Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMRC5ZWEJNPJ01WKASFZBXS

Run Details

Duration:
49.4s
Cost:
$0.053394
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The sensation of crossing the Veil was less like stepping through a door and more like being pulled inside out. The grey, drizzling reality of London dissolved, stripped away by a pressure that popped Aurora’s ears and stole the breath from her lungs. When her boots found purchase again, the ground was too soft. Aurora Carter stumbled, instinctively tucking her chin as she fought the vertigo. She reached out to steady herself against a tree trunk, but the bark felt unnervingly like warm leather. She recoiled, her hand dropping to her chest. Beneath her shirt, the Heartstone pendant hammered against her sternum, pulsing with a fervent, almost painful heat. It had only ever hummed before; now, deep within the realm of Dymas, the silver-chained artifact seared with recognition. "Breathe, Rory," a voice whispered, sounding like dry leaves skittering over stone. Aurora forced her eyes open. The air was thick, humid, and smelled aggressively of fermentation—honey, yeast, and rotting peaches. She looked up, expecting the gloom of a subterranean cavern or the fire of a hellscape. Instead, she found herself bathed in an eternal, golden sunset. The sky was a bruised amber, vast and cloudless, casting everything in the heavy, saturated tones of an oil painting left too long in the sun. This wasn't the dark; it was a blinding, oppressive opulence. "So this is the realm of hunger," Aurora muttered, pushing her straight black hair back from her damp forehead. Her bright blue eyes darted around, scanning for threats. "Gluttony," Isolde corrected gently. The Half-Fae stood a few yards away, her silver waist-length hair shimmering with its own internal light, distinct from the amber glow of the realm. "Hunger implies a lack. Dymas is the presence of too much." Isolde turned in a slow circle. She wore the alien landscape as easily as a silk robe, her expression unreadable. Beside her, or rather, diffused around her, was Nyx. The shade had solidified into a tall, human silhouette, roughly six-foot-two, composed of darkness so absolute it seemed to drink the golden light of the orchard. Two points of violet bioluminescence burned where eyes should have been. "The air is heavy," Nyx whispered, their voice vibrating in the hollows of Aurora's skull rather than her ears. "It wants to be breathed. It wants to be tasted." Aurora checked her belt. The Fae-forged blade Isolde had given her was there, its moonsilver hilt radiant against her hip. She brushed her fingers against the pommel. It remained startlingly cold, a sliver of winter resisting the Dymasian heat. The temperature difference grounded her. "We need to move," Aurora said, her pragmatic side wrestling down her awe. "If the codex was right, the portal dropped us on the periphery. We aren't near the palace." "No," Isolde agreed, her lavender eyes distant. "But the periphery of Prince Belphegor’s domain is no stark wasteland. Look." She gestured with a slender hand. They stood on the edge of a sprawling vineyard that defied logic. The grapevines were as thick as pythons, twisting around trellis arches carved from what looked like giant, polished femurs. The grapes themselves were the size of apples, clustered so densely they threatened to snap the wood, their skins a deep, violent purple almost black in the amber light. They began to walk. Aurora took the lead, her boots sinking inches into the loamy, moss-covered earth with every step. It was exhausting, like walking through wet dough. She glanced back at Isolde and felt a spike of envy; the seer walked atop the moss, leaving absolutely no footprints, her movement eerie and gliding. Nyx simply flowed, their form occasionally losing cohesion and drifting like smoke before reforming over a stubborn root. As they pushed deeper into the vineyard, the silence began to gnaw at Aurora. It wasn't quiet—there was the sound of dripping juices, the rustle of leaves that were too large, the distant hum of insects—but there was no birdsong. No wind. "Don't touch anything," Aurora warned, though she felt the pull herself. She was thirsty to the point of pain. The grapes glistening at eye level looked impossibly sweet. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist itched, a phantom reminder of mortal accidents in a place that promised immortal satisfaction. "The flora here is… predatory," Nyx murmured. The Shade paused near a massive flower that resembled a hibiscus, though its petals were the texture of velvet and the color of raw meat. Nyx extended a shadow-tendril toward it. The flower shuddered, its petals flinching away from the void-touch of the Shade. "It is alive in ways your botany would not categorize." "It’s cultivated," Isolde said, her voice tight. "Everything here is grown for the table. Even the things that shouldn't be." Aurora halted. "What does that mean?" Isolde pointed to a grove of trees ahead. Their bark was pale and smooth, and their branches wept sap that smelled of roasting hazelnuts. But it was the roots that made Aurora’s stomach turn. They didn't just disappear into the earth; they coiled and writhed slowly, repositioning themselves in the soil with a wet, sucking sound. "The souls bound here," Isolde said, her truth-compulsion stripping the sugarcoating from her words. "They are not tortured with fire. They are the soil. They are the fertilizer. Their desire to consume binds them to the roots, feeding the orchards of the Prince." Aurora looked down at the mud caking her boots. She suppressed a gag and kept moving, faster now. "Great. Fertilizer. Let’s not join them." The path widened, opening into a clearing that stole the breath Aurora had just recovered. Before them lay a banquet hall without walls. A long table, carved from a single slab of obsidion, stretched for a hundred yards, disappearing into the golden haze. It was laden with food—mounds of roasted meats that still steamed, towers of pastries glistening with glaze, bowls of fruit that looked like jewels. The smells were distinct and overpowering: sage, caramelized sugar, gamey venison, sharp cheese. But there were no diners. "It’s a trap," Aurora said, her hand tightening on the hilt of the moonsilver dagger. The cold bite of the metal traveled up her arm, clearing the fog of hunger that had begun to settle over her mind. The Heartstone at her throat pulsed a warning rhythm—*danger, danger, danger.* "It is an offering," Nyx corrected, drifting closer to the table. "Or perhaps… refuse." Aurora stepped up beside the Shade. Up close, the illusion of perfection cracked. The roasted shades of meat were weeping dark, viscous fluid. The pastries were crawling with iridescent beetles that shimmered like emeralds. A goblet of wine had spilled, but the liquid hadn't soaked into the table; it had eaten a hole through the stone, hissing faintly. "It is waste," Isolde whispered, looking revolted. "Gluttony isn't about eating until you are full. It is about taking more than you can hold, and letting the rest rot. This table… this is the refuse of the Prince’s kitchens." Aurora saw something glinting near a pile of molding pomegranates. She reached out, careful not to touch the fruit, and used the tip of her dagger to shift the pile. It was a pair of spectacles. Wire-rimmed, cracked, unmistakably human. Modern. "Someone was here," Aurora said, her voice hard. "Someone from home." "A chef, perhaps," Nyx suggested, their violet eyes narrowing as they scanned the horizon. "Many are contracted. Few return." Isolde suddenly stiffened. Her ethereal stillness broke as she snapped her head toward the far end of the table. "We are seen." Aurora spun around. The ambient noise of the garden—the dripping, the rustling—had stopped. The silence was absolute now, heavy and expectant. From the amber haze at the end of the table, a shape began to coalesce. It wasn't a demon with horns, nor a soldier. It was bloated and round, hovering slightly off the ground, suspended by gas-filled bladders of skin that floated like grotesque balloons above its shoulders. It wore robes of yellow silk that strained against its bulk. "Visitors," a voice boomed, wet and gurgling. It didn't come from the figure's mouth, but seemed to bubble up from the table itself. "And so lean. So... empty." Aurora stepped in front of Isolde, drawing the Fae blade fully. The moonsilver glowed, cutting a stark blue line through the amber twilight. "We're just passing through," she called out, channeling every ounce of the cool-headed confidence she used when dealing with drunk patrons at Silas's bar back in London. "None pass through Dymas," the creature gurgled, drifting closer. The air around it rippled with heat. "We only digest." Nyx expanded, their shadow-form stretching tall, becoming a towering spike of darkness that loomed over Aurora. "Aurora," the Shade whispered, the sound like a knife scraping bone. "The ground." Aurora looked down. The soft earth around the obsidian table was churning. Vines, thick and pale as human limbs, were erupting from the soil, groping blindly for their ankles. "Isolde?" Aurora asked, her grip on the dagger white-knuckled. "I see the path," the seer said, her lavender eyes glowing. She pointed sharply to the left, towards a dense thicket of thorns that looked impassable. "The thorns are an illusion. A glamour to hide the servants' exit. The table is the distraction." "Go," Aurora commanded. As the bloated steward drifted closer, mouth opening to unleash a torrent of bilious magic, Aurora didn't run immediately. She grabbed a heavy silver platter from the table—laden with a suckling pig—and hurled it with all her strength at the creature. It wasn't a lethal blow, but the indulgence of the realm worked against it. The creature instinctively snatched the offering out of the air, distracted by the excess even in the midst of a fight. "Move!" Aurora yelled. They bolted. Nyx encased them in a shroud of dimness, blurring their outlines. Isolde ran with supernatural grace, and Aurora sprinted through the cloying mud, her lungs burning with the sweet, rotten air of Gluttony. They crashed into the wall of thorns, bracing for pain, but passed through them like mist. On the other side, the air was cooler. The golden light was dimmer. They tumbled onto a paved stone path, gasping for breath. Aurora checked her wrist, then her chest. The Heartstone was still pulsing, but slower now. She looked back through the shimmering veil of the glamour. The massive, bloated shape was still hovering over the table, tearing into the distraction she had thrown. "Welcome to Hell," Aurora wheezed, wiping slime from her boot. "I hate it here." "The feeling," Nyx whispered, turning their void-gaze toward the distant spires of a palace rising on the horizon, "is entirely mutual."
created_at"2026-02-17T02:56:11.625583+00:00" 2/17/2026, 2:56:11 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Isolde corrected gently [gently]"
1"Nyx whispered, their voice vibrating in the hollows of Aurora's skull rather than her ears [rather]"
72.2068% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1799
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"sharply"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
4"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.6203% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1799
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"churning"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count1
3
word"glistening"
count2
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"oppressive"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"silk"
count2
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"radiant"
count1
11
word"stark"
count2
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"churning"
2"shimmered"
3"glistening"
4"glinting"
5"oppressive"
6"loomed"
7"velvet"
8"silk"
9"unreadable"
10"radiant"
11"stark"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences127
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean33.47
std19.09
cv0.57
sampleLengths
043
111
274
312
445
536
628
740
866
929
1044
1130
1219
1366
1472
1542
1649
1761
1820
196
2056
2143
2224
2315
2465
255
2649
2714
2858
2939
3030
3111
3211
3319
3422
3521
3659
3728
3850
3919
4029
4129
429
4343
443
4541
4635
473
4851
4923
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences127
matches
0"being pulled"
1"was bloated"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs266
matches
0"were weeping"
1"were crawling"
2"was churning"
3"were erupting"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1536
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"loamy, moss-covered earth"
adverbCount58
adverbRatio0.037760416666666664
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.014973958333333334
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean12.15
std6.93
cv0.57
sampleLengths
020
123
211
312
418
58
617
719
812
95
1014
1116
1210
1326
1410
1519
169
174
1825
1911
206
2114
229
2326
2411
2519
2610
274
2816
297
3012
315
3213
3317
347
3512
366
3712
3819
3929
404
4116
428
4326
4418
4514
4626
472
4811
498
43.6073% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3150684931506849
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners46
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags24
fancyCount21
fancyTags
0"a voice whispered, sounding like dry leaves skittering over stone (whisper, sound like skitter)"
1"Aurora muttered, pushing her straight black hair back from her damp forehead (mutter, push)"
2"Isolde corrected gently (correct gently)"
3"Nyx whispered, their voice vibrating in the hollows of Aurora's skull rather than her ears (whisper, vibrate)"
4"Aurora said, her pragmatic side wrestling down her awe (say, wrestle)"
5"Isolde agreed, her lavender eyes distant (agree, eye)"
6"Aurora warned, though she felt the pull herself (warn, feel)"
7"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
8"Isolde said, her truth-compulsion stripping the sugarcoating from her words (say, strip)"
9"Aurora said, her hand tightening on the hilt of the moonsilver dagger (say, tighten)"
10"Nyx corrected, drifting closer to the table (correct, drift)"
11"Isolde whispered, looking revolted (whisper, looking revolted)"
12"Nyx suggested, their violet eyes narrowing as they scanned the horizon (suggest, narrow scan)"
13"a voice boomed, wet and gurgling (boom)"
14"she called out, channeling every ounce of the cool-headed confidence she used when dealing with drunk patrons at Silas's bar back in London (call out, channel use deal back in)"
15"the creature gurgled, drifting closer (gurgle, drift)"
16"the Shade whispered, the sound like a knife scraping bone (whisper, scrape)"
17"the seer said, her lavender eyes glowing (say, glow)"
18"Aurora commanded (command)"
19"Aurora wheezed, wiping slime from her boot (wheeze, wipe)"
83.9079%