4
narrationSentences
108
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"begin to"
2
"began to"
100.0000%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
121
matches
0
"knew that gait"
1
"make that mistake"
97.8089%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
42
mean
44.05
std
21.69
cv
0.492
sampleLengths
0
68
1
51
2
18
3
61
4
74
5
31
6
65
7
43
8
56
9
109
10
66
11
17
12
55
13
53
14
69
15
35
16
4
17
32
18
54
19
18
20
31
21
32
22
52
23
34
24
47
25
66
26
37
27
74
28
64
29
10
30
6
31
27
32
33
33
57
34
62
35
27
36
40
37
10
38
46
39
31
40
33
41
52
100.0000%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount
4
totalSentences
108
matches
0
"been welded"
1
"was shattered"
2
"were fashioned"
3
"was rusted, been touched"
100.0000%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
5
totalVerbs
250
matches
0
"wasn't heading"
1
"was heading"
2
"was weighing"
3
"was whispering"
4
"was calling"
100.0000%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1499
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
33
adverbRatio
0.022014676450967312
lyAdverbCount
12
lyAdverbRatio
0.008005336891260841
100.0000%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
121
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.0000%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
121
mean
15.29
std
9.55
cv
0.625
sampleLengths
0
18
1
33
2
10
3
7
4
10
5
20
6
4
7
17
8
18
9
4
10
11
11
5
12
4
13
29
14
6
15
2
16
25
17
12
18
21
19
16
20
31
21
11
22
22
23
12
24
20
25
7
26
16
27
20
28
22
29
20
30
14
31
10
32
17
33
6
34
23
35
2
36
19
37
32
38
7
39
14
40
5
41
8
42
10
43
4
44
15
45
3
46
14
47
3
48
4
49
23
35.9504%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
17
diversityRatio
0.2975206611570248
totalSentences
121
uniqueOpeners
36
50.0000%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
4
fancyTags
0
"Quinn said, her voice dropping to a low, dangerous register (say, drop)"
1
"Quinn said, stepping closer, her height giving her a slight edge over him (say, step give)"
2
"Quinn snapped (snap)"
3
"Tomás whispered (whisper)"
89.3855%