| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She knelt again [again]" | | 1 | "she called quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 93.07% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1442 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loosely" | | 1 | "deliberately" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.59% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1442 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "down her spine" | | 6 | "glinting" | | 7 | "magnetic" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "quivered" | | 11 | "measured" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "sentinel" | | 14 | "resolve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.43% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1411 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.45% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1167 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 16 | | Quinn | 4 | | Camden | 2 | | London | 1 | | Sergeant | 1 | | Patel | 12 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 2 | | Noticed | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Sergeant" | | 3 | "Patel" | | 4 | "Market" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Kowalski" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.814 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 84.21% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite round" | | 1 | "as if reflecting moonlight that never reached the city’s bowels" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.709 | | wordCount | 1411 | | matches | | 0 | "not just of death, but something expectant, as though the shadows lingered to watch" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 41.5 | | std | 23.09 | | cv | 0.556 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 77 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 85 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 76 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 75 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 56 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 67 | | 25 | 50 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 36 | | 28 | 67 | | 29 | 70 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 45 |
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| 82.73% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "been gutted" | | 1 | "were changed" | | 2 | "were curled" | | 3 | "was divided" | | 4 | "been stacked" | | 5 | "were drawn" | | 6 | "was left" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 25 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 23 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.195 | | matches | | 0 | "Down here, beneath Camden, even London’s relentless drizzle couldn’t reach—the fog was something else, a chemical miasma the city tried to forget." | | 1 | "The air teemed with the wet metallic scent of old rails and something spicier—a trace of incense, oddly out of place." | | 2 | "But tonight, those walls were changed—painted with sigils, delicate and curling, drawn in something that glimmered in the torch glare." | | 3 | "The Veil Market, she thought; she’d heard whispers about this place in the shadowed corners of the city’s rumor mill." | | 4 | "Her every movement held the muscle memory of nineteen years in service—back straight, gaze steady, analyzing." | | 5 | "It was half-full of powder that shimmered—opalescent, unlikely." | | 6 | "A narrow silver chain, etched with symbols, bisected the floor in a careful line—a perimeter, not decoration." | | 7 | "Tiny bones scattered the floor—a child’s knucklebones, at a glance—lashed on strings." | | 8 | "“Figures.” She knelt again and lifted the woman’s wrist—gingerly, mindful of the chain." | | 9 | "Noticed faint imprints on the skin, like pressing into damp sand—a bracelet, recently removed." | | 10 | "In his tight expression, she saw hope—he wanted a simple answer." | | 11 | "From this new angle, the patterns on the tiles became clearer—protective wards, she realized, not invitations." | | 12 | "Then she noticed it: a smear of verdigris green glinting under the platform’s edge—brass, untouched by the years, though this place had nothing left but rot." | | 13 | "She’d never believed in magic—but she’d learned to trust patterns." | | 14 | "The compass, the chains, the circle—it all spoke of energies bottled beneath the city, old and angry." | | 15 | "Harlow’s thoughts sidestepped methodically—details before doubts." | | 16 | "Whatever haunted this market, someone had tried—desperately—to hold it at bay." | | 17 | "Not human, not animal—unnatural." | | 18 | "Medical examiner, arriving late—sallow, out of breath." | | 19 | "There—something half-concealed under a pile of market flotsam." | | 20 | "Fresh scrape marks marred the concrete, revealing a sliding panel—a concealed doorway never meant to be used by mortals." | | 21 | "“Whatever was behind that door. And whatever made the Market run tonight, even after death.” Her voice was steel—measured, certain, refusing superstition but refusing denial all the same." | | 22 | "Harlow Quinn stood sentinel beneath Camden, her shadow sharp against the painted sigils, watching—always watching—for evidence nobody else would see, waiting for the pattern to resolve into a truth she could finally, mercilessly, name." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1198 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.030884808013355594 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015025041736227046 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 11.96 | | std | 7.79 | | cv | 0.652 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 71.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4406779661016949 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 34.01% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she noticed it: a" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 81.22% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused and exhaled." | | 1 | "He stood in the pool" | | 2 | "He beckoned her around a" | | 3 | "She’d never expected its entrance" | | 4 | "She stepped forward, measuring the" | | 5 | "Her every movement held the" | | 6 | "He pointed to the body" | | 7 | "It was a young woman," | | 8 | "Her face was pale and" | | 9 | "Her hands were curled loosely" | | 10 | "she asked, motioning Patel closer" | | 11 | "He shifted, squinting." | | 12 | "He gestured at a scattered" | | 13 | "She reached for a pen" | | 14 | "It was half-full of powder" | | 15 | "She straightened, scanning the rails." | | 16 | "She knelt again and lifted" | | 17 | "she gestured to the silvery" | | 18 | "She circled the body" | | 19 | "She nudged it with her" |
| | ratio | 0.347 | |
| 72.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn ducked through" | | 1 | "She paused and exhaled." | | 2 | "Harlow’s sharp jaw set, her" | | 3 | "The air teemed with the" | | 4 | "He stood in the pool" | | 5 | "He beckoned her around a" | | 6 | "The chamber yawned open before" | | 7 | "The abandoned Tube station had" | | 8 | "The Veil Market, she thought;" | | 9 | "She’d never expected its entrance" | | 10 | "Harlow reached for the comfort" | | 11 | "She stepped forward, measuring the" | | 12 | "Her every movement held the" | | 13 | "Patel spoke in a hush." | | 14 | "He pointed to the body" | | 15 | "It was a young woman," | | 16 | "Blonde, expensive trainers, torn tights." | | 17 | "Her face was pale and" | | 18 | "Her hands were curled loosely" | | 19 | "she asked, motioning Patel closer" |
| | ratio | 0.776 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Even from twenty feet off," | | 1 | "Even in death, the body" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 58.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "But tonight, those walls were changed—painted with sigils, delicate and curling, drawn in something that glimmered in the torch glare." | | 1 | "There was a chill over her, the stillness not just of death, but something expectant, as though the shadows lingered to watch." | | 2 | "Her face was pale and peaceful, almost as if she’d merely lain down for a nap, but there was a thin line of blood beneath each nostril." | | 3 | "It was half-full of powder that shimmered—opalescent, unlikely." | | 4 | "On the far end, boxes had been stacked in makeshift booths: discarded bits of velvet, cracked trays, the detritus of commerce that shouldn’t exist above ground." | | 5 | "The sigils here glowed faint, as if reflecting moonlight that never reached the city’s bowels." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "called Sergeant Patel, his voice bouncing down the tunnel" | | 1 | "She glanced up, eyes narrowing" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.259 | | leniency | 0.519 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |