| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.586 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 91.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1223 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1223 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "tinged" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "comforting" | | 5 | "otherworldly" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "chaotic" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "traced" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "shimmered" | | 15 | "comfortable" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1208 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.50% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 973 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.85 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 18 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Isolde | 10 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Shade | 3 | | Grove | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | December | 1 | | London | 2 | | Dymas | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Half-Fae" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "December" | | 6 | "Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.575 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite answering the question Rory hadn't asked" | | 1 | "not quite the grey overcast of London in winter, but a warm amber that reminded her uncomfortably of the descriptions she'd heard of Dymas" | | 2 | "looked like veins of quartz" | | 3 | "something like hurt threading through their" | | 4 | "not quite music, not quite wind" | | 5 | "not quite wind" | | 6 | "seemed brighter now, their glow intensifying" | | 7 | "as if preparing for threat or flight" |
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| 34.44% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.656 | | wordCount | 1208 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite the grey overcast of London in winter, but a warm amber" | | 1 | "neither what I was nor" |
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| 90.04% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "noticed that Isolde" | | 1 | "was that the" |
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| 96.73% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 38.97 | | std | 19.04 | | cv | 0.489 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 68 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 67 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 60 | | 16 | 60 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 74 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 70 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 29 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.126 | | matches | | 0 | "The moment Rory stepped between the standing oaks, the air changed—became thick, honeyed, clinging to her skin like morning dew that refused to evaporate." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in defiance of December's grip on the world outside—lupines and foxglove, nightshade and moonflower, species that should never share the same soil or season." | | 2 | "The moment her fingers brushed the petals, images flooded her mind—lovers meeting in secret, a child's laughter, blood on stone, a woman weeping." | | 3 | "The sky overhead was wrong—not quite the grey overcast of London in winter, but a warm amber that reminded her uncomfortably of the descriptions she'd heard of Dymas." | | 4 | "Nyx, by contrast, left shadows in their wake—dark impressions that lingered several seconds before fading." | | 5 | "Symbols had been carved into the wood—ancient, twisting marks that hurt to look at directly." | | 6 | "Small objects nestled among the roots—a tarnished copper ring, a child's wooden toy, a key so old its teeth had worn smooth, a photograph bleached white by time or magic." | | 7 | "A sound rippled through the clearing—not quite music, not quite wind." | | 8 | "The air tasted of copper and honey and something older than either—something that had no name in any language she knew." | | 9 | "Not an earthquake—something more deliberate, more conscious." | | 10 | "Through that distortion, she caught glimpses of other places—a rain-soaked London street, a hall of feasting tables piled with impossible foods, a vast library where books wrote themselves, a frozen wasteland where stars fell upward into an inverted sky." |
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| 87.07% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 939 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "strange amber-tinged light." |
| | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.04792332268370607 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01703940362087327 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 13.89 | | std | 7.5 | | cv | 0.54 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 57.47% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.41379310344827586 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, one hand instinctively" | | 1 | "She jerked her hand back," | | 2 | "She straightened, forcing her analytical" | | 3 | "They moved deeper, and Rory" | | 4 | "she asked, then immediately regretted" | | 5 | "Her voice fell flat, absorbed" | | 6 | "they whispered, something like hurt" | | 7 | "Her fingers found the Fae-forged" | | 8 | "she said, understanding dawning" | | 9 | "It raised the hair on" | | 10 | "She stood quickly, scanning the" | | 11 | "Her voice carried no fear," | | 12 | "She turned those pale lavender" | | 13 | "It wasn't that the place" | | 14 | "It was that the Grove" |
| | ratio | 0.203 | |
| 41.08% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The moment Rory stepped between" | | 1 | "She paused, one hand instinctively" | | 2 | "The crimson gem pulsed once" | | 3 | "Something else entirely." | | 4 | "The silver-haired woman materialized from" | | 5 | "The Shade's form flickered at" | | 6 | "Nyx's voice carried on wind" | | 7 | "The Grove stretched before them," | | 8 | "Wildflowers bloomed in defiance of" | | 9 | "The petals glowed faintly, as" | | 10 | "Rory knelt, reaching toward a" | | 11 | "The moment her fingers brushed" | | 12 | "She jerked her hand back," | | 13 | "Isolde said, not quite answering" | | 14 | "Rory muttered, wiping her palm" | | 15 | "She straightened, forcing her analytical" | | 16 | "The sky overhead was wrong—not" | | 17 | "The comparison made her stomach" | | 18 | "They moved deeper, and Rory" | | 19 | "The Fae woman glided rather" |
| | ratio | 0.838 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The moment Rory stepped between the standing oaks, the air changed—became thick, honeyed, clinging to her skin like morning dew that refused to evaporate." | | 1 | "The silver-haired woman materialized from between wildflowers that hadn't existed a breath before, her pale lavender eyes reflecting light that came from no vis…" | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed in defiance of December's grip on the world outside—lupines and foxglove, nightshade and moonflower, species that should never share the sam…" | | 3 | "The sky overhead was wrong—not quite the grey overcast of London in winter, but a warm amber that reminded her uncomfortably of the descriptions she'd heard of …" | | 4 | "The Fae woman glided rather than walked, her silver hair floating slightly as if submerged in invisible water." | | 5 | "Nyx, by contrast, left shadows in their wake—dark impressions that lingered several seconds before fading." | | 6 | "The Shade recoiled, their form destabilizing into wisps of shadow before reforming several feet away." | | 7 | "Beside her, Nyx's form rippled violently, as if the Shade fought to maintain cohesion against forces pulling them apart." |
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| 36.76% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, not quite answering the question Rory hadn't asked" | | 1 | "she said, understanding dawning" | | 2 | "Rory breathed, unable to look away from the shifting visions" |
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| 12.07% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 3 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.345 | | leniency | 0.69 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.276 | |