Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMRBAEK59WXARTVETND70CK

Run Details

Duration:
54.1s
Cost:
$0.049248
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain in London didn’t just fall; it drowned the world in grey static. It slicked the cobblestones of the alleyway and turned the neon glow of the shop signs into blurry, weeping watercolor streaks. Detective Harlow Quinn didn't feel the cold, though the water had long since soaked through her trench coat and plastered her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair to her skull. She felt only the burn in her lungs and the rhythmic, slamming impact of her boots against the pavement. Eighteen years on the force had taught her that most criminals looked back. They wanted to see the gap they had created, to measure their safety. But the man ahead of her kept his eyes forward, his focus singular. Tomás Herrera was fast. The twenty-nine-year-old former paramedic vaulted a pile of sodden cardboard boxes with an agility that annoyed Quinn. She was forty-one, and while she kept herself to a standard of military precision, her knees had begun to voice their complaints on nights like this. Still, she had the endurance of a hunting dog. She didn't need to be faster; she just needed to be inevitable. "Herrera!" she shouted, her voice cutting through the hiss of the downpour. "Met Police! Stop!" He didn't slow. He took a sharp left out of the alley onto the wider street, his sneakers squeaking violently against the wet concrete. Under the harsh halogen of a streetlight, Quinn caught the flash of the silver Saint Christopher medallion bouncing against his chest as he ran. He wore a dark jacket, but the sleeves were pushed up, revealing the jagged scar running along his left forearm—a souvenir from a knife attack she’d read about in his file. Quinn rounded the corner, her hand hovering near her hip, though she kept her weapon holstered. This wasn't a shooting situation. Not yet. She needed him talking, not bleeding. She suspected Herrera was the medical lifeline for the clique operating out of Soho, specifically from that dimly lit dive, The Raven's Nest. If she brought him in, she could squeeze him. She could find out what happened to DS Morris. The thought of Morris—of the empty, hollow look in his eyes right before the end—sent a fresh surge of adrenaline into her bloodstream. She picked up her pace, closing the distance by five yards. Herrera glanced over his shoulder then, his olive skin pale under the streetlights, his warm brown eyes wide with panic. He wasn't running like a guilty man with stolen goods; he was running like a man who knew things he shouldn't. He darted across the traffic of Camden High Street, dodging a black cab that blasted its horn and sent a spray of dirty water into Quinn’s path. She didn't flinch, weaving through the gridlock with a fluidity born of practice. Herrera was heading toward the older, derelict section of the district, toward the skeletons of buildings wrapped in scaffolding and the dark mouths of access tunnels. "You can't run forever, Tomás!" she yelled, hoping the use of his first name would jar him. He scrambled over a chain-link fence surrounding a construction site. Quinn hit the metal mesh a second later, using the toe-holds to haul her five-foot-nine frame up and over. She landed in the mud on the other side, the worn leather watch on her left wrist jarring against the ground as she broke her fall. Ahead, the landscape changed. The commercial clutter of Camden gave way to the industrial decay of an abandoned Tube station entrance. The iron gates were rusted shut, chained with heavy padlocks that should have been impenetrable. Herrera didn't slow down. He didn't look for a key. He reached into his pocket and pulled out something small and white. Even from twenty feet away, through the rain and the gloom, Quinn saw the object clearly. It looked like a knucklebone. He pressed the bone against the rusted iron of the gate. The air pressure dropped. It was a physical sensation, like the popping of ears during a rapid descent. The shadows around the gate writhed, oiling together into a viscous darkness. The heavy iron bars didn't swing open; they seemed to dissolve, misting away into grey smoke for a split second. Herrera threw himself through the gap. "What the hell," Quinn muttered, the rational part of her brain misfiring. She had seen strange things in the last three years—things that didn't make it into her official reports—but seeing solid iron sublimate into fog was new. She sprinted the last ten yards. The mist was hardening, the iron reforming like rapidly freezing ice. She hit the gate shoulder-first, expecting the clang of metal, but found herself stumbling through a resistance that felt like walking through a curtain of heavy, wet velvet. She tumbled onto the other side, landing on cracked tiles. The roar of the rain vanished instantly. Silence slammed into her, heavy and thick. Quinn scrambled to her feet, hand going instinctively to her baton. She wasn't outside anymore. She was standing at the top of a long, non-functioning escalator, the ribbed metal steps descending into a throat of darkness lit by flickering, unnatural lanterns. The air smelled of ozone, burnt sugar, and something coppery that reminded her of a butcher shop. "Herrera?" Her voice echoed, but the acoustics were wrong. The sound didn't bounce; it was swallowed. She moved to the edge of the escalator. Far below, where the platform should have been, a warm, golden haze pulsed. She could hear movement now—the low hum of voices, the clinking of glass, the shuffle of hundreds of feet. This was the station beneath the station. The rumor mill at the precinct called it the Veil Market, though most coppers laughed it off as a junkie hallucination. Quinn checked her six. The gate behind her was solid iron again. No way back without a key, and she didn't have a bone token. She had to go down. She took the stationary escalator steps two at a time, her boots making no sound on the metal, silenced by the oppressive atmosphere of the place. As she descended, the humidity rose, clinging to her damp clothes. When she reached the bottom, the sight stopped her dead. The platform had been transformed. The curved, tiled walls of the tube station were still there, covered in centuries of grime and peeling posters advertising products that had never existed. But the tracks were gone, covered by mismatched wooden planks to create a massive floor. Stalls crowded every inch of space. They were draped in silks and tattered leathers, lit by jars containing glowing, trapped insects or buoyant flames that required no wick. And the people. Quinn pressed herself into the shadow of a support pillar, her heart hammering against her ribs. A figure walked past her hiding spot—tall, draped in a heavy cloak. Under the hood, Quinn saw not a human face, but skin that looked like polished obsidian and eyes that burned with a flat, yellow light. Another figure, this one human-looking but with fingers that were far too long and too many joints, was haggling with a vendor over a jar of cloudy liquid. Quinn gripped her baton so hard her knuckles turned white. This was it. This was the world that had swallowed Morris. It wasn't just a criminal underground; it was a literal one. She scanned the crowd, her detective’s eye filtering out the impossible to focus on the familiar. She needed the curly dark hair. She needed the olive skin. There. Fifty yards away, near a stall displaying knives carved from glass, stood Tomás Herrera. He was leaning heavily against a wooden crate, clutching his side. He was speaking to a woman behind the counter—an elderly figure with cataracts that swirled like storm clouds. Quinn exhaled, forcing her breathing to slow. Panic was a luxury she couldn't afford. She had the target. She had the location. But she was entirely off the map. No radio signal would reach down here. If she engaged, she was on her own. She watched as Tomás handed the woman a wad of cash—normal, British pounds. The woman shook her head, pointing to the medallion around his neck. Tomás recoiled, his hand flying to the Saint Christopher pendant. He argued, his gestures frantic. He looked terrified. He wasn't here to hide, Quinn realized. He was here to buy something specific, something urgent enough to trade his protection for. The old woman produced a small, leather-bound satchel and held it out. Tomás hesitated, his fingers trembling over the chain of his medallion. Quinn moved. She stepped out of the shadows, eschewing stealth for authority. She walked with the bearing of someone who belonged there, eyes forward, jaw set. The crowd parted around her, not out of respect, but out of a subtle, predatory curiosity. They sensed an outsider. Tomás was unclasping the chain when Quinn’s hand clamped down on his shoulder. He yelped, spinning around. The medallion clattered to the floorboards. "Don't," Quinn said, her voice low and dangerous. She kicked the medallion away from the sewer grate near their feet and trapped it under her boot. "You seal that deal, and you lose the only leverage you have left." Tomás stared at her, his chest heaving. "Detective Quinn. You... you can't be here. The token..." "I'm here," she said, her grip on his shoulder tightening. "And you're coming back up with me." "I can't," Tomás hissed, his eyes darting to the curious onlookers gathering around them—a mix of humans and things that were distinctly not. "They need the medicine, Quinn. The treatments I learned... standard antibiotics don't work on—" "I don't care who they are," Quinn cut him off, though her gaze flicked to the vendor, whose cloudy eyes were now fixed on Quinn with unsettling intensity. "I care about the law. And I care about what you know about DS Morris." At the mention of the name, the blood drained out of Tomás’s face utterly. "Morris," he whispered. "You think I... Quinn, I didn't hurt him. I tried to save him." The atmosphere in the market shifted. The ambient noise dropped. The vendor leaned over the counter, her voice sounding like dry leaves skittering on pavement. "Policeman," the crone rasped. "The Law of Iron has no jurisdiction in the Veil." Quinn released Tomás but kept her body angled between him and the crowd. She drew her baton, the telescopic steel expanding with a sharp *clack*. "I'm not here for jurisdiction," Quinn said, projecting her voice so the gathering circle could hear. She looked at Tomás, seeing the fear, but also the strangely earnest desire to help in his eyes. She made a choice. "I'm taking him," Quinn stated. "Walk away, or I turn this stall over." It was a bluff. A massive, desperate bluff against creatures she didn't understand in a hole beneath the earth. But she held her ground, her sharp jaw set, radiating the pure, unadulterated stubbornness that had defined her career. Tomás looked at her, then at the satchel on the counter. He bent down, scooped up his medallion, and looked back at Quinn. "We have to run," he whispered. "Now." "Way ahead of you," Quinn muttered. She grabbed his arm, turning them back toward the escalators, back toward the impossible climb to the surface, hoping that the darkness would wait just a few seconds longer before it decided to bite.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
77.7778% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Tomás hissed, his eyes darting to the curious onlookers gathering around them—a mix of humans and things that were distinctly not [distinctly]"
1"Quinn said, projecting her voice so the gathering circle could hear [so]"
94.8133% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1928
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.2531% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1928
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"oppressive"
2"velvet"
3"echoed"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences146
matches
0"looked terrified"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences146
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
1"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences156
matches
0"seal that deal"
1"hoping that the"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean32.83
std19.43
cv0.592
sampleLengths
082
139
268
315
479
570
634
741
866
917
1055
1136
1243
1311
1450
156
1638
1745
1810
197
2048
2117
2216
2340
2453
255
2637
2710
2845
2928
3019
3165
3232
3327
341
3543
3644
3743
3822
3923
402
4144
4213
4310
4439
4516
4617
4737
4843
4930
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences146
matches
0"were pushed"
1"were rusted"
2"was swallowed"
3"been transformed"
4"were gone"
5"were draped"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs311
matches
0"was running"
1"was heading"
2"was hardening"
3"was standing"
4"was haggling"
5"was speaking"
6"was unclasping"
88.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1796
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"long, non-functioning escalator,"
1"small, leather-bound satchel"
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.02505567928730512
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.008908685968819599
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean12.21
std7.26
cv0.595
sampleLengths
014
121
228
319
413
513
613
74
817
926
109
1112
1212
133
143
1521
1624
1731
1816
195
202
216
2223
239
249
2523
2611
2720
2821
2927
3013
3126
3217
3310
3419
3526
364
3717
3815
394
406
4112
4216
435
4411
454
4614
4712
4820
496
34.6154% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.2692307692307692
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners42
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount11
fancyTags
0"shouted (shout)"
1"Quinn muttered, the rational part of her brain misfiring (mutter, misfiring)"
2"she said, her grip on his shoulder tightening (say, tighten)"
3"Tomás hissed, his eyes darting to the curious onlookers gathering around them—a mix of humans and things that were distinctly not (hiss, dart do be distinctly not)"
4"Quinn cut him off, though her gaze flicked to the vendor, whose cloudy eyes were now fixed on Quinn with unsettling intensity (cut flick be fix)"
5"he whispered (whisper)"
6"the crone rasped (rasp)"
7"Quinn said, projecting her voice so the gathering circle could hear (say, project hear)"
8"Quinn stated (state)"
9"he whispered (whisper)"
10"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
86.7329%