| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.533 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1375 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.64% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1375 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "could feel" | | 1 | "wavering" | | 2 | "wavered" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "dancing" | | 5 | "pounding" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "quivered" | | 9 | "peril" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "velvet" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "traced" | | 14 | "trembled" | | 15 | "unwavering" | | 16 | "pulse" | | 17 | "electric" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1364 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.87% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 65 | | wordCount | 1248 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.68 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Aurora | 21 | | Nyx | 7 | | Shade | 2 | | Truth | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Welsh | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 3 | | Veil | 4 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "Shade" | | 7 | "Evan" | | 8 | "Isolde" | | 9 | "Blade" | | 10 | "Veil" | | 11 | "Hel" |
| | places | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Welsh" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.659 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like velvet wrapped around them" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1364 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.50% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 42.63 | | std | 18.85 | | cv | 0.442 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 51 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 68 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 63 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 58 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 50 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 58 | | 25 | 70 | | 26 | 87 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 40 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 220 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened her grip on the Heartstone Pendant at her throat—deep crimson gem warming with each shallow breath—and stepped forward." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—petals in hues she had no names for, rimmed in glimmering dew that refracted the dying light." | | 2 | "For a moment her scar—the small crescent on her wrist—glowed too, as if matched by hidden magic." | | 3 | "Images flashed behind her eyelids—her mother’s laugh in a Welsh classroom, her father’s proud grin at her school recital, the terror she felt the night Evan cornered her in their flat." | | 4 | "At the center of the hall stood a dais of entwined roots, and embedded in its heart was a dagger of moonsilver—the Fae-Forged Blade." | | 5 | "Water—she had drunk." | | 6 | "Stone—the runes along the path." | | 7 | "Sky—the hall opened upward, lost in a canopy of tangling limbs and luminescent petals." | | 8 | "Vines and roots loosed their grip on the hall; runes across the grove’s stones rose in silver flame." | | 9 | "The sky above brightened; the amber stain of Hel’s reaching tendrils receded." | | 10 | "She took a breath of cool night air and stepped forward, leaving the Fae Grove’s secret shrine behind her—its gates sealed, its wonders safe once more." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1266 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.018167456556082148 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0007898894154818325 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 11.56 | | std | 6.47 | | cv | 0.56 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 52.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3474576271186441 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 1 | "She swallowed, heart hammering." | | 2 | "She bent to touch a" | | 3 | "Its surface rippled under her" | | 4 | "She jerked back, heart pounding." | | 5 | "She lifted her chin." | | 6 | "She liked danger." | | 7 | "They rounded a stand of" | | 8 | "She held the pendant over" | | 9 | "Their petals shivered in a" | | 10 | "she whispered, voice drifting like" | | 11 | "She thought of Evan, of" | | 12 | "She reached for the pond," | | 13 | "It was colder than ice" | | 14 | "She blinked, thrust her hand" | | 15 | "she said, voice steady" | | 16 | "They stepped through the threshold" | | 17 | "She took a step forward," | | 18 | "She hauled it free." | | 19 | "Its glow steadied, as though" |
| | ratio | 0.262 | |
| 6.73% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 97 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter paused at the" | | 1 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 2 | "Isolde Varga floated beside her," | | 3 | "The Seer left no footprints," | | 4 | "A faint violet glow wavered" | | 5 | "The forest hush deepened." | | 6 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—petals" | | 7 | "Aurora’s boots sank into grass" | | 8 | "She swallowed, heart hammering." | | 9 | "Isolde’s voice wound around her" | | 10 | "Aurora bristled at the riddle" | | 11 | "The runes matched those dancing" | | 12 | "She bent to touch a" | | 13 | "Its surface rippled under her" | | 14 | "A drop of phosphorescent liquid" | | 15 | "She jerked back, heart pounding." | | 16 | "Nyx drifted ahead, eyes flickering" | | 17 | "A whisper, almost a sigh," | | 18 | "Aurora caught fragments: the Veil…thinner…danger" | | 19 | "She lifted her chin." |
| | ratio | 0.907 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 56.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde Varga floated beside her, pale silver hair drifting as though underwater." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion—petals in hues she had no names for, rimmed in glimmering dew that refracted the dying light." | | 2 | "Aurora bristled at the riddle and focused instead on the path winding ahead: a ribbon of polished white stone, etched with curling runes, twisting between great…" | | 3 | "The water’s surface quivered, and she saw, as though behind frosted glass, a dim archway carved of living wood, entwined with vines of moon-white blossoms." | | 4 | "Aurora followed their gaze and glimpsed her own face, pale and resolute, framed by black hair that gleamed silver in the phantom moonlight." | | 5 | "It was colder than ice and smoother than glass, and it rippled in tiny waves that lapped her fingertips." | | 6 | "They watched Aurora pass as if they understood her purpose." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, voice drifting like smoke" | | 1 | "she said, voice steady" | | 2 | "The Seer stepped, voice low," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "The Shade murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "She pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.533 | |